Writing storylines - Give us your attempt!

Matt S.

Here's mine.

STORYLINE STARTS ON HEAT (a'la Coallition of Courage, because Heat needs something).

[i:post_uid0]Steven Richards w/ Victoria vs. Lance Storm w/ Goldust (Apparently, there was a house show where Trish kissed Lance.)[/i:post_uid0]

The match looks like Lance Storms, when after a missile dropkick, he covers Richards. Victoria stomps on Lance to break the pinfall. The referee calls for the DQ, and Victoria continues the assault. Richards is back up, and superkicks Goldust down. Trish's music hits, and she runs down to make the save. Victoria and Richards retreat, and Lance, Trish, and Goldust stand tall in the ring (though Lance is pretty short compared to people, so they stand moderately)

NEXT RAW SHOW:

6 Man Intergender Tag Match:

[i:post_uid0]Lance Storm, Goldust and Trish Stratus vs. Steven Richards, Test, and Victoria.[/i:post_uid0]

The match is dominated by Storm, Stratus, and Goldust. Trish goes to hit Richards with the Stratusfaction, but Victoria hangs up Trish on the rope. Richards tags to Test, who hits the Big Boot on Trish to pick up the 1-2-3 victory.

FOLLOWING HEAT:

[i:post_uid0]Interview with Lance Storm[/i:post_uid0]

First of all, clips of Victoria attacking Lance on Heat and Test hitting Trish with the Big Boot on Raw are shown to him, and he's asked how they are feeling about it. He replies that losing doesn't bother him too much - it happens. What does bother him is when he loses when he could have won things. Test, Victoria, Steven Richards aren't going to see the last of Lance.

HEAT MAIN EVENT:
World Tag Team Championship:
[i:post_uid0]La Resistance vs. Goldust and Lance Storm[/i:post_uid0]

La Resistance get the upper hand, until Lance begins to fight back. Test runs down, and goes to hit Lance with the Big Boot, but hits Grenier instead. Goldust takes out Test, as Lance covers Grenier to become the World Tag Team Champions. Test is left on the outside as Lance celebrates enthusiastically with Goldust.

FOLLOWING RAW:

Clips of the Tag Team victory are shown. We are seen with Test, being interviewed by Terri. Terri asks why he, Richards and Victoria feel the need to go and attack the likes of Storm and Goldust. Test says that he's fed up of seeing Storm running around with that freak acting like an a*shole, because bottom line, Storm is boring. Not boring like standing in a queue for one hour, more a week long discussion if Captain Luke or Captain Picard was better. If Lance can't learn to sit out of the limelight and let Test do his thing, then it will all continue. Richards comes into shot, and says that he has an idea to Test. The two exit.

Later on Raw:
[i:post_uid0]Trish Stratus vs. Victoria (w/ Steven Richards)[/i:post_uid0]

Victoria wins after Richards hits Trish with a superkick. Storm and Goldust comes out to make the save, but Test hits Goldust with the pumphandle slam, and Lance with a vile powerbomb. The three beat away on Trish, Storm and Goldust, but Austins music hits. He makes his way out to the ring, and the three heels slide out of the ring. Austin announces that if they're going to keep up with their campaign, then he has two (insert appropriate Pay-Per-View here) matches to make. First of all, a triple threat womens championship match - Molly Holly vs. Trish vs. Victoria, and a tag team match for the World Tag Team championship - Richards and Test vs. Lance Storm and Goldust. If Test or Richards attack Storm and Goldust, then they lose their title shot.

ON RAW ONE WEEK LATER:
NON-TITLE MATCH
Lance Storm and Goldust (w/Trish Stratus) vs. Rodney Mack and Mark Henry (w/Theodore Long)

Mack and Henry win after Test and Richards pull the ref out of the ring when Goldust has the cover and potential win ready. Austin comes out, yelling, but Richards replies that they didn't attack Storm or Goldust. Meanwhile, Victoria comes through the crowd, and hits Storm with a chair. Mack covers, cover gets three. Trish comes in and hits Victoria with the Stratusfaction. Storm and Goldust approach Test and Richards, they back off.

PAY PER VIEW:

Molly vs. Trish vs. Victoria

Trish hits the Stratusfaction on Victoria, Molly shoves her out of the ring, and pins Victoria, winning the match. Possibility of fued going another month.

Richards and Test vs. Storm and Goldust

Test hits the pumphandle slam on Goldust. Lance Storm breaks the cover at 2. Richards attacks him from behind, and Test gets in position for the Big Boot. Test sprints at Storm, and runs straight into a superkick. Goldust clotheslines Richards down. Cover gets 3. Goldust and Storm retain and celebrate.

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Matt S.

I was going to post yesterday why I booked things where they were, but I couldn't get on yesterday, so it'll have to be today.

First of all, if Lance doesn't get a major push with this gimmick, they may as well change his name to "I'll never get over". Test - well, I'd rather have him in a tag team and see half as much of his wrestling skills than in a full singles match. Richards could go well with Test, and of course there is the thing with Victoria. Lance and Goldust could make a good tag team, and of course at a house show Trish kissed Lance, making a link there.

In the one storyline here, two fueds and matches have been set up - Storm and Goldust vs. Test and Richards, and Victoria vs. Trish. The tag team should be a title match, because the two teams could end up being strong in my opinion.

I booked a title change on Heat so people will tune in thinking "Maybe another upset will happen tonight". That's what Heat needs - unpredictability.

I didn't drop Molly from the title, because I personally think she's the best for the title at this current moment. I might even consider a Molly face turn in the future, setting up Molly vs. Victoria for a title match, Molly goes for the Molly-Go-Round, but Victoria catches her on her shoulders and reverses into a powerbomb for the victory.

It might also show that Lance is annoying the heels, running around, trying not to be boring, setting up plenty of potential fueds in the future.

Any thoughts on it?

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joebrian

It was okay, a few problems...

Most of these people are not over, I can see Lance getting over in awhile, but Test is just a bore and this angle just seems like him doing his usual shtick. I also don't like Richards or Trish so maybe its me.

Storm and Goldust taking the titles and then La Resistance is kind of pushed in the background. The title change is too quick and I can't ever imagine Test and Richards ever having a shot at winning.

But as a writer at least you are thinking ahead.

Narc

I don't think having Lance Storm act like an idiot, is gonna get him over!!!!! He should be taking over Evolution, as the new leader!!!! I remember when he formed Team Canada in WCW.....that was AMAZING....maybe its only me, but I think Storm would look amazing with the World title around his chest....he would be a good champion....... ::baa::