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    Fight Night September 7th Promo Discussion Thread

    Discuss the promos here.Be kind, rewind, and give some constructive criticism. Unless it's Shake. Then just let him know that his promo was fucking balls.

    Feel free to talk shit about Manchester United in here as well.

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    Re: Fight Night September 7th Promo Discussion Thread

    Extension please, Called in to work OT this whole weekend

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    Re: Fight Night September 7th Promo Discussion Thread

    Can I get an extension please?

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    Re: Fight Night September 7th Promo Discussion Thread

    I may need an extension as well.

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    Re: Fight Night September 7th Promo Discussion Thread

    All have been granted.

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    "I'm not an Avenger. I'm not Thor. Or Cap. Or Peter. I'm just a kid in a mask. Doing the best I can. But I'll never give up on the world. Or this city. Or anyone that needs me. I'm Miles Morales. And I'm Spider-Man."





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    Re: Fight Night September 7th Promo Discussion Thread

    This also means that James Hughes, Mike Parr, Starr, Lord Dogg, Bell Connelly and XYZ have extensions as well.

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    Re: Fight Night September 7th Promo Discussion Thread

    Ext plz

    Spoiler:


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    Re: Fight Night September 7th Promo Discussion Thread

    So I got my RP up for this week. I really hope at least someone out there is enjoying what I'm doing with "The Great I Am" character. I know sometimes pieces of the puzzle are left out, but that's my way of creating a story and inviting people to invest in the journey. A little here and there every week is my goal. If you go back to before BIB, this thing has come a long way. And that's what, 3 or 4 shows now?

    I've really been enjoying this thing. Even if not everyone really understands the character. One thing I really wanted to do this week was to use "The Conjuring" to build Kendrick up. If you know anything about that Megadeth song, you know it's literal instructions for a hex. It's blatant witchcraft. But you could also twist it from a religious perspective to a power thing. Kendrick can be perceived as a religious character, but he's not. He thrives on power. Sure, he has a messiah complex, but he doesn't think he's Jesus. He wants control over others and recognition in power. That song is perfect for it. So I really hope that crosses over to the readers.

    I also decided to take a little from CM Punk and the Straight Edge Society. It's subtle, but the influence comes from when Punk would shave his followers' heads and grow out his own hair to be different. The Disciples all now wear a white mask while Kendrick wears the black mask to set himself apart. Very small detail, but that's what I love doing.

    Just a little peak behind the imaginary curtain that probably none of you cared about. Lol


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    Re: Fight Night September 7th Promo Discussion Thread

    Ah shit this deadline is tonight isn't it. Ugh...guess I'll throw something together. Who's idea was it to make it opening day of the NFL season?

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    Re: Fight Night September 7th Promo Discussion Thread

    XYZ: One of the best parts of this promo is the font choice. The comic sans font is perfect for any promo focusing on innocence, and particularly childhood. It's one I've used myself before, and it's just a small perfect touch that usually goes unappreciated. So I'm not letting it go unappreciated for you. One of my favorite things about the XYZ character, is while a lot of people focus their characters on their strengths...I think XYZ's biggest focuses are his weaknesses, his inner struggles...and yet that makes him stronger than anyone else on the roster.

    I loved the backstory promo this week too, because it tells so much of how XYZ is what he is today.

    The theme with the star and knowing where to go is a simple one but powerful. Motivational even, not only for this setting but really any.

    Really love this character. Mostly because of how real he is. He's not some overdramatized King character, but he's a real human being with a very real personality. And it takes such strong writing to pull that off successfully.

    Good work and keep it up.

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    Re: Fight Night September 7th Promo Discussion Thread

    XYZ: That was an emotionally promo that was sad and strong all at once the way you spoke is real the story makes you feel for him.

    Sully: Loved this promo it came across well love the arrogance in his voice love the setting well written.

    The Elite: Good short promo looking foward to more from you.

    Spoiler:


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    Re: Fight Night September 7th Promo Discussion Thread

    Sorry if my promo seems rushed. Had to finish it on my phone and code on it too.

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    Re: Fight Night September 7th Promo Discussion Thread

    Sorry eyes and mods. My promo was shit. Coding on my phone took forever and I'll try to budget time a bit better next show

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    Re: Fight Night September 7th Promo Discussion Thread

    Good promos allarounfd

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