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    5 January 2018 - WS3T Day 3 Promo Discussion Thread

    were baaaaaaaaaack~ everyone, please use any excess spirit of giving accumulated over the holiday period to give the gift of reviews to your fellow RPers!

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    Re: 5 January 2018 - WS3T Day 3 Promo Discussion Thread

    So I did things a bit differently last time but really didn't get any feedback, so I have no idea really how it went over...buy I won the match, soooo...lol

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    Re: 5 January 2018 - WS3T Day 3 Promo Discussion Thread

    Quote Originally Posted by 1000Deaths View Post
    So I did things a bit differently last time but really didn't get any feedback, so I have no idea really how it went over...buy I won the match, soooo...lol
    I don't know if I even remember anything about it. Or who it was against.




    Just kidding, I did give a critique. .. maybe not a huge one for yours other than to say good job and that you changed things up a little by taking someone's advice... Kai or Wolf, I can't remember

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    Re: 5 January 2018 - WS3T Day 3 Promo Discussion Thread

    Quote Originally Posted by 1000Deaths View Post
    So I did things a bit differently last time but really didn't get any feedback, so I have no idea really how it went over...buy I won the match, soooo...lol
    For what its worth, I enjoyed it.

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    Re: 5 January 2018 - WS3T Day 3 Promo Discussion Thread

    My only thing with critiquing Deaths promos is I have known him for years from another forum and I am use to his writing style and one of his main characters there was similar- nothing wrong with that. Have known Tommy and Graves for a long time too, but they did have other characters that were way different and wrote different for each

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    Re: 5 January 2018 - WS3T Day 3 Promo Discussion Thread

    Writers block is a bitch, I will try and get a promo in before the deadline but I don't think it will be fine as my previous works were.

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    Re: 5 January 2018 - WS3T Day 3 Promo Discussion Thread

    I kinda thought time ran out at the end of last night, but now I'm not so sure.

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    Re: 5 January 2018 - WS3T Day 3 Promo Discussion Thread

    You've got 4 hours and around 43 minutes.


    "The Golden One" Devin Golden

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    Re: 5 January 2018 - WS3T Day 3 Promo Discussion Thread

    Good to know, I posted that at 11:45 my time lol, so I hope I just made it.

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    Re: 5 January 2018 - WS3T Day 3 Promo Discussion Thread

    There's still an hour and 50 mins til deadline is up


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    Re: 5 January 2018 - WS3T Day 3 Promo Discussion Thread

    Wonderful lol, it was sort of last second and I really didn't have a lot going on idea wise, but it actually continued to expound upon the story and furtherly delved into things. I actually just freestyled most of it as I went.

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    Re: 5 January 2018 - WS3T Day 3 Promo Discussion Thread

    I really loved most of the promo being from Freds perspective. .. really I did. It worked great along with Penny and Randalls interactions. I am not kidding, I really loved it. And Norman- can't wait to see what happens with him. Will he start talking too? Will he just remain silent? I can't wait to see.

    Ty- have always liked Sullys writing since way back in the day and this one did not disappoint. Was very well written, flowed well. The interaction between Dave and Ty worked very well. Maybe Dave might have talked a bit too much in this one.... but it did help with character development for Ty .

    Zako- again, another good promo but as I stated above, it's kind of hard for me to critique your stuff all that great. I think it's better coming from someone who is not familar with your style. But like I said, it's a really good promo. Talked about your match, talked about last week. And making people bleed and all is cool, not sure about the licking someone else's blood though. Yeah it makes him seem more sinister and scary... but, and I know this is just role playing, it's unsanitary , can spread disease.

    Deceptoon... as always OMB, great writing. Really good promo. Does have grammar issues though throughout the promo

    Don't have time to really do anymore. Had a pipe burst from all this freezing weather... am guessing it finally thawed out this morning. But all I had to do was shut a valve off going to the ice maker/fridge. Whoever ran that copper pipe in the attic failed to put insulation on it.... and we never uded the ice maker or used the water from the fridge so it's no big deal as far as that. Have sheet rock to possible repair though due to it getting wet, and tiles. Don't really know until it dries.
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    Re: 5 January 2018 - WS3T Day 3 Promo Discussion Thread

    Lol I'm almost sure there's gonna be fan signs about the blood this week. I kind of draw inspiration from that from Judas Mesias years ago in TNA, glass and blood drinking and biting were a solid part of his in ring stuff, plus I'm pretty sure I've seen Muertes do it.

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    Re: 5 January 2018 - WS3T Day 3 Promo Discussion Thread

    Norman will be the Zako to Fred's Miss De La Muerta.

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    Re: 5 January 2018 - WS3T Day 3 Promo Discussion Thread

    Lol I'm almost sure there's gonna be fan signs about the blood this week. I kind of draw inspiration from that from Judas Mesias years ago in TNA, glass and blood drinking and biting were a solid part of his in ring stuff, plus I'm pretty sure I've seen Muertes do it.
    Well... it is the same guy lol

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    Re: 5 January 2018 - WS3T Day 3 Promo Discussion Thread

    Quote Originally Posted by ONAMStar View Post
    Well... it is the same guy lol
    I wasn't even thinking of that when I wrote it lol, he gained a lot since then.

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    Re: 5 January 2018 - WS3T Day 3 Promo Discussion Thread

    Quote Originally Posted by ONAMStar View Post
    Well... it is the same guy lol
    Lol

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    Re: 5 January 2018 - WS3T Day 3 Promo Discussion Thread

    Quote Originally Posted by OMB View Post
    Lol
    Yeah, I wanted to point it out too but Star beat us too it.

    He even did some time in the Wrestling Society X that was on MTV long ago... I think when they still played videos.

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    Re: 5 January 2018 - WS3T Day 3 Promo Discussion Thread

    Quote Originally Posted by OMB View Post
    Lol
    Yeah, I wanted to point it out too but Star beat us too it.

    He even did some time in the Wrestling Society X that was on MTV long ago... I think when they still played videos.

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    Re: 5 January 2018 - WS3T Day 3 Promo Discussion Thread

    So what's the information on the show looking like?

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