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    Fight Night 20 October Promo Discussion Thread

    Discuss promos here. Please take the time to review each others work! Protip: don't mention Luke Harper!

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    Re: Fight Night 20 October Promo Discussion Thread

    You guys know who is great? Luke Harper.

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    Re: Fight Night 20 October Promo Discussion Thread

    Quote Originally Posted by Sully View Post
    You guys know who is great? Luke Harper.

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    Re: Fight Night 20 October Promo Discussion Thread

    You guys know who is great? KAIZEN.

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    Re: Fight Night 20 October Promo Discussion Thread

    You know who reminds me of Brodie Lee? Luke Harper.

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    Re: Fight Night 20 October Promo Discussion Thread

    Quote Originally Posted by hanz gruber View Post
    You know who reminds me of Brodie Lee? Luke Harper.
    You know what ya ya ya

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    Re: Fight Night 20 October Promo Discussion Thread

    who is luke harper





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    Re: Fight Night 20 October Promo Discussion Thread

    Quote Originally Posted by Sully View Post
    You guys know who is great? Luke Harper.
    The most amazing thing about this recent conversation is that I've learned AON is even more of a waste of space than I thought he was previously

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    Re: Fight Night 20 October Promo Discussion Thread

    .... I have mastered coloring and formatting on the phone.

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    Re: Fight Night 20 October Promo Discussion Thread

    Hopefully can get my promo done tomorrow or next night. Sitting at a computer all day, just can not get my head into writing the promo

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    Re: Fight Night 20 October Promo Discussion Thread

    Quote Originally Posted by 1000Deaths View Post
    .... I have mastered coloring and formatting on the phone.
    Formatting is off SB

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    Re: Fight Night 20 October Promo Discussion Thread

    Then how the hell should actions be formatted? Lol from checking the last show, different people typed them up differently lol.

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    Re: Fight Night 20 October Promo Discussion Thread

    Nothing terribly wrong with the formatting at all. I wouldn't say you've mastered it, but you've certainly improved leaps and bounds. Good work.

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    Re: Fight Night 20 October Promo Discussion Thread

    Quote Originally Posted by Just Plain Sayer View Post
    Nothing terribly wrong with the formatting at all. I wouldn't say you've mastered it, but you've certainly improved leaps and bounds. Good work.
    Absolutely, thank you. I guess I'd more say I've figured out the ins and outs of it, like putting back a parenthese when you remove it on accident, therefore an entire line isn't italicized or bolded lol.

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    Re: Fight Night 20 October Promo Discussion Thread

    Quote Originally Posted by 1000Deaths View Post
    Then how the hell should actions be formatted? Lol from checking the last show, different people typed them up differently lol.
    Not saying the formatting of actions and the talking is off- it's just some of the body of two paragraphs, the text is a bit off formatting wise- big spaces between words- that's what I mean. So relax dude lol.
    Last edited by hanz gruber; 10-18-2017 at 10:37 PM.

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    Re: Fight Night 20 October Promo Discussion Thread

    How long would we say the average promo takes? I'm finding for some reason it's taking me the better part of 2 or 3 hours now lol, where as I could hammer out things years ago within 15 or 20 or less all in one long continuos breath lol. Maybe it's just not as easy for me to get into hee mindset, but I've absolutely gotta cut it way down lol.

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    Re: Fight Night 20 October Promo Discussion Thread

    Might as well call this the luke harper appercation thread

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    Re: Fight Night 20 October Promo Discussion Thread

    Quote Originally Posted by OMB View Post
    Might as well call this the luke harper appercation thread
    I actually don't get the Luke Harper thing. I don't watch WWE. Why are people so sensitive about it?

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    Re: Fight Night 20 October Promo Discussion Thread

    Quote Originally Posted by 1000Deaths View Post
    How long would we say the average promo takes? I'm finding for some reason it's taking me the better part of 2 or 3 hours now lol, where as I could hammer out things years ago within 15 or 20 or less all in one long continuos breath lol. Maybe it's just not as easy for me to get into hee mindset, but I've absolutely gotta cut it way down lol.
    A few things- you are doing it on a phone. it is not back and forth promoing- meaning you are not responding literally to the other persons promo here. You can not just 'phone' it in here, you have to do the best to win. At ewn not all efeds had you doing the formatting before you sent your promo in. You are a Lil more focused in your promos here than you were with a lot of your Ano Doom ( or Anal Doom as i liked to call him)promos
    Last edited by hanz gruber; 10-19-2017 at 03:17 PM.

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    Re: Fight Night 20 October Promo Discussion Thread

    Quote Originally Posted by Sully View Post
    I actually don't get the Luke Harper thing. I don't watch WWE. Why are people so sensitive about it?

    Idk, but I think I might have Luke Harper has Hanz Grubers fav wrestler.

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