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    Re: Fight Night August 25th Promo Discussion Thread

    Quote Originally Posted by hanz gruber View Post
    Yeah, gotta agree with the Graves Sinn promo I def would have asked a mod and SB (death as he is known here) for persmission or if it was cool. Graves asked permission to use one of my former efed wrestlers in on of his lromos- had no problem with that. But glad he asked.

    The promo, besides all that was not bad but not being color coded did take away from the promo.

    Same for Jon Snows character- really food promo but not being color coded takes away from it.
    Food lol, I ment good. Stupid auto correct

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    Re: Fight Night August 25th Promo Discussion Thread

    Quote Originally Posted by hanz gruber View Post
    Food lol, I ment good. Stupid auto correct
    Now you're making me hungry


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    Re: Fight Night August 25th Promo Discussion Thread

    Sin City Vultures: I do not remember the last time I was impressed with another promo like I was here. You started with the diary entry and it had me hooked you went to the suspense of the missing the last page reeled me in. I wanted to know where it leads and everything in the promo felt to place perfectly. This one promo made me feel these guys, I know where they are coming from and what are their aspirations. Great symbolism's with Vultures and Gods. I am looking for next week.

    Hanz: Ich habe gemerkt dass du kannst nicht sehr gut Deutsch sprechen aber du kannst Deutsch ehr benutzen hier in FWA und sich verbessern. I think you should read your promo after you finish it. The discourse should have been different for example in the last paragraph you said you were in Chicago and I feel like you should have started your promo stating it. I like the idea of you going to your opponents city and I feel like you could have explored on this so much more like walking the streets and pointing at everything shitty in Chicago.

    Zako: You should write in little pauses to LA Muertes speeches. It feels like she speaks non-stop without taking even a single breath. Pauses also help me as a reader to feel the words she spoke in the earlier paragraph. I am waiting for you to explore Zako's origin more. His past could be connected to someone in FWA that would lead to an amazing storyline

    Deception: IT was quite entertaining read. I like your style and that you sell your opponents. You put over Hanz in the beginning and that makes you look so much better for beating him. You two could get together and start a full blown blood feud. It would help both of you improve a lot imo.


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    Re: Fight Night August 25th Promo Discussion Thread

    Quote Originally Posted by Wolfs Rain View Post
    Sin City Vultures: I do not remember the last time I was impressed with another promo like I was here. You started with the diary entry and it had me hooked you went to the suspense of the missing the last page reeled me in. I wanted to know where it leads and everything in the promo felt to place perfectly. This one promo made me feel these guys, I know where they are coming from and what are their aspirations. Great symbolism's with Vultures and Gods. I am looking for next week.

    Hanz: Ich habe gemerkt dass du kannst nicht sehr gut Deutsch sprechen aber du kannst Deutsch ehr benutzen hier in FWA und sich verbessern. I think you should read your promo after you finish it. The discourse should have been different for example in the last paragraph you said you were in Chicago and I feel like you should have started your promo stating it. I like the idea of you going to your opponents city and I feel like you could have explored on this so much more like walking the streets and pointing at everything shitty in Chicago.

    Zako: You should write in little pauses to LA Muertes speeches. It feels like she speaks non-stop without taking even a single breath. Pauses also help me as a reader to feel the words she spoke in the earlier paragraph. I am waiting for you to explore Zako's origin more. His past could be connected to someone in FWA that would lead to an amazing storyline

    Deception: IT was quite entertaining read. I like your style and that you sell your opponents. You put over Hanz in the beginning and that makes you look so much better for beating him. You two could get together and start a full blown blood feud. It would help both of you improve a lot imo.
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    Re: Fight Night August 25th Promo Discussion Thread

    Quote Originally Posted by Wolfs Rain View Post
    Sin City Vultures: I do not remember the last time I was impressed with another promo like I was here. You started with the diary entry and it had me hooked you went to the suspense of the missing the last page reeled me in. I wanted to know where it leads and everything in the promo felt to place perfectly. This one promo made me feel these guys, I know where they are coming from and what are their aspirations. Great symbolism's with Vultures and Gods. I am looking for next week.

    Hanz: Ich habe gemerkt dass du kannst nicht sehr gut Deutsch sprechen aber du kannst Deutsch ehr benutzen hier in FWA und sich verbessern. I think you should read your promo after you finish it. The discourse should have been different for example in the last paragraph you said you were in Chicago and I feel like you should have started your promo stating it. I like the idea of you going to your opponents city and I feel like you could have explored on this so much more like walking the streets and pointing at everything shitty in Chicago.

    Zako: You should write in little pauses to LA Muertes speeches. It feels like she speaks non-stop without taking even a single breath. Pauses also help me as a reader to feel the words she spoke in the earlier paragraph. I am waiting for you to explore Zako's origin more. His past could be connected to someone in FWA that would lead to an amazing storyline

    Deception: IT was quite entertaining read. I like your style and that you sell your opponents. You put over Hanz in the beginning and that makes you look so much better for beating him. You two could get together and start a full blown blood feud. It would help both of you improve a lot imo.
    I know enough German to get around there and in Austria and have friends in both countries that we visit, they visit.. I don't get to use t all that much anymore- so it pretty much you don't use it, you lose it. So I just have him use very little German . Sentence structure does mess me up when I am writing in German, speaking in German .

    Agreed with what you said about the SCV promo- I can't wait for their promo next week also- they just keep getting better each week.
    As for Hanz being in Chicago- I did refer to him being there in the first paragraph

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    Re: Fight Night August 25th Promo Discussion Thread

    Yeah plus that was kind of short but I suppose it sums things up well enough lol.

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    Re: Fight Night August 25th Promo Discussion Thread

    Quote Originally Posted by 1000Deaths View Post
    Yeah plus that was kind of short but I suppose it sums things up well enough lol.
    Huh? Nicht verstehen sie.

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    What an I doing here with that post lol.

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