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    Carnal Contendership SUPERSHOW promo discussion thread

    What'cha got, rough boiz?


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    Couldn't wait to post my promo! Review for Review!
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    Re: Carnal Contendership SUPERSHOW promo discussion thread

    Cyros: I have to say, I think this is some of the best stuff that you have as Cryos. Drew may have a real threat to his championship reign.


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    Re: Carnal Contendership SUPERSHOW promo discussion thread

    This deadline is way too long. Hurry, hurry!
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    Re: Carnal Contendership SUPERSHOW promo discussion thread

    Id rather a longer deadline up to my fucking eyes

    should be be a cracking show

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    Re: Carnal Contendership SUPERSHOW promo discussion thread

    I'm not sure whether this is my best promo or my worst. But I'll gladly do R4R if anyone wants.

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    Re: Carnal Contendership SUPERSHOW promo discussion thread

    Cryos: You know, I don’t normally rate my opponent’s roleplay’s but I really enjoyed this one man. I think you really came out firing and I’m very glad because you made me step up my game tenfold. I think the story you told was very well written, you wrote it out wonderfully and everything flowed perfectly. You really stepped up man, and I look forward to seeing who wins this one because you really brought it.

    Gryphon: First off, good to see you back man – we have missed you! Your roleplay was a great return piece and very entertaining. Like a usual Gryphon promo, you were very charismatic, had great detail in your scene setting and you really came to win this match. It’s going to be very interesting to see what happens in this match but you really brought it man, great work and once again, welcome back!

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    Re: Carnal Contendership SUPERSHOW promo discussion thread

    dont you just hate having the cold

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    Re: Carnal Contendership SUPERSHOW promo discussion thread

    My promos will be up later tonight. They'd be up now but my work computer is being super lame and won't let me format anything.


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    Re: Carnal Contendership SUPERSHOW promo discussion thread

    save_us.ghost


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    Re: Carnal Contendership SUPERSHOW promo discussion thread

    i have graded some promos so far.

    Lucian Ace - 80

    Gabby - more than Lucian

    hashtag spoilers.


    Ill also do some review for reviews. you can review Quinn or Rondo, IDC.
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    Re: Carnal Contendership SUPERSHOW promo discussion thread

    Shake - I can honestly say that your promo for Rondo is some of the most amazing stuff that I have seen from you in recent memory. You really went for it and come out with something interesting and thoughtful.


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    Re: Carnal Contendership SUPERSHOW promo discussion thread

    Rondo: Man, this was one hell of a promo by you. You brought so much passion, so much heart, and so much determination that you can genuinely feel just how bad that Rondo wants this opportunity. Your dialog is some of the best that I have read in a long while and I genuinely mean that. This is a promo that could very well be promo of the year, in my humble opinion and BIB is shaping up to be amazing. Great work man, truly!

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    Re: Carnal Contendership SUPERSHOW promo discussion thread

    PAJ: You damn right there. If anyone deserves a shot, it's you. You tore at it and you explained why this match needs to be a win for you, you told why you did what you did! Ha. PAJ in The Movement is just showing how kickass the group actually is. Now the promo was nicely paced, didn't go too fast, didn't go too slow. Let's hope you can keep up pacing like that. Another thing is I very much find sympathy in the character even though he's heel. (Screw Rondo vying for sympathy ) Overall, great f'ing work.

    Ghost: Focused on the task at hand and that is destroying the Movement my man. You are definitely making this Movement vs. FWA angle top the damn nWo vs. WCW one. I damn well hope you and I can get to fight in a match on the finale of The Movement one day. Because this was fine and dandy work my boy. The one problem is that, for a PPV promo, it felt really short. I'm not sure if it was your intention to keep it short and sweet or not, but it's how it ended up. Either way, a great place to start building up this angle.

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    Re: Carnal Contendership SUPERSHOW promo discussion thread

    promo reviews tomorrow webslingers


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    Re: Carnal Contendership SUPERSHOW promo discussion thread

    Drew Stevenson: I really enjoyed your promo. I could almost feel the time ticking down on Cryos as the promo went on. You talked about the struggles of not only becoming Champion, but keeping it as well and related it directly to Cryos's current position. It almost felt like the promo Triple H cut when he was going to face Sheamus at Wrestlemania where he questioned if Sheamus was really ready and said he was once in the same position. This promo felt a lot like that one and I must say I'm going to be very interested to see who wins as well.

    Jason Gryphon: At first, I was thinking that this was going to be a development promo. But it was a beautifully done promo describing Gryphon's struggles to get past not only addicition, but back to the top of the business by winning the Carnal Contendership match. Not only that, but he likened all the members of AA to being survivors just like him and survival is what it takes to win that match. Great work.


    Ryan Rondo:
    This. Very much this. I thought that your promo was not only a pipebomb on the way things work behind the scenes, but it was striving to be different than everyone else's by not listing everyone involved in the match like most people in that position would do. You only talked about what mattered personally to you and that was a great move because it does make the promo stand out. You got to the heart of the matter and I liked that. Good job Shake.
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    Re: Carnal Contendership SUPERSHOW promo discussion thread

    sorry guys but this week and next is finals week in school for me and i totally forgot, ill have no time to promo. i know its embarrassing to no-show an important show like this but im too swamped right now to write anything non-academic. im going to post a short segment i wrote a long time ago which is related to what i probably wouldve said if i hadnt forgotten.

    my apologies again...

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    Re: Carnal Contendership SUPERSHOW promo discussion thread

    Just like last week, I'll do rev for rev. Promo is up.

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    Re: Carnal Contendership SUPERSHOW promo discussion thread

    Quote Originally Posted by KAIZEN View Post
    sorry guys but this week and next is finals week in school for me and i totally forgot, ill have no time to promo. i know its embarrassing to no-show an important show like this but im too swamped right now to write anything non-academic. im going to post a short segment i wrote a long time ago which is related to what i probably wouldve said if i hadnt forgotten.

    my apologies again...
    You are a great storyteller. If you did anything resembling your usual work, then you will be near the top.


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    Re: Carnal Contendership SUPERSHOW promo discussion thread

    Now that there's an actual DIVINE rp... please review Wolf, as harsh as possible ;-;

    Ryan Rondo: That promo was interesting. It came across as something that I'd see on TV, yet it oddly worked for FWA. It's weird. Normally promos like that just fall flat when it's done like a rp, but that one really worked. I think it was the amount of heart, not just character heart, but rp'er heart that was in it. Now, with that said, I have to be critical to the whole rp. A lot of it I liked, the dialogue and the setting. It's just that I think that some ideas could have been linked better or expanded upon. The idea you introduced with Rondo's name being brought up when RevEL is mentioned, that was an interesting thought, but you just left it at that. I thought you could have expanded way more on that, and built up why Rondo can really be a good world champion (since that seemed to be the whole 'backstage issue' with Rondo anyway). I think that would have to be the one thing I'd have to bring up from a rp I thought was very strong.
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