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    Fight Night/SMASH promo discussion thread 07/11/14

    Discuss promos here. I'll try and be more active in reviewing RPs.

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    My interwebs is down til next week so I may not get a rp in. I will try my best though, it would hav to be emailed.


    Edit: just saw we have a lot more time, I should be good.


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    Re: Fight Night/SMASH promo discussion thread 07/11/14

    The promo deadline has changed. Everyone note you have 24 hours less than I originally assigned. This was a mistake. I apologize.

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    Re: Fight Night/SMASH promo discussion thread 07/11/14

    Everyone remember the promo deadline is Wednesday midnight Pacific time/Thursday 3 a.m. Eastern time. No one be late.

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    Re: Fight Night/SMASH promo discussion thread 07/11/14

    I can only get it in a few hours after due to limited internet opportunities (say around 1pm my time). I dont mind if it doesnt count ill still post.


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    Re: Fight Night/SMASH promo discussion thread 07/11/14

    Ryan Hall: You never cease to amaze me when you put out promos like this. This is seriously some of the best work that you have put out in recent week. I guess if never hurts when you have to step up your game and face someone like Gabby. Your alliteration in your promo is without a doubt some of the best that this company has to offer and when you make Hall speak I cannot help but hear this dark ominous voice. I am nervous as hell about going up against you one of one. I'm not sure if this is what you were going for but it seems like Hall is ordering people to remember his legacy. I think its a good place to go into for our match.
    Last edited by JasonGryphon; 07-09-2014 at 09:06 PM.


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    Re: Fight Night/SMASH promo discussion thread 07/11/14

    Jason: First off had fun proming against you this week was quite enjoyable. Let's see I figured you were going to mention the tale of the garden of eden. Everything looks good and I have to say the future is looking good for FWA because I and others even though we hate to admit we are no longer in our late teens and getting close to thirty. Only advice I can give you comes from well one of my first mentors for efeding. i am going to paraphrase as I lost the message a while ago. keep working a way because you got the details part done just keep expanding on that. Without question you will be on the top of the mountain in a short amount of time with the world title.
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    Re: Fight Night/SMASH promo discussion thread 07/11/14

    I'm really sorry for posting my promo almost 3 hours after the deadline, it was completely my fault. I hope you will still count the promo even though it was late, again sorry.


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    Re: Fight Night/SMASH promo discussion thread 07/11/14

    Quote Originally Posted by The Mist View Post
    I'm really sorry for posting my promo almost 3 hours after the deadline, it was completely my fault. I hope you will still count the promo even though it was late, again sorry.
    Did Michaud and Toner even get their's in? I don't think there were any extensions.

    Wow that's ironic. Everyone else no-shows and I get mine in on time. Twilight Zone shit right there.

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    Re: Fight Night/SMASH promo discussion thread 07/11/14

    Ryan Hall: One of my favourite parts of e-fedding is actually reading opponents promos and seeing what aspects of my character(s) they've focused upon, and I really enjoyed this promo for this aspect. After eight years of writing with Gabrielle off and on this stuck out as a different approach to going after Gabby. Didn't focus on her whorishness but took a shot at it, and took a different approach to the whole 'Goddess' dynamic than I can remember being done with the Titan analogy. I really enjoyed every aspect of this promo though, with this match and 2 former World Champs going at it and the new era in the FWA the setting and theme throughout it was very fitting. I liked the throwback to the Inferno of old burning down the house and clearly Ryans ego hasn't taken a hit at all after losing the FWA Title. I never like too point out any negatives in opponents promos...but this one I really cant see any negatives. It was another great Ryan Hall promo full of depth, meaning, wordplay and just beautifully written. Great work Ryan.


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    Re: Fight Night/SMASH promo discussion thread 07/11/14

    Jason Gryphon: A good promo from you this week. The beginning was a little cheesy but it fit perfectly Gryphon's character and his relationship with his followers. You dove right in to the storyline with Hall and elaborated just enough to where it wasn't too much and did a good job of transitioning from our current storyline and the events of last week and into your current match with Stu. I liked the comparisons of Hall and Stu and you did an interesting way of relating St. Clair to your current feud and like I said... you didn't take it too far with focusing on that which is good. You talked Stu up and then took him down piece by piece. Your dialogue was very solid and the Gryphonism setting was good but as I said it came off a little cheesy to me but that's just the difference in our styles. Everyone knows I am deep and dark and Gryphon is bright and shining. Solid work.

    Gabrielle: First thoughts as always when I read your work is Awesome opening for this promo. As always you do a great job of setting up the promo and the opening description was flawless and beautiful as always. From the sexy description of Gabby to transitioning to the innocent and cute world of little Carmella. You wasted no time in diving into the change that has happened in the FWA and how it has left Ryan Hall out in the cold. Your dialogue was great as always and is really the driving point of this promo. It's vintage Gabrielle, you set up the setting perfectly and then systematically destroy your opponents in a very methodical pace. If I could find any fault (and it's hardly even a fault 'cause as I said, this promo is driven by the dialogue) it's you didn't do enough with your setting. It's like Gabby just took a pause in her personal life to shoot out a monologue but when the dialogue is that good it doesn't really matter. Great work as always from you.

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    Re: Fight Night/SMASH promo discussion thread 07/11/14

    No i did not, as anyone i have on fb knows i launched a PR company this week and it took up all of my free time. I will be good to go to destroy sullivan at the ppv though just gotta manage my time better. I checked at 11:30 last night and saw toner didnt promo so i didnt bother

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    Re: Fight Night/SMASH promo discussion thread 07/11/14

    Quote Originally Posted by The Mac View Post
    No i did not, as anyone i have on fb knows i launched a PR company this week and it took up all of my free time. I will be good to go to destroy sullivan at the ppv though just gotta manage my time better. I checked at 11:30 last night and saw toner didnt promo so i didnt bother
    What if Toner checked at 11:30 too, saw you didn't promo, and decide not to bother? o.0


    Dave Sullivan: Haha, we will see. I was kinda half-assing things, but I think at the pay per view I'm actually going to really try. Not that I'd need to if I wanted to beat you.
    Last edited by Sully; 07-10-2014 at 10:31 PM.

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    Re: Fight Night/SMASH promo discussion thread 07/11/14

    Beatrixx Black: I've probably said it before but Beatrixx has quickly become one of my favourite characters in the FWA. You excel in giving her, her own unique voice. Its alot like Saddle Sally or Duke Drazin in that the writing style/voice stands out from everyone else in the FWA so its fitting that Beatrixx and Sally are squaring off so often. Its definitely a Beatrixx promo every time out. This one is no different, she's so crass, so bitchy but not in that overly arrogant cliche way, she's just Beatrixx.


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    Re: Fight Night/SMASH promo discussion thread 07/11/14

    Sorry guys, I just, today, managed to get some net time and I apologise. I sent in a segment that was going to be much like my promo albeit not a full promo.


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