Discuss Promos Here. Please do not ask for reviews without reviewing other people's work. Promos will be due Tuesday June 24th at midnight Pacific time, which is 3am Wednesday morning Eastern time. No extensions will be granted outside an extreme emergency. Now have at it!
Beatrixx Black: I really enjoy this character, and she's come at the right time breathing some new life into the Women's division which was looking rather bleak not that long ago. She sort of makes me think of Paige in that she breaks the mold of traditional women in wrestling (difference of course being Beatrixx actually comes across as an anti Diva) . Its definitely a character that you understand how to write and have found her "voice". You've quickly become one of the writers who I look forward to reading each week.
Credit to Comeback Kid for the GFX
Sorry I couldn't put anything more out. Been busy this week but its not an excuse.
Deadline isnt for quite a few hours tommy
Nvm thought u thought the deadline passed....carry on
beatrixx: Wish you were around on the old FWA would have made things a lot more interesting, Great promo which sticks out more so because of the fact most fwa girl rpers are very "girly-girl" type
Sent my promo to TGO in a PM. I am still stuck doing this on my phone and can't do any coding or shit. I have been busy also and have a shorter than usual promo.
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~★~ THE KING OF KINGS ~★~
Spoiler:
@Maxxy - What a major assh*le, not Jethro but Todd Salum. This was a short promo, it seemed a bit off to me but while I still liked it, it seemed somewhat unlike you, no disrespect intended.
[I WIN]
Sorry for not posting the Saddle Sally rp I had a hell of a day and didn't have time to finish it.
Saddle Sally 3x FWA Womens Champion
2013 & 2014 FWA Women Wrestler of the Year
The Semi-Published Works of iMatt
"An Affair of the Youth" feature film production journalElsa, The Great (Frozen fanfic)
Walt County
I was told not asked that my match was storyline so I did not no show. Just clarifying. If I knew Stevie was gonna promo I would thrown one out for the hell of it too.
Shiiiiit. I fell asleep. I had half of it written, and then I went and uh, did something. And after I fell asleep. I'm going to just do it anyway, I won't get credit for it but it'll be better than another no show.
Edit: On second thought I'm going to save this promo for another show. I like the direction I'm taking it, don't want to waste it. I'm just going to write up some shoot or something on Mac real quick and that'll be it.
Last edited by Sulley; 06-25-2014 at 04:51 AM.
It's cool Ryan, I knew that it was angled-I just believe in rping whether it's angled or not.
Just a personal preference of mine.
Sorry for not posting this time. I had to catch up at work which left me no free time. I'm sorry all and will do better going forward
It happens. I had a hell of a day and didn't have time to post the Saddle Sally rp and I made the freakin' deadline. We just gotta all make sure we regroup and do better next week.Originally Posted by Eyesnsane
Saddle Sally 3x FWA Womens Champion
2013 & 2014 FWA Women Wrestler of the Year
The Semi-Published Works of iMatt
"An Affair of the Youth" feature film production journalElsa, The Great (Frozen fanfic)
Walt County
Eyensane has always been one of my favorite characters, I hope he finds his mojo soon because he is waaaaaay to good to lose to a promo like THIS:
Eyes, if you had logged in 5 minutes before deadline you could have beaten that simply by sitting your bare ass on the keyboard and farting. I hope to see the return of the YOUNG LION I know and love.
No worries, I' ll be back on track, I'm all caught up now I have some ideas moving on I think I'm going to have fun with these two. Oh my hats off to whoever did Ted's taunting the crowd and such in that last match, from what I read he's coming across how he should, I think.
Oh this was not the go home show was it?
No, we have 1 more show after this then RWB
I feel overlooked
Ask of me, and I shall give thee the heathen for thine inheritance, and for thy possession, the ends of the earth. Thou shalt break them with a rod of iron. Thou shalt dash them in pieces, like a potters vessel. Be wise now, therefore ye kings. Be admonished ye judges of the earth. Serve the lord with fear, and rejoice with trembling.
Psalm 2:8
The Mist's promo was really funny. Thoroughly enjoyed that read.
Exactly what I was thinking... Well not really but close enough. I am assuming he forgot about you and TGO. That or he's saying a keyboard fart is better than Goldie and Lucy-chin's promos averaged together. In which case... That better be a helluva fart.
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