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    Top Five Talents - April 8th 2009 Edition

    05. Dmac [7.3]

    Dmac continued his strong start in CWA by racking up another victory. With form like this, it wont be long before he starts to become a challenge to the CWA World Heavyweight Championship.

    04. Shadow Equinox [7.4]

    Shadow Equinox made his CWA debut in impressive fashion before the Pay Per View. He did everything he could but in the end, it just wasent enough.

    03. Roberto [7.6]

    An unfamiliar position for the former CWA Heavyweight Champion is followed by a drop down the rankings. Roberto has been super impressive since debuting in CWA, tonight seemed to be his off night as he not only suffered his first loss, he also lost his prized possesion.

    02. Joey Nicholas [7.8]

    The CWA Lightweight Champion bounced back from his loss to Rich Stone to retain his title. Nicholas had been under a lot of pressure against an unknown in Toronto, but he has not only survived it, he has come through stronger.

    01. The Ultimate Pain [8.2]

    The Ultimate Pain put the ultimate pressure on himself before In Exile and it paid off in a big way. Pain risked his career inside the Cage, but it only seemed to spur him on as he finally became the CWA World Heavyweight Champion.


    Scores Breakdown:

    Name: Originality, Relevance, Scene Setting, Spelling/Grammar, Overall Quality: Total.

    The Ultimate Pain: 8, 8, 9, 8, 8: 8.2
    Roberto: 9, 5, 8, 8, 8: 7.6

    Shadow Equinox: 8, 6, 7, 9, 7: 7.4
    Joey Nicholas: 9, 8, 8, 6, 8: 7.8

    Dmac: 8.5, 8, 7.5, 5, 7.5: 7.3
    Rich Stone: 7.5, 8, 7, 6.5, 7: 7.0

    The Future: 7, 7, 7, 8, 7: 7.0
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    Re: Top Five Talents - April 8th 2009 Edition

    I can't quite work out how I got a higher score for this one that I did for the last promo because the last promo was better.
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    Re: Top Five Talents - April 8th 2009 Edition

    Stupid spelling and grammar I actually could have won with that promo



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    Re: Top Five Talents - April 8th 2009 Edition

    Wait, I didn't notice, why the fuck have I got a 5 for spelling and grammar?

    It's pretty hard to do that using word, I want someone to point all of it for me.
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    Re: Top Five Talents - April 8th 2009 Edition

    Yeah i did really horrible for the spelling/grammar part as well







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    Re: Top Five Talents - April 8th 2009 Edition

    Well if you do it on MS Word it is pretty hard to do and I got a 5, I was some evidence.
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    Re: Top Five Talents - April 8th 2009 Edition

    Its not your spelling, its your grammar, specifically your really long sentences that just seem to keep going.
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    Re: Top Five Talents - April 8th 2009 Edition

    No one else has ever complained, again in bigger feds than this one.

    Plus, had there been anything wrong with it, word would have picked up on it and it didn't.
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    Re: Top Five Talents - April 8th 2009 Edition

    Some of your sentence structure is really poor Dmac.

    And actually, I think you might well have had some spelling errors if I remember correctly.

    MS Word doesn't pick everything up let me tell you.

    Anyways, post promos up imo Daren.

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    Re: Top Five Talents - April 8th 2009 Edition

    I'm sorry, but I'm not having that it was that bad to pick up a 5.

    Okay it doesn't pick up everything, fine, it wouldn't miss that much.
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    Re: Top Five Talents - April 8th 2009 Edition

    People who have perfect grammar are only getting 8's really, so there has to be some punishment I guess.

    You still got a great score anyways tbh.

    I think this new system encourages higher scores.

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    Re: Top Five Talents - April 8th 2009 Edition

    Punishment for effort?

    You saw how long it was so you can't say effort wasn't put in and I still don't see any problem with the 'long sentences' that other graders have never seen a problem with in the past either.
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    Re: Top Five Talents - April 8th 2009 Edition

    Not that this is my place to talk, but you won your match. It kind of offensive that you are complaining about beating someone. From what I see its like rubbing it in how much better your promo was then mine



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    Re: Top Five Talents - April 8th 2009 Edition

    Not at all, I'm complaining for reasons I have said, I'm a straight forward person and if that was the case I would say so.
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