My best

Suffy · 03-21-2007, 10:45 PM

tried arby's c4d tut, rate and hate.

Ajax · 03-22-2007, 05:54 AM

Not bad, but not good.
It looks like you used normal C4d's for the background instead of effect c4d's, so you might want to fix that next time. The blending is a bit off, and I don't like the way you lowered to opacity of the side bar. Nice attempt though.
I am harsh suffy. Harsh but fair.

Mikk · 03-22-2007, 06:23 AM

Text looks a little funny, could possibly do with a white outline.

Appart from that, i likes it

Suffy · 03-23-2007, 06:28 PM

No prob arby it's better you be harsh and tell me where to improve than tell me where I did right and how I'm improving.

03-22-2007, 05:54 AM	#2 (permalink)
Ajax The Elite Status: Offline Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: Sydney Posts: 1,235 vBookie Cash: 500 Rep Power: 6	Re: My best Not bad, but not good. It looks like you used normal C4d's for the background instead of effect c4d's, so you might want to fix that next time. The blending is a bit off, and I don't like the way you lowered to opacity of the side bar. Nice attempt though. I am harsh suffy. Harsh but fair.
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