Cut is good, The effects are lacking and look sloppy and messy. Work on your effects and add some text effects also. Needs alot of work but its still not bad... 4/10
The cut isn't the best, but not bad. Work on effects like mad. You need some others, and learn what works and what doesn't. Need to use your opacity control. I don't know if you have any custom text but here is a link for some