A song thats actually original

Killj0y

No I did not steal this one. Its pretty emo-ish which I don;'t like, but maybe you guys will. Its called "Out of Breath". I'm posting this to redeem myself so I hope I did a good job.

I'm running, I'm running
I'm running toward you
I'm running like hell
Just to see your face
One last time

Before I'm out of breath and collapse
And I am almost taken by death
Only you, only you can save me
Come over here and take me
To a better place
Where I can spend all of forever with you

But you don't
And I can feel the embrace of death
And its cold, cold breath

Come here and save me
I want you to embrace me

Before I'm out of breath and collapse
And I am almost taken by death
Only you, only you can save me
Come over here and take me
To a better place
Where I can spend all of forever with you

I need you now more than ever
I want to see you forever
I hope you remember
That I'm a collapsed heap on the sidewalk
And I need you now more than ever

Before I'm out of breath and collapse
And I am almost taken by death
Only you, only you can save me
Come over here and take me
To a better place
Where I can spend all of forever with you

With you
With you
With you

"We're going to keep doing what we do whether or not a single record is sold" - Tomas Kalnoky of Streetlight Manifesto

Blitzkrieg

Administrator

Hmm.. I don't know what to say. It looks decent but I can't grasp what it'd sound like and I don't know a whole lot about what you were going for. Either way, I like the effort that you put into it. You are redeemed.


And with that.. I'll write a quick rap. Keep in mind, I'm a studio gangsta.


Yo, Yo, I makes that scrilla cuz I hits tha streets hard like thrilla in manilla. I bake cakes on tha reg, call me Killa Vanilla. I'm a P-er-M-P, hittin' hoes, make 'em wet like Flipper, I got a hitting streak longer then The Yankee Clipper.

Tyler Durden

I wrote this a couple of days ago, you stealin' bastard!!

Griff0rd

TNA Moderator

once stolen always stolen... the little boy who cried wolf would be up shit creek without a paddle if I was in the villiage.

Killj0y

Thanks Blade. My friend is working on a version of it on the piano and shes gonna sing it to. I'm gonna add guitar music to it when she sends it to me. Griff, shut it.

"We're going to keep doing what we do whether or not a single record is sold" - Tomas Kalnoky of Streetlight Manifesto

WackoJako

lol Junior Spinn0r.

molebeing

i know what oprigonal here......


m y yo poopie hehe



yo yo