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Old 06-13-2007, 09:59 PM   #1 (permalink)
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A song I wrote!

I wrote this song a month ago, put it on MySpace, and am now posting it on here. It is called "The Reason". it is obviously about a girl, and the one in question is named Kellie. Please critique, suggest possible edits, etc.

I'm walking to town
But I'm not touching the ground
And I don't know what to do
I'm feeling so weightless
And ya oh so fearless
Cause I'm dreaming about you

You're the reason
That I'm still breathing
And you don't even know
I'm high on this feeling
Just can't stop believing
Don't ever want to let go

They all flash a glance
But they don't stand a chance
Cause I don't wanna look
My mind's set on one thing
In your love I'm basking
And it's my heart you took

You're the reason
That I'm still breathing
And you don't even know
I'm high on this feeling
Just can't stop believing
Don't ever want to let go

You're the reason
That I'm still breathing
And you don't even know
I'm high on this feeling
Just can't stop believing
Don't ever want to let go
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Old 06-13-2007, 10:08 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Hooba, is that you?
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Old 06-13-2007, 10:10 PM   #3 (permalink)
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This has nothing to do with Hoobastank lol.
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Old 06-13-2007, 10:40 PM   #4 (permalink)
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Old 06-13-2007, 10:49 PM   #5 (permalink)
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im confused
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Old 06-13-2007, 11:11 PM   #6 (permalink)
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Hahahahahaha, I love shit like this.
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Old 06-14-2007, 12:04 AM   #7 (permalink)
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Today at work I was really dreaming of this girl, so I decided to write a song about her. Here's what I came up with. Perhaps KillJ0y and I could create a band ...

I'm in love with you girl 'cause you're on my mind,
you're the one I think about most every time.
And when you pack a smile in everything you do,
don't you understand, girl, this love is true.
You're soft, succulent so sweet and thin
that's kind of like a vision upon your skin.
It lightens up my day, and that's oh so true.
Together we're one separated we're two.
To make you all mine, all mine is my desire.
'Cause you contain a quality, you that I admire.
You're pretty plain and simple, you rule my world so try to understand.
I'm in love girl,
I'm in so love girl.
I'm just in love girl, and this is true.
Girl, you know it
Girl, you know it
Girl, you know it
Girl, you know it
Girl, you know it
Girl, you know it
Girl, you know it
Girl, you know it
Girl, you know it
Girl, you know it
Girl, you know it
Girl, you know it
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Old 06-14-2007, 12:06 AM   #8 (permalink)
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Hahahahahahahah!
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Old 06-14-2007, 12:08 AM   #9 (permalink)
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Sorry Matty (I assume that's your name), but I think you got busted by the man JC.

Don't take it personally ... you're not the first person to tell a lie on the internet. Just know that we'll catch you in any of them.
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Old 06-14-2007, 04:37 AM   #10 (permalink)
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Kellie will figure out that is not you.........if that isnt you.

Edit: nvm i clicked the link, you are guilty sir, confess to Kellie before she runs to me for a real man.
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