AAW, Out Of Your Mind Wrestling

Shock · 03-09-2008, 09:45 PM

Backstory: With WWE shutting down cuase of WM 24 having the less amount of buys in WM history, Teddy Long, Kennedy, Brian Kendrick, Paul London, Collin Deleaney, and RVD are in a room player poker. This is how it unfolds:

Collin wins with a two pair ace high.

Collin: "Dang look at the time. Well I have to leave, see ya guys around."

Everyone: "See ya."

Collin Leaves

RVD: "Man Collin did so good he almost took all my money."

Teddy looks down sad

Kennedy: "Too many people went to TNA and TNA is about to go out of buissiness, I wish Vince hadn't sold WWE out."

Brian: "We don't have enough money to do this again next week."

Paul: "What are we going to do?"

Teddy: "Start a company."

Paul: "Wha???"

RVD: "You Know Teddy that is a good idea, why don't we do it."

Teddy: "Ok I'll start one."

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Teddy makes AAW with current roster,

RVD

Brian Kendrick

Paul London

Kennedy

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Teddy gets a contract with Brock Lesnar, who got tired of losing in UFC.

Shortly after Teddy buys brock Lesnar to AAW, WWE comes back and Collin Deleaney is forced to stay in WWE so he can't go in AAW.

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WWE offers a trade with Brock Lesnar for a top contender.

Teddy refesuses and offers a new deal.

Teddy offers Brock Lesner for Collin Deleaney, Joey Styles, and Maria

Vince luaghs at this and makes the trade.

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Collin Deleaney has been working in a Indepentant Promotion and, with a few strings pulled, is able to get AAW a good nice full roster.

AAW, Action Adrenaline Wrestling has been borned

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Management:

Owner: Teddy Long

Commentators: Joey Styles and Teddy Long

Backstage interveiwer: Maria

Roster:

AAW World Champion: RVD

AAW Tag Team Champions: Collin Deleaney and Jimmy Olsen

RVD
Kennedy
Paul London
Brian Kendrick
Collin Deleaney
Jimmy Olsen
Jason Bane
M-Dog 20 Matt Cross
Josh Prohibition
Johnny Gargano
Vincet Nothing
Chris Cronus
Ernie Ballz
Brian Bender
Mike Tolar
Greg Iron (The Only Man with a Crippled Left Hand to wrestle)
Virus
Virus Grande
Jimmy DeMarco
Matthew Justice
Charlie "WhiteSocks" Johnson

Teams:

The Clash - Brian Bender and Ernie Ballz

The Socks of Justice - Charlie Johnson and Matthew Justice

Prohibition and Gargano

London and Kendrick

Collin Deleaney and Jimmy Olsen

V-2 - Virus and Virus Grande

Show Listing:

Mondays 7:00 P.M. to 8:00 P.M. on Spike TV

A-Bomb · 03-09-2008, 11:08 PM

hmmm quite interesting.. lets see where this goes..

Shock · 03-10-2008, 08:28 PM

AAW Music Video Plays

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Teddy: Hola Hola Playas!!! Welcome to AAW!!

JS: And we got a card for you.

Teddy: Yeah the' Jason Bane takes on Chris Cronus in a battle of giants here in AAW's first show.

AAW Champion RVD makes his way down the ramp and enters the ring.

Teddy: Our Chammmpppionnn!

Jimmy DeMarco makes his way down the ramp and stops to speak.

JD: Well well, my opponent, RVD, the greatest wrestler in AAW.

Fans cheer.

JD: I meen you are the champ, you can't be beat. Well if that is true take on the Jimmy DeMarco for the AAW title!!!

Fans Cheer again and chant. "RVD RVD RVD"

RVD: Well Jimmy If you want it so bad, you got it!!

Fans roar with cheers as Jimmy runs down the ramp and enters the ring.

Match #1
AAW World Championship Match
Jimmy DeMarco vs. RVD (C)

Quote:

The circle around, Jimmy puts his hand out for a test of strenght. RVD looks at the crowd and listens to the crowd yelling "Lier". Jimmy has been known for his dirty tactics, as RVD remembers this and kicks Jimmy hand. Jimmy bands over tending to his hand and RVD hits a well place leg right in the chops. Jimmy then is knocked back sitting down. RVD front kicks Jimmy in the chops and Jimmy is knocked flat and RVD hits a leg drop. Cover!

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2

kickout!

RVD goes across the ropes for the Rolling Thunder. Jimmy sticks his knees up and RVD lands on his back on the knees of Jimmy.

Teddy: RVD is showing the fans why he is the champion.

Joey: Yeah, but RVD got caught with the knees of Jimmy.

Jimmy gets up quick and applies the sitting sleeper. He lays down and locks in the leg scissors. The ref checks to see if Jimmy moves his hand for a choke, and Jimmy does. The ref yells at him and the ref count. 1...2...3...4... Jimmy lets go and talks to the ref. As Jimmy is doing this he puts his left knee on the neck of RVD who is laying on the mat. The ref finally notices RVD's kicking around and counts again for the Move made by Jimmy. 1...2...3...4... Jimmy gets off. The ref and Jimmy again exchange yells. Jimmy finally pushes the ref off and sizes RVD up. RVD gets up. Jimmy kicks RVD in the gut making him band over. Jimmy goes across the ropes and hits a well placed knee lift. RVD gets knocked straight up looking drozzy Jimmy then hits a beautiful STO. Cover.

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2

kickout!

JS: Jimmy using his unique dirty style to beat the champ.

Teddy: Let's see if RVD can bounce back.

Jimmy looks at the ref and tells him to count faster. Jimmy lifts RVD up and grabs his hair. The ref counts 1...2...3... Jimmy throws RVD back and RVD's back lands on the knee of Jimmy. Jimmy gets to a turnbuckle as the ref checks on RVD. Jimmy unhooks the top turnbuckle and exposes the medal part of it. Jimmy grabs RVD up and goes to smash his head into the expose steel, but RVD puts on the brakes and, while standing next to Jimmy, hits a very flexible kick to the face. Jimmy is out and falls foward onto the Expose Steel. RVD climbs to the top and goes for the Five Star FrogSplash and Nails it! Cover.

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3

Result - RVD wins the match and retains the title.

JS: RVD wins a classic to retain his title.

Teddy: Jimmy gave it his all, but RVD is standing tall!

RVD holds the belt in the air and makes his way out of the ring and up the ramp.

(Commercial Break)

*Camera Shows Gregory Iron*

Iron: Hello I'm here to tell you what your expectations for Gregory Iron will be.

Fans are still.

Iron: I am AAW's future even though I am a cripple.

Iron lifts his cripple hand up.

Iron: My heart out ways my disorder.

Fans cheer a little.

Iron: Tonight! When I take on Josh Prohibition, I will not promise a win, but I promise you I'll give it my all!

Fans cheer.

Iron leaves past camera veiw.

*Camera Cut to the Ring*

JS: Well Gregory Iron set or action against Tag team and singles specailist Josh Prohibition!

Josh Prohibition w/ Johnny Gargano makes his way down the ramp and enters the ring.

Teddy: And Here they come.

Gregory Iron maeks his way to the ring and Gargano leaves the ring to start this match off.

Match #2
Gregory Iron vs. Josh Prohibition w/ Johnny Gargano

Quote:

Josh sticks out a his right hand for a test of strenght. Iron feels offended at this, because if he'd lock up for a tst of strenght Iron would have to use his left (Crippled) hand to go against a right hand. Iron tells Josh "Come on stop messing around." Josh luaghs at this and makes his Left hand look crippled, by moving it around like Iron does. Iron looks at the crowd and smiles. Iron hits a beautiful dropkick to the chops of Josh. Josh is knocked down, but gets up to a series of chops from Iron. 1.2.3.4.5.6.7.8.9.10.11.12 chops all together. Iron goes across the ropes and catches Josh's head for a bulldog. Cover.

1

kickout!

JS: To Josh's credit he kicks out at a one.

Teddy: Iron sets out to pull a upset over Josh.

Iron stands up and sizes Josh up. Josh gets to a knee and Iron hits a dropkick right in the face. Iron goes across the ropes and hits a running senton splash. Iron then hits a standing leg drop. Iron reaches down to cover Josh, but Johnny grabs Josh and pulls him out of the ring. Johnny tries to wake Josh up by slapping him around and stuff. Iron gets up and goes across the ropes and nails a Pretty good suicide dive. Iron stands up and smiles at the crowd which is roaring with. "Iron Iron Iron" chants. Iron picks Josh's limb body and is able to put him in the ring. Cover.

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2

Josh gets a leg across the ropes.

Teddy: Iron almost pulled that upset.

Fans Chant "Bulllllllllllllllllshit Bullllllllllllllllllllshit" Josh shows some life and starts to move around. Iron goes across the ropes, but Johnny sweeps the legs of Iron form under him. Josh gets up and drops a few elbows on the back of Iron. Josh runs towards the ropes and hits a springboard moonsualt on Iron. Josh signals for the Drunkin' Driver. (Tiger Bomb position. Lifts him up still in the tiger bomb position and pile drves him) Josh lifts Iron up. He gets both hands in. Iron lifts Josh up for a backflip and, hits it. Josh lands right on his back. Iron climbs to the top, but with the ref checking on Josh. Johnny elbows Iron in the face. Josh gets up and sets Iron up, by putting his legs on the second rope and sitting him up. Josh goes to the other turnbuckle and charges at Iron hitting a prefect dropkick into the turnbuckle Iron was sitting on. Josh tuants the crowd and lifts Iron up and puts him in Drunkin Driver position and Nails it! Cover.

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3

Result - Josh Prohibition wins the match.

Teddy: Aw Iron almost pulled the biggest upset in wrestling history.

JS: Yeah, but to no prevail, cause of Gargano.

Josh and Johnny leave waving their hands in victory. Iron stands up to a large reaction of the crowd chanting "Iron Iron Iron Iron"

Teddy: Respect showned for this warrior's heart.

(Commercial)

Jason Bane makes his way to the ring.

Cronus makes his way down the ramp and enters the ring slowly.

Teddy: Battle of the giants!

Main Event
Battle of the Giants
Chris Cronus vs. Jason Bane

Quote:

Bane and Cronus lock up. Bane pushes Cronus into the turnbuckle. Bane gets off and tuants Cronus. Cronus makes a B-line to Bane and lock up again. He drive Bane to the corner. The ref tries to pull Cronus off, but he doesn't. The ref starts the count. 1...2...3...4... Cronus lays off and connects a straight left hook into the jaw of Bane. The ref scolds Cronus. Bane grabs his jaw and spears Cronus inside and out. Cover.

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kickout!

JS: Wow Cronus maked the bigger Bane mad.

Bane looks up a disbelief. Bane pciks Crouns up and lifts Cronus on his shoudlers. Bane drives Cronus into the turnbuckle and drives shoulders in his gut. Bane goes to the iddle of the ring and charges for a Shoulder in the gut too, but Cronus lifts a knee up and Bane hits that. Bane grabs his shoulder and Cronus kicks Bane in the shoudler. Bane falls back in pain and hodling that shoulder. Cronus puts a knee into the back of Bane and grabs that shoudler and stretches it out. Bane starts to feel it bad. Bane though gets to his feet and throws Cronus of the armbar off and threw the ropes with the arm that was in the armbar. Bane starts to wave his arm and, with the angriest look goes across the ropes and lunges himself over the top rope. Without touching the top rope and land right on Cronus.

Teddy: I was about to say, not to expect high flying moves in the match.

JS: Yeah Bane putting a new meening to the saying, "When Pigs Fly."

Teddy: Harsh Joey.

Bane scream aloud and throws Cronus in the ring. Cover.

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2

kickout!

Bane looks up again in disbelief. He gets up and sizes Cronus up. Cronus gets up and Bane goes across the ropes for the Bane Lariet (Clotesline From Hell except with more force) and nails it! Cover.

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kickout!

JS: How the hell?

Bane hit Cronus with his bad arm/shoulder and starts screaming in pain. Bane and Cronus after a few seconds finally start to get up. Both men get to there feet and Bane tries for another Bane Lariet, with the bad arm/shoudler, but Cronus sticks a knee in the air and Bane's bad arm goes smashing in it. Cronus falls back too, but Bane is hurt bad. Cronus lifts Bane up and picks him up for the F-5 and Nails it! Cover.

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Result - Cronus wins the Battle of the giants.

Teddy: Cronus wins!!

JS: Cronus looks to be a future champion of AAW.

Screen fades with Cronus standing over Bane with his arms raised in victory.

God · 03-11-2008, 12:22 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Shock

AAW Champion RVD makes his way down the ramp and enters the ring.

Thats not a good way to start. A new companies first show & the champion has been awarded the belt before the show even started?

Quote:

Match #1

Quote:

AAW World Championship Match
Jimmy DeMarco vs. RVD (C)

Quote:

JS: RVD wins a classic to retain his title.

Teddy: Jimmy gave it his all, but RVD is standing tall!

RVD holds the belt in the air and makes his way out of the ring and up the ramp.

No no no no. Firstly, it was really bad placement to open with a world title match. After the promo it should have been announced as the main event. Secondly, the match was way too short for the style you are using of writing the entire match. Have the paragraphs pick up from different parts of the match to make them longer.

Quote:

(Commercial Break)

Quote:

*Camera Shows Gregory Iron*

Iron: Hello I'm here to tell you what your expectations for Gregory Iron will be.

Fans are still.

Iron: I am AAW's future even though I am a cripple.

Iron lifts his cripple hand up.

Iron: My heart out ways my disorder.

Fans cheer a little.

Iron: Tonight! When I take on Josh Prohibition, I will not promise a win, but I promise you I'll give it my all!

Fans cheer.

Iron leaves past camera veiw.

*Camera Cut to the Ring*

JS: Well Gregory Iron set or action against Tag team and singles specailist Josh Prohibition!

That promo was incredibley poor taste. Useing a disability to get over is not a good thing. You cant also be a specalist in singles & tag team. Its one or the other not both.

Quote:

Josh Prohibition w/ Johnny Gargano makes his way down the ramp and enters the ring.

Teddy: And Here they come.

Gregory Iron maeks his way to the ring and Gargano leaves the ring to start this match off.

Match #2
Gregory Iron vs. Josh Prohibition w/ Johnny Gargano

Teddy: Aw Iron almost pulled the biggest upset in wrestling history.

JS: Yeah, but to no prevail, cause of Gargano.

Josh and Johnny leave waving their hands in victory. Iron stands up to a large reaction of the crowd chanting "Iron Iron Iron Iron"

Teddy: Respect showned for this warrior's heart.

Same problem as your first match with not enough detail to be a full match. Biggest upset in wrestling history is a massive overstatement. Biggest upset in AAW would have been fine.

Quote:

(Commercial)

Quote:

Jason Bane makes his way to the ring.

Cronus makes his way down the ramp and enters the ring slowly.

Teddy: Battle of the giants!

Main Event
Battle of the Giants
Chris Cronus vs. Jason Bane

Teddy: Cronus wins!!

JS: Cronus looks to be a future champion of AAW.

Screen fades with Cronus standing over Bane with his arms raised in victory.

To hype it as battle of the giants but then not play up the giant factor during the match made it suffer.

My Ratings:

Match Making: 5/10. You know what you want, but you dont seem to know how to wait it off & build it up.

Match Writing: 7/10. Too short for your style.

Promos: 2/10. The promos themselves were written ok, but the content was poor.

Spelling/Grammer: 6/10. Nothing criminal. But a few close calls.

Flow: 5/10. Not a whole lot of seperation here. The commercial breaks would have been better suited in the middle of matchs as a way to make them longer.

Overall: 50%. Not a bad start & i can see this improving. I like your roster & if you can build the storylines better then it will go somewhere. Good work.

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