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Old 02-25-2008, 12:27 AM   #1 (permalink)
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WWE: Revolution SmackDown

Backstory: With TNA and ROH downsizing and combining their powers to try and compete with the WWE. The WWE's size in profits and marketability were to large for TNA and ROH to match forcing both companies to be bought over by Vincent Kennedy McMahon. Within the profits and popularity of all of the newfound talent within this massive company, Vince had decided to mend ties with ECW's former owner and principle General manager in Paul Heyman to assume the role of his old position to resume at length with the conditions of letting Paul Heyman control all of the executive decisions with all of ECW's day to day operations. On the SmackDown side of operations, with Teddy Long and Vicky Guerrero constantly argueing on who to use and who to move where, Vince got fed up with all of the arguing and the steady yet declining ratings that SmackDown was producing. SO, in just, Vince fired both executives and named Nick Malone as the General manager in charge of Friday Night SmackDown in helping to get SmackDown to become the #1 show in network television. Nick's background in Wrestling spans across the globe after working in Japan and all over North America and Europe and now he has finally surfaced as the SmackDown General Manager. On the Raw side of things, Raw needed a consistency at the General managers position and with Stephanie and Shane declining the position to tend with in-house operations and to deal with their own families, Vince's next best option was to turn Frankie aka F4L. His alias is mysterious but his knowledge in wrestling is Not.

With the Massive Influx in talent coming in from both TNA and ROH, some recognizable names get reunited with some rather new accomplices. Stars from the WWE, TNA, and ROH were compiled into one room and selected by the General Manager's choice. Those that were selected have already been assigned to their specific brands and those of whom were not were wished the best to come of what their future endeavors may bring. Nick Malone walked into Stamford, Connecticut with a Huge grin on his face as he shook Vince's hand and promised Vince that he would not regret this opportunity of putting his stake of a fortune and franchise into the hands of Nick Malone. Nick Malone then met with his other fellow General Managers as they met together and discussed their following selections. On the SmackDown side, Nick Malone felt he had the best Roster of all 3 brands as after he made the selections, Nick Malone made the individual phone calls to each individual that he selected and picked up as a result of several trades that were made to compliment his "Perfect Roster". As seen below, is the following roster and draft selections that Nick Malone personally made and then detailed to fit the exact proportion of the following divisions and Titles that SmackDown will be using each and every Friday Night from 8-10 PM EST.




SmackDown Roster

1. Randy Orton
2. Batista
3. Samoa Joe
4. Undertaker
5. Umaga
6. Motor City Machine Guns (Alex Shelly & Chris Sabin)
7. Kurt Angle
8. Bryan Danielson
9. Nigel McGuinness
10. Jay Lethal
11. Chris Hero
12. The Briscoe Brothers (Jay & Mark Briscoe)
13. AJ Styles
14. John Morrison
15. Robert Roode
16. Rey Mysterio
17. Abyss
18. Kevin Steen
19. LAX (Homicide & Hernandez)
20. Sting
21. Texas Rednecks (Lance Cade & Trevor Murdoch)
22. Jaime Noble
23. Booker T
24. Claudio Castagnoli
25. “Cowboy” James Storm
26. Human Tornado
27. Roderick Strong
28. Davey Richards
29. Rockey Romero
30. Kaz
31. Team 3D (Brother Ray & Brother Devon)

World Heavyweight Title Division

Champion = ???

1. Randy Orton
2. Undertaker
3. Batista
4. Kurt Angle
5. Sting
6. Booker T
7. Chris Hero
8. Abyss


United States Title Division

Champion = ???

1. Bryan Danielson
2. Nigel McGuinness
3. Umaga
4. AJ Styles
5. John Morrison
6. Human Tornado
7. Claudio Castagnoli
8. “Cowboy” James Storm
9. Robert Roode
10. Kevin Steen


Cruiserweight Title Division

Champion = ???

1. Rey Mysterio
2. “Black Machismo” Jay Lethal
3. Jaime Noble
4. Kaz
5. Rocky Romero


Tag Team Titles Division

Champions = ???

1. Motor City Machine Guns (Chris Sabin & Alex Shelly)
2. LAX (Homicide & Hernandez)
3. The Briscoe Brothers (Jay & Mark Briscoe)
4. Team 3D (Bubba Ray & Devon)
5. West Texas redneck Wrecking Crew (Lance Cade & Trevor Murdoch)
6. No Remorse Corp. (Davey Richards & Roderick Strong)


A Preview of the premier edition of Friday Night SmackDown will be up later this week... Until then stay tuned as SmackDown will bring the Agression and Action back to Friday Nights.
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Really nice backstory. The only thing i didnt like was the lack of backstory for the TNA/ROH combination.
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WWE Friday Night SmackDown - 2/29/08 - Wachovia Center - Philadelphia, P.A.
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WWE SmackDown Match Card:

1) Jaime Noble vs. “Black Machismo” Jay Lethal vs. Rocky Romero

2) LAX (Homicide & Hernandez) vs. West Texas Redneck Wrecking Crew (Lance Cade & Trevor Murdoch)

3) Umaga & Abyss vs. Sting & AJ Styles

4) Undertaker & Batista vs. Chris Hero & No Remorse Corp. (Dave Richards & Roderick Strong)
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SmackDown Music Video: Images and captions of fellow SmackDown Superstars provide a wide array of talent ranging from all over the world as some of SmackDown’s elite showcase some of their devastating finishing maneuvers. Randy Orton stands with a huge smirk on his face showing his charisma as he has his arms fully extended in the Legend Killer stance while AJ Styles stands there with his Hood over his head as AJ then extends his arms as AJ then flips his hood off and shows the crowd that he is truly Phenomenal as pyro behind him explodes. As these images of SmackDown’s finest appear on the screen with some fancy special graphics, Drowning Pool’s “Stand Up” keeps pounding heavily in the background as SmackDown continues to show illustrations of Umaga performing the Samoan Spike, with Rey Mysterio hitting the 619 and Rocky Romero performing the Fujiwara Armbar on an unsuspecting victim. The SmackDown Video ends with the Undertaker down onto one knee holding his arm out as he looks up into the darkened arena sky to get guidance as he then lets his eyes roll into the back of his head as the Lights goes out once again as the Music video comes to a close as the music slowly fades out.

Pyro inside the Wachovia Center deep within the hear of the city of Brotherly Love explodes multiple times from atop the brand new, mega-sized Titan-Tron connecting together in the Giant Rectangle as the Pyro continues to explode on display as then, the display heads down towards the ring exploding across from each other down the ramp and heading down towards the foot of the ring as the crowd inside the Philadelphia, P.A. Wachovia Center are going crazy. The pyro then concludes once it has finished going around the ring, up to the center display as Pyro pops from the top of the Wachovia Center 3 consecutive times as each time was louder than the last as the lights inside the Wachovia Center turn on to show the rowdy fans inside the Arena showing their vibrant signs detailing their disdain or favor for certain Superstars marking for their favorites as the cameras circle around the arena and then bring the cameras down and zoom into the area of the current SmackDown commentating team of Michael Cole and Jonathan Coachman as the rowdy crowd is giving the broadcast a heavy cheer as Cole and Coachman welcome everybody watching at home into their following broadcast.

Michael Cole: Welcome Everybody, My name is Michael Cole and sitting next to my partner, Jonathan Coachman, we introduce everybody to the premier edition of WWE Friday Night SmackDown emanating live from the city of “Brotherly Love” in Philadelphia.


Jonathan Coachman: Michael, with this awesome crowd waiting with anticipation, we’ve got alot of tremendous matches on tonight’s edition of SmackDown and when you think about it, SmackDown looks to be the leader of Sports Entertainment and after tonight, I don’t think there will be any question about it.

Michael Cole: Coach, when you think about it, SmackDown from head to toe has some of the most talented performers in all of wrestling with very extensive backgrounds and the most depth that quite possibly our newest General Manager, Nick Malone has ever assembled.

Jonathan Coachman: Cole, each and every selection that Nick Malone personally made has the opportunity to make a huge impression on tonight’s premier edition of Friday Night SmackDown and when you look at all the icons on this roster, only the best of the best are here exclusively on this roster especially with the likes of the Undertaker, Sting, Kurt Angle, Bryan Danielson, and Nigel McGuinness.

Michael Cole: Speaking of our New General manager, lets take you to the backstage area where Jeremy Borash is standing next to our general manager, Nick Malone.


Jeremy Borash is holding a microphone standing prominently standing side by side next to SmackDown’s newest General Manager, Nick Malone as Nick Malone feels excited to be immersed with the Hardcore nature of the Philadelphia crowd. Jeremy Borash looks at the cameras as Nick malone rubs his chin with a huge smirk on his face as Jeremy Borash addresses the crowd about interviewing Nick Malone.

Jeremy Borash: Mr. Malone, It is an honor to be in your presence and really, when you look at the landscape of Friday Night SmackDown, what comes to your mind?

Nick Malone: Well Jeremy, when I took over for Vicky Guerrero and Teddy Long, my main objective was to improve the ratings as best as possible and thanks to the new talent that has been discovered and scouted by yours truly, SmackDown will conquer its limitless potential. I see the wave of the future in the likes of AJ Styles, I see the domination of the Deadman in the Undertaker and I see...

Randy Orton: The only 3rd Generation Superstar on this roster that was selected 1st overall and soon to be, next World Heavyweight Champion. There is new horizons on this brand for the Legend Killer and some of the enemies from my past are here again but a new challenge awaits me and lets make something very very clear. You selected me first Mr. Malone for a reason and that intent will be fulfilled. Not Batista, Not Kurt Angle, not the Undertaker and not even Sting will prevent me from getting that title belt around my waist and I’ll keep a close eye on tonight’s Main Event between the Undertaker and Batista going against Chris Hero and the No Remorse Corp. Very......very closely.

Nick Malone: Thats right, you can watch that match very closely from your very own television monitor inside your own Locker Room because your banned from ringside during that contest. I will not have SmackDown tainted by your venom Randy and your right, I chose you first for a reason. I chose you because I want to see your self worth, your value and J.B., If you don’t mind me, I got some business to attend to and Mr. Orton have a good day.

Randy Orton breathes heavily as he looks frustrated with the decision as he then looks over at Jeremy Borash with hatred in his eyes. Jamie Noble then walks by the two and accidentally bumps into Orton as Orton then looks disgusted and looks down and over at Noble as Noble continues to walk past Orton on his way down to his match with Jay Lethal and Rocky Romero.

Jamie Noble: Boy Howdy, You sure do need to lighten up there son or else that golf ball sized brain of yours is gonna blow!

The cameras then look at Randy Orton’s cunning go into effect as his eyes slowly get lower and more focused than ever before as the camera scene fades and cuts to a commercial break.


<CENTER>~ Commercials ~

Jamie Noble vs. Rocky Romero vs. “Black Machismo” Jay Lethal

“OHHHHHHH Yeeeeeeaahhhh”

Coming back from the commercial break, the cameras then zoom down and get infront of the top of the stage as “Black Machismo” Jay Lethal comes out to the top of the stage with the Multicolored Cowboy Hat and a multicolored vest with zebra stripes as he comes out almost as the mini version of the original “Macho Man” Randy Savage as Jay Lethal smacks some of the hands from many of the fans standing along the barriers. Jay Lethal has the retro specs sitting up against the bridge of his nose. Lethal then holds his arms up and twirls with the tassels swinging off his jacket. Lethal then takes off his Glasses and puts them on the face of a small youngster sitting next to his parents as they look so proud at their child as Lethal smiles as he then gets up onto the apron and flings his Cowboy hat into the crowd as Lethal then unzips his Jacket and enters inside the ring. He taunts for the fans as Lethal walks over and gets up onto the turnbuckles and taunts for the fans as he then rolls his finger around getting the attention of the crowd as Lethal then hops off the turnbuckles. Lethal quits with the jokes as he then puts on a serious face as he awaits to see who will come out next for this match on whether its gonna be Rocky Romero or Jamie Noble.

“Azucar”

Rock Romero comes out to the top of the stage to a chorus of Boo’s as Rocky disrespects the crowd as he is wearing a No Remorse Corp. shirt. The N.R.C. was a major faction to come out of Ring of Honor in 2007 and provided many memorable moments during it’s final days inside ROH. Rocky Romero threatens to spit in some of the fans faces as he makes his way down the ramp as Rocky disrespects the ugly fans by dancing a little bit from his favorite style of eclectic dance in Salsa. Rocky Romero holds his wrists and applies pressure on his tape bound wrists as he solely focuses on his target of destroying “Black Machismo” Jay Lethal. Romero then slides inside the ring and then stands back up very smoothly as he taunts against Lethal and starts trash talking Lethal as he looks over at the referee and paces a little inside the ring as both participants wait for the third competitor to come down to this ring.

“Country Living in West Virginia”

Jamie Noble comes out to the crowd to a mixture of Half cheers and half boo’s as he pauses for a moment as he looks at the crowd here in Philadelphia as Jamie Noble digs the vibe coming back to the area where he revived his career with Ring Of Honor. Noble then taunts against both Lethal and Romero as Romeo looks at both Jay Lethal and Noble as Jamie cautiously walks down the ramp and approaches the ring. Noble then looks over at the fans along the barriers along the ramp and gets down to the foot of the ring as “Black Machismo” gets over towards the ropes and taunts for Jamie Noble to get inside the ring as this is a very important bout to determine a possible Cruiserweight Title match in the near future for which General Manager, Nick Malone has his eyes on for this bout. Jamie Noble looks over at Jay Lethal and taunts against him as Noble initiates the Macho Man Finger wave taunt. This distraction against Lethal gives an open opportunity for Rocky Romero to take advantage. The referee rings the bell to make this match official as Jamie Noble watches from the outside waiting for his moment to strike.
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Romero quickly nails Jay Lethal in the back of his neck with a hard jumping knee as Lethal wilts down onto one knee as Rocky Romero continuously beats down with clubbing forearms weakening “Black Machismo”. Jamie Noble walks around the ring as the referee tries to get Noble to get inside the ring as then Rocky Romero nails a hard devastating side kick right to the shoulder of Jay Lethal and then nailed Lethal to the other side of his body nailing his head as Lethal collapsed like a sack of Potatoes as Romero made the cover on Lethal after dragging Lethal away from the ropes a little bit as Noble quickly climbs up to the top rope turnbuckle that is closest to Romero covering Lethal. The referee makes the count after checking Lethal’s shoulders down for a 1........2....... Nobel dives off the ropes and connects with a heavy leg-drop right to the back of Romero’s neck to break up the count. Jamie Nobel then quickly rolls over Rocky Romero and covers Romero as the referee makes the count for the 1........2......but Romero kicks out of the count by the referee as Noble looks disgusted. Jamie Noble then picks Jay Lethal up as Noble attempts to nail a hard right hand right to the jaw of Jay Lethal but Lethal blocks to strike attempt and reverses that into a huge Hip toss on Jamie Noble which is followed into a cartwheel and finished with a sharp dropkick right to Jamie’s face. Jay Lethal then quickly ran across the ring towards the other side of the ring and quickly jumped up to the top rope from the inside of the ring as Rocky Romero staggered back up to his feet. Lethal maintained his composure and balance standing on the top rope as Black Machismo measures himself with Romero staggering and wobbling on his feet as he holds his neck. Lethal jumps and flies through the air and drives a Diving double axe handle right through the forehead of Rocky Romero as Romero falls flat onto his back right on the canvas. Jamie Noble slowly gets back up to his feet as he notices Jay Lethal getting back up to his feet after hitting the Axe handle on Romero as Noble charges at Jay Lethal and leaps into the air taking Jay Lethal by surprise as Noble is able to backflip over Lethal and grab a hold of Black Machismo and three-quarter facelock diving reverse DDT slam. Noble then quickly gets back up and looks down over at Rocky Romero as Noble nails in a sharp kick right to the ribs of Rocky Romero as Noble taunts against the fans as Noble then grabs a hold of Rocky Romero and sits him up as Jamie Noble then wraps his legs around the waist of Rocky Romero and locks in a Dragon Sleeper. Rocky is fading as Jamie Noble applies even more pressure to the neck of Rocky Romero hoping to cut off the circulation of oxygen to the brain of Romero as Romero is looking like he is about to pass out. Jay Lethal gets back up to his feet as the crowd is willing Black Machismo to fight harder with pure intestinal fortitude. Machismo then turns around towards the back Jamie Noble and charges towards Noble as Noble hears the footsteps from Lethal as Noble has the Dragon Sleeper locked in. Lethal runs as fast as he can as he bounces off the ropes as Jamie Noble lets go of Rocky Romero trying to avoid the impending Jay Lethal attack as Lethal bounces off the ropes and divers towards Noble and flips over Jamie Noble and grabbing a hold of Noble’s neck in the process for a flipping neck breaker. Jay Lethal then gets right back up to his feet as he looks over at Rocky Romero and grabs a hold of Rocky Romero’s neck and sets up for the Lethal Combination. Romero in a sudden instant nails a side forearm right to the side of the jaw of Jay Lethal to make Black Machismo wobbly. Rocky Romero then leaps up to the side of Jay Lethal and maneuvers his legs around Machismo pectoral muscles and cradles Machismo back over to the other side as Romero has a hold of Machismo’s arm and locks in the Fujiwara Armbar. Ripping and tearing away with massive amounts of pressure on Jay Lethal. Lethal is screaming in pain as he desperately tries to reach over towards the ropes to break the maneuver from Rocky Romero. Jay Lethal tries desperately to try and reach for the ropes as his finger tips touch the bottom rope trying to reach the grasp of the ropes as Noble hold his neck and looks down at Romero and then moves over to the side of Romero’s face as Noble then does a flip in the air and has his knee crash right over onto the face of Romero as Rocky releases the hold of Lethal from within the Fujiwara armbar as Jamie holds his knee as he is breathing heavily. Noble then gets back up to his feet as Jay Lethal is holding his arm in agony after the damage from Romero’s Armbar. Jamie Noble then grabs a hold of Romero and hoists Romero up onto his feet as Rocky can barely stand after this brawl between these 3 competitors. Noble then kicks Romero in the midsection and quickly positions Romero in position for some sort of Suplex as Noble then lifts Rocky quickly up into the air and then just as quickly drives his head back down for a brain buster as Noble still has a hold of Romero as Noble pops his hips and brings Romero back up with him. Noble then hoists Romero up onto his shoulders and then positions Romero in a Fireman’s Carry as Noble then tosses Romero up over his head and then lets Romero drop onto Noble’s knees for a devastating Fireman's carry double knee gutbuster. Rocky Romero quickly holds his stomach area as he rolls out of the ring as Noble taunts for himself as he watches Romero roll out of the ring and retreat to the outside. Noble takes his mind off of Lethal as Jay is favoring his damaged Right arm as Lethal then jumps up off the ropes from the apron and springboards himself over towards Noble connecting with a deadly Springboard clothesline taking Noble down as Noble lays prone onto the canvas. Romero is retreating on the outside as the referee is checking on Romero from inside the ring to make sure that Romero is alright as Jay Lethal gets his Machismo working as he taunts and waves his finger for the fans here in Philadelphia as they are going absolutely crazy for this amazing match. Lethal quickly walks over towards the closest turnbuckle and climbs up to the top rope. Lethal measures himself as he looks down at Noble who is laying flat on his back as Lethal holds his arms up into the air as his right arm is heavily damaged. Lethal then leaps off the top rope with amazing elevation under him as Noble quickly gets back up to his feet and as Lethal attempts to stop the move while he’s in the air, Noble has Lethal scouted as Noble then jumps as Jay is coming down and nails a stiff dropkick right to the damaged shoulder of Jay Lethal as Noble then quickly gets right back up and wipes the sweat off of his forehead from this intense bout. Noble then picks up Jay Lethal and hoists him up and then delivers a deadly Fireman's carry double knee gutbuster. Noble then rushes over and covers Jay Lethal as the ref checks Lethal’s shoulder as the referee counts the 1.........2........3.

Noble quickly stands back up and gets his hand raised by the referee as Lethal is screaming in agony over the tremendous pain in his right arm. Romero is breathing heavily and angrily over the fact that Lethal lost the match as Romero then slides inside the ring and looks sadistically over at a prone Lethal as Romero looks at the crowd and then begins stomping down on Lethal’s right arm. Noble is walking back up the ramp with a devilish grin on his face as he has his arm up high as Romero continues to show Lethal No Remorse as Romero continues to beat down on Lethal’s damaged arm as the referee’s try to separate Lethal and Romero. Romero backs away as the anger from the fiery Latino still burns. Romero gets a ton of heat for that attack as the crowd inside the Wachovia Center responds heavily to the attack on “Black Machismo” Jay Lethal. Trainers rush down to the ring and try to examine the severity of Lethal’s possible injury as he can’t move his arm. The trainers help Lethal out of the ring carefully and cautiously as Lethal is wincing in pain as the cameras try to get a good view of the mangled arm of Jay Lethal. The cameras then turn to a darkened boiler room, somewhere deeply inside the Wachovia Center as grunts and screams of anguish could be herd somewhere inside the boiler room. A red light fixture is glimmering in the distance as the camera crew walks towards the light. The camera crew appears to view Abyss rocking back and forth. Abyss holds a chain in his massive hand as James Mitchell walks into the scene as the camera moves up to look at a menacing James Mitchell.

James Mitchell: Torture. Disrespect. Pain. Agony. These words describe the nature of every level that Abyss represents. The soul of a Monster has been damaged and kept quiet for far to long. “The Monster” Abyss sits here a tortured individual deprived of meaning because of those that have looked at his outer disfigurements and shied away from getting to know what a sincere person that this individual could of became but h had to kept away from a society that was killing his mind with stupidity. he had to be kept away from a society that would endanger his soul and now that Mr. Malone has seen the Monster for what he really is, there is a renewed sense of destruction within Abyss. He lurks among the shadows waiting for that chance and here on SmackDown, with similar faces that Abyss has know only far to well. These new faces in new places reveals to Abyss that there are new goals to be conquered and new enemies to destroy. Here on SmackDown, there is nobody that will prevent him from capturing what is most cherished. The cherished moments of joy and happiness are gone and replaced with the visions of bloodshed and destruction. Sting, you tried to manipulate and deceive Abyss into your mystical magic but in reality, that mirage only angered Abyss even more as your skull will be cracked open and if Abyss can’t finish the job then our newest friend.........The Samoan Bulldozer will as we had a little play-date earlier. Abyss got along really well with Umaga and Umaga is just like Abyss. Monsters, on the verge of controlling this company from within and it will start tonight with your two souls and truly create a massacre that is truly phenomenal.

The lights then flicker on and off inside the boiler room as Umaga appears standing next to Abyss as Abyss stands up as the two are breathing heavily as they look at each other eye to eye as Umaga screams as loud as he can in Wild Samoan.

Umaga: WHAAAAAAAA HAWAULA EJRJKJKWD AHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!

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James Mitchell then devilishly laughs as the cameras catch a view of Abyss and Umaga standing together next to Mitchell as Mitchell is looking demonically into the camera lens. The cameras then turn back over to ringside where Jonathan Coachman and Michael Cole have all the action.

Michael Cole: Quite chilling words from James Mitchell and Abyss Coach and I really fear what the tandem of Abyss and Umaga could really do as a team when they take on Sting & AJ Styles later on tonight here on SmackDown.

Jonathan Coachman: If that wasn’t an example of intimidation then I don’t know what is because just by looking at them, I am terrified and petrified right down to the bone. These two monsters are very imposing figures and it should be an incredible bout with those two dominant monsters going against the “Phenomenal” AJ Styles and the “Icon” Sting and Michael, what a treat it is and treats like these can only be seen every Friday Night on SmackDown.

Michael Cole: Coach, I couldn’t agree more. Coming up next here on SmackDown, is a Tag Team match between the Latin Revolution of LAX with Homicide and Hernandez and the Southern Rednecks of Lance Cade & Trevor Murdoch. Now, this will be the first official meeting between the two teams but the bad blood that is boiling between the two teams will run wild and have a huge impact on who stands where in the Tag Title division in furthering their chances towards obtaining Tag Team gold.


<CENTER>LAX (Homicide & Hernandez) vs. West Texas Redneck Wrecking Crew (Lance Cade & Trevor Murdoch)

"To Live and Die In LAX"

The crowd in Philly gets up and onto their feet as they hear the heart pounding sounds of LAX’s theme song. Homicide and Hernandez walks out onto the top of the stage as Homicide is dressed as a militant thug while Hernandez is amped and seemingly ready to fight. Homicide throws up his hands and makes gang signs to his fans in Philadelphia as Hernandez walks down the ramp with his giant Texas Belt Buckle wrapped around his fist. LAX bounces to the rhythms and beats of their opening theme music as after every moment, the production truck plays clips of Cuba and the Latino pride. Homicide then continues to taunt for his fans as he looks at Hernandez and continues to taunt for LAX as Hernandez walks around the ring on the outside and then climbs up onto the apron as he continues to taunt for LAX. Homicide then slides into the ring and gets up onto the turnbuckles and taunts for the fans that are cheering for LAX. Homicide crawls over towards the center of the ring as Hernandez enters inside the ring as they taunt together with the LAX hand signals. Homicide then takes off his bandana and throws it into the crowd as Hernandez takes off his shirt and is ready and prepared to fight.

“Southern Comfort”

Lance Cade & Trevor Murdoch come out to the stage together as they look angrily over at the tag team of LAX that is currently standing in the middle of the ring. Murdoch takes his hat off and looks at the Philadelphia crowd as he then takes his hat and rubs it against his trunks and then puts his Trucker hat onto the head of some kid as Lance Cade gets a good laugh out of it as the crowd boo’s even harder against the tandem of Lance Cade & Trevor Murdoch. Cade & Murdoch then get down to the foot of the ring and approaches the apron as Homicide and Hernandez try to chase off Cade & Murdoch from entering the ring. Cade & Murdoch take their time carefully as Murdoch takes off his flannel vest. Murdoch and Cade walk over to the announcers area and taunts against the fans. Lance Cade gives both Coach and Cole a menacing stare as he then places his Cowboy hat down onto their table as he then walks back over towards the ring apron and gets up onto the apron as the referee holds LAX back with restrain to let Cade & Murdoch enter inside the ring as Cade & Murdoch discuss their plans of attack for this match as Cade agrees with Murdoch that He will start the match off going against Homicide. Cade walks towards Homicide and notices the size difference as the referee sounds the bell to make this tag team match official.
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Homicide slaps Lance cade right in the face to anger the Southern Gentlemen as Homicide gets the crowd riled up as Cade viciously gets in a tie up with Homicide as Cade uses his strength to push and force Homicide to be posted up against the turnbuckles as the referee tries to separate the two by getting in-between each participant as the ref pushes away Cade and Homicide a little bit from each other as the referee reprimands Homicide for slapping the taste out of Lance Cade’s mouth as Cade responds with a heavy cheap shot right to the jaw of Homicide while the referee’s back was turned. Cade then moves in while Homicide is trying to get some sense of feeling after that hard right shot to the jaw as Lance cade responds with more viscous shots right to the face by using hard strikes with his fist, forearm and elbow as Homicide is up against the turnbuckles. Lance Cade then looks at a bruised Homicide and grabs his arm pulling him away from the turnbuckles as Lance Cade holds Homicide in a Suplex position as Lance Cade then elevates Homicide holding Homicide up in the air showing the impressive power of Lance Cade as Lance Cade taunts against the crowd while Homicide is still up in the air. Homicide then uses his leg to break Cade’s momentum as Homicide then uses his knee to kick into Lance Cade’s head. Homicide is able to break down the momentum that Lance Cade had built by breaking free and hopping back down from the elevated suplex position as he bounces back down onto his feet. Homicide then looks at a wobbly Lance Cade and figures to try and take advantage as Homicide charges and bounces off the ropes and runs back towards Lance Cade then leaping through the air and nails Cade with a West Brooklyn Lariat but Lance Cade doesn’t fall down as Homicide looks shocked. Homicide then gets back up to his feet as Lance Cade looks wobbly and then tries to maintain his equilibrium but drops to one knee as Homicide looks down at Lance Cade as Homicide then charges up against the ropes and bounces off again and runs as fast as he can towards Lance Cade and attempts to nail a Shining wizard right to the face but Lance Cade blocks it as Homicide falls right to his back onto the canvas. Homicide then gets back up to his feet as Lance Cade quickly grabs a hold of Homicide and quickly lifts Homicide up into the air and drops Homicide Down for a hard Inverted atomic drop as Cade still has a hold of Homicide and lifts Homicide up again quickly up into the air and then slams him down heavily for a damaging Spine-Buster in a pseudo Inverted Atomic Drop/Spine-buster combo. Lance Cade then grabs the knees of Homicide from the ground as Hernandez looks on trying to give his Tag Partner some momentum. Lance Cade then drags Homicide closer to his corner near Trevor Murdoch. Lance Cade looks back towards his tag team partner in Murdoch as Lance cade then slingshots Homicide while still holding onto Homicide’s legs towards Trevor Murdoch as Murdoch meets Homicide with a hard and stiff elbow shot right to the forehead as Homicide then falls back over and with Lance Cade holding onto his legs, Homicide falls back down and over bent over Lance Cade’s legs. Trevor then moves over towards the turnbuckles that is closest towards Cade & Homicide as Trevor then climbs up to the top rope. Trevor looks down then flies through the air and drops a Guillotine Leg-drop right across Homicide’s throat flipping him over as Murdoch then rolls Homicide over as Lance Cade moves out and onto the apron as Homicide can barely breath. Murdoch covers over Homicide as the referee counts the 1.........2..... but is broken up by Hernandez coming in and breaking up the count by kicking into Murdoch’s head. Murdoch looks frustrated as the referee tries to move Hernandez back over to his corner and while the referee is distracted, Murdoch moves Homicide over towards his corner on the ground and Lance Cade is trying to choke out Homicide by putting and applying pressure on Homicide’s throat while Murdoch is kicking into Homicide’s side while the referee doesn’t even notice to this devilish double-team attack. When the referee turns his back, back towards Murdoch and Lance Cade, Cade lets go and shows the referee his innocence holding onto the side strap next to the corner turnbuckle as the camera pans on a bruised and battered Homicide as Hernandez is craving for the tag. Murdoch then grabs a hold of Homicide’s arm and drags him towards the center of the ring almost dragging him like a carcass of cattle. Murdoch then lifts Homicide up to his feet as Trevor winds his arm up and then whips Homicide closer to him and cracks a hard clothesline right to the check of Homicide. Murdoch then covers Homicide as the referee checks and makes the count for the 1..........2........but Homicide kicks out at 2 and a 1/2 much to Trevor’s dismay. Trevor then argues with the referee for making the slow count as he then turns back over towards Homicide and Murdoch grabs Homicide’s leg and tries to lock in a leg lock but Homicide finds the strength and kicks off Trevor as Trevor falls flat onto his back as Homicide desperately tries to crawl over and make the tag to Hernandez. Scrapping and clawing his way over towards his side as Murdoch makes the tag over to Lance Cade as Cade quickly gets inside the ring and chases after Homicide and grabs a hold of Homicide’s leg before he could make the tag over to Hernandez. Homicide uses the ropes to get back up to his feet as Lance shakes his head with a smirking grin as He tries to drag Homicide away from the ropes as Homicide is hopping with his leg in Lance Cade’s hands. Homicide makes that desperation reach and makes the tag into Hernandez and as Homicide quickly turns around he strikes with his other leg into a hard leg-whipping Ensugri right to the back of the head of Lance Cade. The crowd cheers when Hernandez is ready to come into the ring like a ball of fire. Murdoch tries to walk over towards his tag team partner, Lance Cade as Hernandez nails a Big Man Dive nailing both Cade & Murdoch on an Over the top rope suicide dive. Hernandez then grabs a hold of a staggering Trevor Murdoch and then flips him over with a Cracker Jack. With Lance Cade lined up next to the turnbuckles, Hernandez notices Lance Cade and charges towards him and leaps through the air and nails a Stinger Splash. Lance Cade’s legs wobble like spaghetti and can barely stand as Hernandez then grabs a hold of Lance Cade’s neck and attempts to hit another Cracker Jack but Lance Cade breaks the hold as he looks at Trevor Murdoch who gets back up to his feet as Murdoch reads Lance Cade’s mind as lance Cade then delivers a Low dropkick right to the knee of Hernandez as Hernandez drops to one knee. Lance Cade then gets back up and bounces off the ropes as Murdoch charges towards the back of Hernandez as Murdoch nails a low clothesline and Lance Cade nails a hard Northern lights lariat to the face of Hernandez for the Sweet & Sour connection. Lance cade makes the cover on-top of Hernandez as the referee makes the count for the 1.......2.... but Homicide makes the diving save against both Murdoch and Cade disrupting the count. Hernandez slowly rolls over as Homicide has a burst of adrenaline kick in as he quickly gets up and grabs the heads of both Murdoch and Cade and connects with a double DDT. Homicide taunts for his Latino Revolution Militants as he then measures up both cade and Murdoch as Hernandez slowly recovers and gets back up to his feet as he charges towards Lance Cade who is up on one knee as Homicide nails a hard running knee lift right to the face of Lance Cade. Homicide then stops in his tacks and notices Trevor Murdoch charging towards him looking for a sharp clothesline as Murdoch misses as Homicide ducked as then Homicide grabs the head of Lance Cade and nails a heavy Ace Cutter knocking Lance Cade out as Lance Cade rolls out of the ring as Homicide continues to beat down on Lance Cade on the outside of the ring. Murdoch tries to clothesline the huge man that is Hernandez as Hernandez takes the punishment and pain of the clothesline but doesn’t budge as Murdoch looks shocked. Hernandez then grabs Murdoch by his throat with both hands and raises him up into the air and then tosses Murdoch into the air in position for a Border Toss. Hernandez holds Murdoch and with his furious Anger, he throws Trevor Murdoch nearly halfway across the ring as Murdoch goes flying through the air like he was a small child. Hernandez then makes the cover on Trevor Murdoch as the referee makes the count for the 1.........2........3.

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After the bell rings, Hernandez rolls off of Trevor Murdoch as LAX Theme song is ringing loudly inside the Wachovia Center. Homicide then slides inside the ring to celebrate with Hernandez. The referee raises both Hernandez and Homicide’s hands in victory as Homicide and Hernandez roll out and celebrate with their fans as Lance Cade rolls into the ring and looks after the condition of his Tag Team partner inside the middle of the ring as Murdoch is screaming in pain. LAX rolls out onto the ramp and taunts for the fans of the Latino Nation as the rabid Philly crowd is going crazy. The cameras in the back then take the crowd in the arena and watching at home inside the Locker Room of AJ Styles preparing for this Tag Team match against Abyss & Umaga. Styles then cracks his neck a little as he seems to be in great shape as Sting walks into his Locker Room and disrupts AJ’s preparation.

Sting: AJ, you have a moment?

AJ Styles: Yeah, what’s up Stinger?

Sting: There’s a time in life where somebody must conquer demons and stand up and make that difference. Your at the prime of your career AJ and quite honestly, in this company have the best talents going. I admire and respect you so much AJ just based off your mere talents alone and I have no reason to doubt that someday, you’ll be a World Champion.

AJ Styles: Really? Coming from you that means alot Sting and I really do mean that. Your an Icon in this industry and its an honor to team with you tonight on SmackDown.

Sting: You know AJ, when I was your age, I did everything I could to learn the very best and do what I had to do to to gain the respect and achieve the accolades that I never thought I could obtain. I think you have the talents to one day, hold a spot next to the likes of Hulk Hogan........ Ric Flair..........The Funks..........And maybe even me and hell, maybe even better than me. But for tonight, lets focus on those 2 monsters and show James Mitchell that Athletic Ability and Respect is better than Strength and Fear and show the devil just how is done.

AJ Styles and Sting agree and walk with each other out of AJ Styles Locker Room. as the camera shows them walking out of the Locker Room as then the cameras on the other side of the Wachovia Center show Larry Sweeney in an office like setting sitting down at a round table with his client Chris Hero sitting along with members Davey Richards and Roderick Strong of the No Remorse Corp. and a very special client in Robert Roode talking business.

Larry Sweeney: AHHHHHHHHH ahahahahahahaha. We Lay it all on the line daddio and we don’t stop until we reach the top. Sweet & Sour Inc. provides only the top quality of insurance possible and with the World’s Greatest Athlete and everybody’s Hero in Chris Hero, were gonna go straight to the top.

Randy Orton is walking by and notices a sign on the door that reads “Sweet and Sour Inc” with blue and pink and green polka dots. Orton looks confused but realizes that an associate of Sweet and Sour Inc. are taking on two of Randy Orton’s possible contenders in Batista and Undertaker in their respective chases for the World Heavyweight Title. Orton has an unforgettable sneer on his face as he notices that the door was left open and from what can be herd in the background is loud laughter from Larry Sweeney and everybody involved inside the special office. Randy Orton cordially walks inside to see a bunch of guys playing poker. Randy Orton has hid his hands in his pockets as he approaches the table as Larry Sweeney notices the Legend Killer and almost instantly stands up and begins to clap to be in the presence of a Legend Killer of his caliber.

Larry Sweeney: Boys, We are in the presence of next World Heavyweight Champion and Randy, it is an honor to have you here but “Champ”, what brings you around these parts?


Randy Orton: Gentlemen, it is with great urgency that tonight is especially important. Not only to me, but to all of you. The fact that guys like Batista and Undertaker don’t want you here is a message of doubt and a message of intimidation that they are trying to send to you. They are afraid of what you guys bring to the table and are afraid of what all of you could do to their legacies. Tonight, you guys are the answer to every young competitor that SmackDown has to offer against the aging decrepit veteran “Seniority” that this brand has to offer. You are the answer to this next generation of Wrestling ability that just so happens to include myself. Chris Hero, your talents are incredible and when you grab the Undertaker by his throat, I want you to send that message of dominance right back at him and send him right back from where he came from being 6 feet under your massive Chokeslam. Roderick and Davey, I want you to tame “The Animal” and euthanize him for good. Guys, this is a mission that if we can execute will not only elevate all of our career’s but more importantly, secure SmackDown and General Manager Nick Malone for the taking and thats a promise.

Robert Roode: Thats great and all with the Rah Rah attitude but what about me? Where do I fall into this equation?

Chris Hero: Rob, your role is very vital to this plan because in order to contain control you have to neutralize the sources from within. With your skills, you have the capabilities to do that and as a team we will stand united against those that want to hold us back. We are the Super Powers that everybody loves to hate for a reason and that is when we get into that ring, every other ordinary simpleton just can’t compare.

Larry Sweeney: For one night only, the No Remorse Corp. joins forces with Sweet & Sour Inc. and I will do everything in my power to assure that all insurance is met. Randy, you have my assurance and after the match, you could come down to the ring and examine this little handy work.

Davey Richard: Mr. Orton, Goodluck with your chase for the Championship but we also have gotta prepare.

Roderick Strong: See ya, later “Champ”.


Roderick Strong and Davey Richards then leaves the Locker Room area dismayed and a little pissed off as Orton looks confused with their remarks Orton looks over at Larry Sweeney.

Randy Orton: What was that meant for?

Larry Sweeney: They must still be pissed over having to loose to the “Poker King” aka me and lost a big chunk of change. 12 Large brother HAHAHAHAHAHAHA.


<CENTER>~ Commercials ~</CENTER>

SmackDown comes back from the commercial break with the cameras featured down onto the announcers Michael Cole and Jonathan Coachman as they are looking to discuss in the upcoming match between Abyss teaming with Umaga going against Sting and AJ Styles. The two very diverse styles in this match-up alone sets the pace for a unique circumstance as you have 2 monsters against the skills and abilities of the Icon Sting and AJ Styles.

Michael Cole: Coach, looking at this next match-up, we really have almost a changing of the guard with the way that Sting has really come to embrace AJ Styles here earlier tonight and when you see it through that vantage point, with the faith of Sting in the mind of AJ Styles, this young man’s career has no boundaries and limits to where it could fly.

Jonathan Coachman: Cole, the way you react to that sort of situation is basically praising Sting and AJ Styles without giving Abyss and Umaga any sort of a chance. Now these two monsters are vicious and will do whatever it takes to make that message clear enough so that even you could understand it. Their message of pain and torture could be a deadly one for Sting and AJ tonight.

Michael Cole: I’m just examining the match down to the surface “Mom”.

Jonathan Coachman: Well your not doing a very good job. I’m expecting at some point in time that I’ll be doing this show by myself.

Michael Cole: Since your such an astute professor of the microphone Coach, you’d make a better example and shut your mouth and call the damn match.

Jonathan Coachman: Alllllright.


<CENTER>Umaga & Abyss vs. Sting & AJ Styles

“Down in the Catacombs”

The lights inside the Wachovia Center go out and turn into pitch-black. Then a red lights shines down over at the top of the stage as James Mitchell walks out with his special Monster as they walk down the ramp. Abyss is holding a Steel chair wrapped around his giant fist. Abyss taunts for James Mitchell as a Fireball Shoots up from behind them as pyro technics. Abyss walks down the ramp imposing fear into the eyes of many of the children that are lined up against the barriers. James Mitchell laughs devilishly at the fear from the children’s eyes. Mitchell walks around the ring as Abyss walks up the steps and then looks at the fans for 2 seconds before he enters the ring as he steps over the top ropes. James Mitchell buttons up his Red suit-jacket as he walks up the steps to the ring as Abyss is standing there with his chain around his neck. Mitchell then grabs a microphone from the side as he then steps inside the ring and walks closer towards Abyss.
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James Mitchell: When Abyss is beating the religious spirit out of Sting and the Phenomenal out of Styles then the only one to blame for the Hero’s being out of commission, will be yourselves. You did this to Abyss and he will respond violently more than any of you could ever imagine. So, lets get this Blood bath under progression.


<CENTER>“Samoan Destruction”

Umaga comes out to the top of the stage like a wild animal as he has on Tribal face paint. Umaga looks at James Mitchell as Mitchell is rubbing his hands together as Umaga yells wildly in his native tongue. Umaga, who isn’t wearing any shoes or boots is walking down the ramp barefoot. Umaga looks at the crowd as he is seething for some intensity and pain. Umaga then progresses down the ramp and rolls himself into the ring as he then stands back up and gets right into the face of Abyss as Abyss doesn’t back down as they meet eye to eye. James Mitchell gets a little bewildered by this confrontation as he looks somewhat confused but as Umaga then stands side by side with Abyss, Mitchell’s attitude subsides as they await Sting and AJ Styles.


“Sting’s Black/White Religious Magic”

Sting & AJ Styles comes out to the top of the stage to a massive roar of applause and cheers from the crowd inside the Wachovia Center in Philadelphia. Sting twirls around his big and black Baseball Bat making James Mitchell feel very nervous and afraid of Sting’s foreign object. Sting looks at AJ Styles who is wearing a special pair of black and white mix tights for the occasion of teaming with Sting as AJ’s hood is still over his head. AJ then flips the hood right off of the jacket over his head as he fully extends his arms taunting for the fans as the boo against Umaga and Abyss. Umaga gets even more intense and angry as he approaches the ropes and violently shakes them as AJ Styles and Sting casually walk down the ramp. As AJ and Sting reach the foot of the ring, Umaga and Abyss then rush out of the ring as these two tag teams start up a battle on the outside before the match has even begun. Abyss grabs a hold of Sting as Umaga battles with AJ Styles as AJ battles with Umaga clubbing some hard right hands back and forth with Umaga as Umaga throws in some heavy uppercuts right to the throat of AJ Styles. Abyss throws in a big knee right to the midsection of Sting as Sting drops his baseball bat to the ground. Abyss tries to Irish Whip Sting into the steel post on the outside of the ring but Sting reverses it as Abyss goes crashing into the steel post. Sting then takes off his trench coat as the referee urges those two to get inside the ring to make this match official. Umaga then nails a hard Savate kick right to the kick of AJ Styles knocking him down flat onto his back on the outside as Umaga then drags Styles over towards the Steel Steps. Umaga nails a couple of hard shots right to AJ’s head with Umaga’s thick right hand. To a prone AJ Styles, Umaga has an insatiable look on his face as he is looking for further destruction with AJ up against the Steel steps. Umaga backs up a little as Sting on the other side of the ring grabs a little bit of Abyss own hair. Umaga examines AJ and still notices that AJ isn’t moving as Umaga yells loudly in his native tongue and then charges at AJ Styles as fast as he can to try and hit the Samoan Wrecking Ball but AJ just manages to roll out of the way as Umaga’s ass and hips hit into the steel steps as Umaga then flips over as AJ takes off his vest and then slowly gets back up to his feet. Sting then rolls Abyss back inside the ring as Sting gets inside as well as the crowd is chanting Sting’s name loudly as the referee rings the bell to make this match now official.
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Sting taunts for his fans as the fans inside the Wachovia Center respond loudly back. Sting picks Abyss up and nails a hard combo of shots right to the face as Abyss backs up a little as Sting continues the assault with his hands. Abyss rests a little up against the turnbuckle as Sting backs up a little attempting to end this match a little early as James Mitchell is screaming at Abyss on the outside of the ring to wake up. Sting charges towards Abyss and attempts to nail the Stinger Splash but Abyss catches Sting in the air. Abyss holds Sting in a bear hug position and carries Sting around the ring for a little bit as Abyss then stops and flips sting a little for an Overhead belly to belly suplex. Abyss then stands back up and walks over to Sting as Abyss then grabs Sting by the throat and lifts Sting up to his feet as Abyss points up to the sky but Sting breaks the chokehold position as Sting then pulls a little momentum back to his side. Sting then grabs a hold of Abyss as he then irish whips Abyss up against the ropes as Abyss then runs to the other side of the ring and bounces off the ropes back towards Sting as Abyss gets caught by Sting as Sting lifts Abyss up into the air and slams him back down for a spine-tingling Spinebuster. Styles notices Umaga slowly getting up on the outside as AJ lets go of the turnbuckle strap as he waits for Umaga to turn around as AJ then starts running off of the apron on his side as Umaga turns around as AJ flies through the air and nails a senton on-top of Umaga as the crowd is going crazy. Sting then gets back up and looks at James Mitchell standing on the apron distracting Sting as Sting walks over towards James Mitchell as Sting grabs Mitchell by the collar and threats to attack Mitchell as Mitchell looks satisfied as he notices his Monster, Abyss, standing back up onto his feet. Sting then turns around back towards Abyss as Abyss quickly picks Sting up into the air in a Military press and then dropped into a flapjack as Sting falls flat onto his chest. Abyss then sits back up and rubs his fist as he looks at Umaga walking back over to their corner. Umaga steps up onto the apron as Umaga looks pissed off as Umaga looks back at Abyss. Umaga wants the tag as Abyss tags in Umaga as Sting could barely move. Umaga stands over the befallen Sting as his eyes bulge as he then stands over sting and looks at AJ Styles in the process as Umaga hits Sting right in the jaw with huge clubbing fists and open palm thrusts against Sting’s face. Umaga has a sick and sadistic face enjoying the pain that he is inflicting onto Sting as Umaga then holds onto Stings throat in a choking motion as Umaga then gives Sting a number of headbutts right to the back of the head/neck area of Sting as Umaga continues to attack his prey. Umaga then puts on a nerve ending hold onto Sting as Umaga yells loudly in his native language as Umaga continues to apply more pressure on the nerve stopping the circulation of Sting’s blood flow to the shoulder as Umaga continues to apply pressure. Sting is slowly loosing his energy as he might pass out as Umaga is smiling disturbed As Sting looks like he might pass out as he makes one last lifeless reach not knowing where he is as Sting reaches and grabs the ropes as Umaga continues to apply pressure. Umaga then drags Sting away from his tag team partner in AJ Styles as Umaga posts Sting up against the bottom ropes as Umaga looks over at a prone Sting and then over at AJ Styles. Umaga backs up a little and taunts over at AJ Styles as Umaga then turns his attention back over towards Sting as Umaga charges towards Sting with a Samoan Wrecking Ball but Sting gets out of the way just in time as Sting gets back up and makes that one desperation leap over to his tag team partner and makes the tag to AJ Styles. AJ Styles comes in like a great ball of fire and just lights up Umaga with a ton of hard and stiff right hands. AJ Styles then tires to irish whip Umaga but Umaga’s strength is big enough to withstand AJ’s momentum as Umaga pulls AJ towards him with Umaga catching AJ Styles and tosing Aj up into the air attempting to do a Wild Samoan Drop as AJ gets Gorilla pressed up high into the air but Aj flips out and turns around towards Umaga coming back down and nailing a hard forearm strike against Umaga’s back. AJ Styles then nails a picture perfect Dropkick against Umaga as Umaga gets wobbly and falls out of the ring. AJ looks at the crowd and feels the adrenaline pumping Sting looks at Umaga on the outside and then walks inside the ring and pleads with AJ not to do it. AJ looks at Sting and then rejects Sting offer as AJ charges towards the ropes at full speed and looks at Umaga on the outside. AJ then leaps through the air and connects with a Fosbury Flop landing right on-top of Umaga on the outside. Sting looks in shock at AJ laying motionless on the outside of the ring as Abyss gets inside the ring waiting for Sting to turn around as Sting has no clue as Sting shakes his head in disappointment as Sting turns around and gets caught by Abyss as Abyss nails a devastating Black Whole Slam on Sting as James Mitchell looks excited and delighted as Abyss taunts for himself as Abyss covers Sting over as the referee checks to see if Stings shoulders are down as Abyss makes the cover for the 1..........2.......3.

After the match, James Mitchell pulls out Sting’s special Black Baseball bat and tosses it to Abyss to makes the catch as Abyss notices Sting slowly getting up to his feet with some help from the ropes. Abyss then looks at the sleek Bat up and down as he then points the Bat towards Sting. Sting then turns around holding his back as Abyss swings for the fences and nails Sting right in the stomach as Abyss then drops the Bat and picks Sting up and hoists Sting in a Torture Rack position as Abyss then drills Sting’s Ribs with a devastating Shock Treatment. Abyss then looks satisfied with his handy work but James Mitchell wants more as he wants Abyss to take Sting’s life. Abyss then grabs the Bat and hovers the bat over Stings’ throat pressing and applying pressure as Abyss then gets into a Camel’s clutch Position with the bat, basically choking the life out of Sting as Sting is grasping for air with each passing breath. James Mitchell stands infront of Abyss and laughs Devilishly. Sting looks to be lifeless as James Mitchell commands Abyss to stop this heinous attack. Abyss and James Mitchell then look down at their handy-work and leave the ring as Aj awakes from the Fosbury Flop to tend to his damaged team-mate in Sting with regret in his eyes. Abyss & James Mitchell are back up at the top of the stage with evil transfixed in their eyes.


<CENTER>~ Commercials ~</CENTER>

Coming back from the break, the cameras in the backstage area find Nick Malone walking back to his area of the Wachovia Center as he opens up his door and walks over to his desk as he takes a seat and then turns on his monitor to get ready to watch the Main Event between Batista & The Undertaker vs. Chris Hero & No Remorse Corp. Members Davey Richards and Roderick Strong as Nick Malone kicks back and tries to relax when he puts his feet up and his foot touched the answering machine by accident as he listens to a message by Kurt Angle who says he is gonna be on SmackDown next week and that he is gunning for the World Heavyweight Title come WrestleMania 24. Nick Malone shakes his head and rolls his eyes back when he hears the door shut loudly as the lights begin to flicker as there is nobody inside the room with Nick Malone at this time as Nick Malone begins to get a little paranoid. Nick Malone’s seat begins to shake uncontrollably as he has no idea what is going on. Nick Malone feels petrified as if a ghost is trying to haunt him as a deathly chill is in the air inside Nick Malone’s office inside the Wachovia Center. Nick Malone hears a deep voice as he murmurs to himself to try and calm himself down.

Undertaker: Death awaits no man. Randy Orton will feel the cold grip of Deaths’ vices and General Manager..........You have options to save your soul from being castrated from your body.

Nick Malone: WHO.......Who is There?

Undertaker: It is I, the keeper of lost souls and at WrestleMania, Death will prevail for the 16th time in 16 chances and for you Mr. Malone, your decision may be your last. The World Heavyweight Title remains vacant and for SmackDown’s sake, the new World Heavyweight Champion will reside from Death Valley. The vultures can pick apart from the souls that fear for their own mortality. Next Week, The Undertaker will become the next World Heavyweight Champion.

Nick Malone: Ahhhhhh......oooooo........

As Nick Malone is about to agree with the Undertaker on this decision, Batista comes charging into the General Manager’s Locker Room almost with disgust in his eyes.

Batista: Woah. Hold up and wait a minute. Did I just hear that you were about to grant this Bastard a match at the World Heavyweight Title without even proving himself? Deadman, I know were partners this week but if you even come close to thinking that the “Animal” doesn’t deserve a Title shot more than yourself, then you must of taken to many shots to your head because I clearly remember being screwed on more than one occasion. Now, Mr. General Manager, it is within your best interest to grant me a match for the World Heavyweight Title before this man even comes close.

Undertaker: Batista, our score hasn’t been settled but it will be put to rest.

Nick Malone: Alright, Since both of you two want a title match then how about this, since you two are partners tonight against Chris Hero and the No Remorse Corp., think of it this way, If you guys win tonight then next week on SmackDown from our Nations Capital, then in a Fatal 4 Way for the World Heavyweight Title; It will be Randy Orton vs. Undertaker vs. Batista vs. a contestant of my choosing and that is all consistent and conditional proving that you can defeat Chris Hero, Davey Richards and Roderick Strong in that very ring. Now get the Hell out of my office and don’t scare me like that ever again.

The Undertaker and Batista argue and dispute with each other leaving Nick Malone’s office as Nick Malone tries to organize everything on his desk as he shakes his head as the scene ends as the screen fades to black heading to another quick commercial break.


<CENTER>~ Commercials ~

The Undertaker & Batista vs. Chris Hero & No Remorse Corp. (Davey Richards & Roderick Strong) with Larry Sweeney

"It's A Bird, It's A Plane"

Larry Sweeney walks out with his client from Sweet & Sour Inc. in Chris Hero as the two men that follow Sweeney and Hero are the 2 members from the No Remorse Corp. in Davey Richards and Roderick Strong as Hero taunts for himself while Larry Sweeney makes fun of the dirty and filthy fans from Philadelphia that came to the Wachovia Center to attend this WWE: SmackDown event. Sweeney can’t stop laughing for himself as Richards and Strong are soley focused on improving their stock on SmackDown and by taking out the Undertaker and Batista, that would increase their stock dramatically as they make their way down to the ring. Larry Sweeney’s charisma shines through the television screen as he has on a 1970’s pure white leisure suit as Larry Sweeney can’t stop smiling as he watches Chris Hero and NRC walk down to the foot of the ring. Chris Hero gets up onto the apron as he taunts for himself as he gets a response of mostly boo’s with some feint cheers as he then steps into the ring from the apron as Larry Sweeney grabs a microphone to describe all 3 men standing inside the middle of the ring as he can barely contain himself.
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Larry Sweeney: For all of you Ham n’ Eggers living your 9-5 desk job, I present to you, your true Hero and a man of the people in Chris Hero!!

A loud response of Boo’s comes out from the crowd as doesn’t feel that Hero really stands out for the people as then Larry Sweeney moves over to his business Associates in the No Remorse Corp.

Larry Sweeney: To my right, is the most lethal and technical group to ever lace up their boots much less appear inside a wrestling ring in Davey Richards and Roderick Strong. For one night only, we will show the Animal and that “Deadman” whose really......in charge of SmackDown AHHHHHHH HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA.


<CENTER>“Symphony of Darkness”

Just as Larry Sweeney continued to speak endlessly, about Chris Hero and the business relationship between Sweet & Sour Inc. with No Remorse Corp. the lights inside the Wachovia Center go out as the sounds of Thunder and Lightning can be herd up near the top of the stage as the crowd from Philly is going in a frenzy as they start chanting the Undertaker’s name. Larry Sweeney then angrily exits the ring and almost immediately heads over to the announcers table as the Undertaker comes out from the haze and shadows of the darkness as the Undertaker almost commands this presence when he comes out and onto the stage as he just walks fluidly and effortlessly as the Undertaker is getting the respect of the fans as he is dressed and ready to take the souls of Chris Hero, Davey Richards and Roderick Strong. The Undertaker then reaches the foot of the ring as the fog of the haze is still flowing down the ramp as the Undertaker is striking fear into the eyes of Chris Hero. The Undertaker then walks over towards the steel steps and walks up one step at a time and as he settles on the top step, the Undertaker then poses with his arms raising slightly in the air letting the lights inside the Wachovia Center come back on. The Undertaker then rolls his eyes into the back of his head as Chris Hero looks mortified. Chris Hero tries to not be the first participant of the Undertaker’s wrath but Davey Richards and Roderick Strong force him to be as the Undertaker enters inside the ring and then takes off his Black, leather trench coat and then slowly takes off his hat with his eyes rolled into the back of his head once more. The Undertaker then settles into his corner as Larry Sweeney has a rebuttal for guys like the Undertaker over at the Announcers Booth.
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Larry Sweeney: Coach and Cole, Nothing and I mean NOTHING, enrages me more than what these “Veterans” do to hold down the younger talent just because of the fear that they have of being put on the shelf and its simply pathetic when a guy like the Undertaker has to disrupt the greatness that is Larry Sweeney.


<CENTER>“I Walk Alone”

The theme song for the “Animal” Batista begins to play loudly inside the Wachovia Center as the crowd is up on their feet awaiting the arrival of Batista as the Undertaker looks at all 3 of his opponents as he backs up into the Undertakers corner as Batista’s music keeps playing but there is no Batista. The Undertaker then looks over at the top of the stage with a menacing stare to find out where his partner could be as Larry Sweeney is jovial now that Batista isn’t arriving for this match as Sweeney can’ stop laughing knowing that his team has the 3 on one advantage. Up on the Titan-Tron shows the cameras backstage notice Batista laid out and knocked out cold as Batista isn’t moving as the Undertaker feels disappointed as he realizes now now he is in a situation all by himself as the referee looks concerned as the Undertaker then understands his mission as the video coverage of Batista being looked over by the medical trainer trying to gage the severity of the attack. The referee then rings the bell to make this match official as Chris Hero comes charging at the Undertaker once the bell rings.
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The Undertaker has the instincts and awareness to reach his massive hand out that manages to catch Chris Hero as the Undertaker holds Hero in a possible Chokeslam as the Undertaker’s eyes of venom seem ready to strike as the Undertaker shakes his head in a rejection of remorse to let go of Chris Hero. Larry Sweeney then abandons the Announcer booth position and gets the referee’s attention by causing the distraction. Larry Sweeney gets up and onto the apron as the Undertaker turns his head with the referee walking over to Larry Sweeney to get him off the ring apron. Chris Hero takes advantage of the situation by then giving the Undertaker an illegal kick to the groin behind the referee’s back. Chris Hero then grabs the Undertaker from behind and sets the Undertaker up and executes the Super Hero's Welcome of a lifted rolling cutter on the Undertaker as Chris Hero eagerly goes for the quickly cover as Larry Sweeney then hops off the apron as the referee turns around and rushes to make the count as the referee counts the 1........2..... but the Undertaker kicks out. Chris Hero then quickly moves over and grabs a hold of the Undertaker and maneuvers the position into an Eastern stretch. Chris Hero is holding the ropes to gain more leverage of an extension on the hold while the referee is checking to see if the Undertaker will submit and when the referee checks to see if Hero is holding the ropes, the referee forces Hero to break the hold as the referee makes the count and gets up to 4 before 5 of which Hero lets go. Chris Hero then antagonizes the referee as Larry Sweeney keeps cheering for Chris Hero. Hero then goes over to tag in Davey Richards into the ring. Davey Richards looks at the Undertaker slowly getting back up to his feet as the Undertaker moves over towards the turnbuckles as Davey Richards charges and sprints towards the Undertaker and nails the Deadman with a Running elbow smash to the cornered Undertaker followed by a running Lariat but the Lariat doesn’t knock the Undertaker down as Davey Richards looks shocked after that Lariat as then Davey Richards then nails a low dropkick right to the knee of the Undertaker as then the speedy Davey Richards gets back up to his feet looking at the Undertaker then pauses for a moment and then nails a hard shoot kick right to the chest of the Undertaker as the Undertaker becomes enraged as Davey Richards then quickly grabs the Undertaker by the head and drops the Undertaker with a snap DDT driving the Undertaker head first into the canvas. The Undertaker then rolls over onto his back for a moment while Davey Richards taunts for himself and the No Remorse Corp. The crowd heavily boo’s Richards taunts as he then sits and then stands back up. What Davey Richards isn’t expecting is to see the Undertaker sit up after the barrage of attacks from the NRC member as Richards looks surprised as Richards tries to kick the Undertaker back down but with each kick, the Undertaker seems to be getting stronger. the Undertaker then stands up and as Davey Richards tries to punch the Undertaker, the Undertaker blocks it and grabs a hold of Davey Richards and then tosses him over towards the turnbuckles away from Roderick Strong and Chris Hero as the Undertaker opens up Davey Richards with some of the best strikes in the business with his huge hands as he finds holds in Davey Richards and exploits them like a boxer; dipping and weaving in a combo formation finding and pummeling Richards down to the lower Turnbuckle as Richards can barely breath because of the strength from the strikes from the Undertaker. The Undertaker then back up a little and looks right at both Roderick Strong and Chris Hero as Davey Richards tries to get back up to his feet by holding onto the ropes. The Undertaker then stops right in his tracks and then quickly turns around and charges like a speeding freight train towards Davey Richards and nails Davey with a Corner Clothesline. Davey looks like he’s on Spaghetti legs as he can barely stand as he wobbles over towards the middle of the ring as the Undertaker then keeps running towards Davey Richards as he bounces off the ropes and flies through the air and takes Davey Richards down with a Flying clothesline. The Undertaker then goes for a cover as he rolls over Davey Richards for a count of the 1............2..... but Davey barely kicks out. The Undertaker breathes heavily as he picks Davey Richards up by his throat and brings Richards back up to his feet The Undertaker then hoists Richards up into his arms as the Undertaker walks over towards the Turnbuckles and then drops Richard face first onto the turn buckle as Richards blindly tags in his tag team partner of Roderick Strong as Roderick gets inside the ring as Roderick gets in-front of the Undertakers direction as the Undertaker ducks Roderick after a clothesline attempt and levels Davey Richards with a big boot to the face knocking Richards out of the ring all together as Roderick turns around and is met with a throat throttling choke hold as the Undertaker menacingly looks into the eyes of Roderick Strong and then puts Roderick’s arm over his shoulder as the Undertaker then lifts Roderick Strong up high into the air and then slams him right back down onto his spine for a Choke slam as Roderick then rolls out of the ring as Chris Hero comes into the ring and clubs the Undertaker on the back with a huge forearm as then Chris Hero tries to pick up the Undertaker and then holds the Undertaker in position for a Body Slam as Chris Hero walks around parading for the fact that he is holding the Undertaker off his feet. Chris Hero then looses his momentum as the Undertaker is able to gain the momentum and flip Chris Hero Over as the Undertaker is standing in position with Hero for a Tombstone Piledriver. The Undertaker then drills Chris Hero’s head and all of his weight onto his head for an earth shattering, Tombstone Piledriver. The Undertaker then folds Chris Hero’s arms together and makes the cover as the referee makes the count for the 1..........2..........3.

Much to Larry Sweeney’s disbelief, his frustrations run wild as Davey Richards and Roderick Strong retreat back up the ramp. Larry Sweeney festers this anger as he enters the ring and tries to nail as hard of a shot to the Undertaker’s back as possible but unfortunately with Chris Hero rolled out to the outside of the ring, the punch is ineffective to the Undertaker as the Undertaker turns around and looks at Larry Sweeney dead in the eyes and grabs Larry Sweeney by the throat and Lifts Larry up into the air and then sends him back down thanks to a massive Chokeslam and as Larry lays prone on the mat, Randy Orton makes his way out onto the top of the stage after the match had ended. Randy watches from afar as the Undertaker then looks over at Orton and then takes his thumb and makes a fist as he crosses the thumb across his throat sending a message to Randy Orton as the Undertaker then grabs the arm of Larry Sweeney and wraps Larry Sweeney up in the Gogoplata. Orton looks frustrated as the Undertaker is applying alot of pressure on Sweeney’s throat as Larry Sweeney instantly taps out as the more pressure that Undertaker applies bring about blood coming from Larry’s throat as Larry passes out with the Undertaker applying more and more pressure down on Larry Sweeney’s throat. The Undertaker then lets go of Larry as the Undertaker then gets up onto one knee looking at Randy Orton over at the top of the stage. The Undertaker then poses in the chill of nightfall as the lights have gone out with blue and purple lights shine down inside the ring as the Undertaker prays to the dead of night as the Undertaker lowers his head as the SmackDown screen fades to black to end the show.
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Intro Video: Really well written but i dont think you needed to do so much for something that wont be directly affecting your show.

Cole & Coach Intro: Nicely done & didnt drag on. My only quibble would be them putting Danilson & McGunniess in the same sentance as Angle, Undertaker & Sting. On the big stage, those guys have done nothing yet.

JB, Malone,Orton & Noble segment: I dont know why but for some reason i had Jim Cornette's voice for your bits. I think Orton got too much in, it makes Malone look like a push-over. You can interupt him & he wont do anything until your finished talking.

That Yellow is also very hard to read.


Match 1: I dont know why Rocky was getting booed for wearing a NRC shirt. Afterall they have done nothing in WWE so it was in effect, booing him for no reason.I know its the ROH area but its WWE now. The majority, dont know ROH exists.

The first half of the match is really well done. Very even. Right now i'm saying Noble to win.

So far my only critisism is some sentances seem to run and run and run. I'm after coming across one where in by the time i was finished, i forgot what the start was. I counted approx. 90 words. Thats a paragraph not a sentance.

The Second half of the match was equally good & equal. A great match to open your BTB with even if it did run at times. I just hope you dont plan on having Lethal injured for long.


Mitchell Promo: Dissapointed with the way you disreagrded some of TNA storylines (Mitchell & Abyss being enemies) but included others (Sting & Abyss). The promo itself was brilliant & fits Mitchell really well. I like the idea of Teaming Abyss & Umaga.

Second Match: Another really good match but it's hard to read when its in one big chunk. I lost my place several times whilst reading it. Glad that LAX won & i hope you have good intentions for them.

Sting & Styles segment: A nice shortish segment that got the point across. I do however suspect a heel turn from Styles tonite.

Office segment: I admit i dont know most of the people involved, but Roode seemed out of caracter, he's not one to sit there quietly & say very little. Orton tho was perfectly in caracter.

Third Match: Good idea to jump start the match. With Mitchell invloved it was never going to be a fair fight. A nice win for Abyss & Umaga that i was not expecting unless Styles turned on Sting. A good thing that, not being predictable. I liked the post-match attack aswell. Puts Mitchell over as Evil & Abyss over as a Controled Monster. You had good consistancey in keeping Styles & Umaga out.

Malone, Undertaker & Batista segment: Was Batista standing outside with his ear against the door? He seemed to get there very quickly & know everything that had been said.

Main Event: Another good match but i'm not sure about the partisipants. NRC & Chris Hero in the main event against two former champions & current main everters on their debute? A bit too much in my opinion.

The pre-match backstage attack gets done a lot but i think it worked for this case. Orton or Sweeny & Co. would be the obvious suspects but i'm thinking it was The Undertaker, he did say their score hadent been setteled.

My Ratings:

Match Making: 6/10. Too many new guys not givin a proper intro. When someone from ROH debuts in WWE they arent known as face or heel already. A lot of your guys seemed to be decided before they even appeared.

Match Writing: 7/10. The matches were really well written but they went too long.

Promos: 9/10. Some great writing for the backstage segments.

Spelling/Grammer: 6/10. Spelling was near perfect but a lot of sentances just kept going.

Flow: 7/10. I'm not a fan of useing the commentators to go between segments unless they are calling the match aswell, so you lost points for that. The matches & segments themselves tho, flow nicely but also go on too long.

Overall: 70%. A really good show, but, the lenght will hurt you more than it will help you. It puts people off reading if it is this long & it takes a lot of your time to do. Keep it up, but i'd advise you shorten it down a little.
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