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Joseph T. Cool

Administrator

Content is well done....found several typos/mis spellings but I won't be a dick and point those out.

Good job Shaun...

*Goes to read Daren's now*

Danny Diamond

Founder/Admin

I will point them out. You misspelled Torrie Wilson. I believe its spelt Beth Phoenix. Crocker seems to have pulled a Simon on this one.

At least I know when to not even start something like this. lol

Blitzkrieg

He hasn't updated it in a couple days, but it's only a couple days.. give him time lol. I do read most of these by the way, I just usually wait for them to get rolling before I make a lot of comments. Too bad about Layla's departure

Crocker

Ive been extremly busy the past few days, the first episode of Raw weill be on Monday

Crocker

Raw opens with General Manager Armando Astrada in the ring

Armando Astrada Welcome to the first edition of the new era of Raw, which is also a new era for the WWE. Tonight we will have the semi finals of a tournament to decide the new WWE Tag Team champions, the teams in the tournament are Deuce & Domino, The Highlanders, Tommy Dreamer & Balls Mahooney and the team of Lance Cade & Trevor Murdoch.

Tonight also sees the start of an eight man tournament to crown a new WWE Champion, the eight men in the tournament are John Cena, Shawn Micheals, Matt Hardy, M.V.P, John Bradshaw Layfield, Chris Jericho, Randy Orton and The Undertaker with the final being at Wrestlemania in Orlando, Florida

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We return to Jillian Hall in the ring with John Bradshaw Layfield in time for his upcoming tournament match

JBL I am pleased to announce that I have reappointed Jillian Hall as my perseonel assistant, it is hard work being a wrestling god

Jillian Hall Thank you John, I will do everyting in my power to help John become WWE Champion for the second time.

JBL You see people its very simple, tonight I start with a victory over John Cena and I dont care who else I have to face along the way, weather it be The Undertaker, Matt Hardy, Chris Jericho or even Shawn Micheals

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JWWE Championship Tournament John Bradshaw Layfield vs John Cena JBL wins the match ia pinfall after Randy Orton enetered the ring during the match an hit an RKO on Cena as Jillian Hall distracted the referee

Winner John Bradshaw Layfield

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Backstage Michelle McCool is being interviewed by Micheal Cole

Micheal Hello Michelle and welcome to the Raw brand

Michelle Thank you Micheal, I am pleased to be here on Raw and I plan to prove to the world that I can be the top diva in the WWE, you see I plan on.....

Jillian Hall enters

Jillian Michelle darling you cant just come here onto Raw and flap your gums and say that you want to be the top diva in the WWE, you see to be the most dominent diva in the WWE you have to get past me.

Jillian hits Michelle with a vicous slap and leaves

WWE Tag Team Championship Tournament Semi Fina Trevor Murdoch & Lance Cade vs The Highlanders

Lance & Trevor win a short match when Murdoch pins Rory McAllister after a Hi-Lo

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WWE Championship Tournament Match Shawn Micheals vs Matt Hardy In a fantastic Matt went for the twist of fate only for HBK to push Matt into the turnbuckle and then hit him with sweet chin music for the punfall victory

Winner Chris Jericho

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WWE Championship Tournament Match M.V.P vs Chris Jericho Y2J wins an exciting match after a Lionsault onto Porter

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WWE Tag Team Championship Semi Final Deuce & Domino vs Tommy Dreamer & Balls Mahooney A short match ends when Tommy pins Deuce after a rollup

Winners Tommy Dreamer & Balls Mahooney

After the match Lance Cade & Trevor Murdoch attack Balls and Tommy with steel chairs and leave them laying in the ring after a vicous beatdown

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WWE Championship Tournament Match Randy Orton vs The UndertakerDuring the heated match which has swung both ways John Cena comes down and throws The Undertaker out of the ring to cause a disqualification

Winner The Undertaker

Randy is livid and tries to hit Cena with an RKO but Cena reverses it by throwing him into the rope and hitting Orton with the FU, The Undertaker returns to the ring and hits Cena with a chokeslam to end the show

God

Super Moderator

Nice segment to open altho i asume the last bit is a typo.





Not a fan of Jillian Hall being back with Bradshaw, i think she should be going for the womens title.


Jillian gets around quickly. I think Melina would have been better for this segement. With an ego like hers she could easily fit in the bitch role of Jillian.

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WWE Tag Team Championship Tournament Semi Fina Trevor Murdoch & Lance Cade vs The Highlanders

Finally someone attacks the guy who is not their enemy so as they get the win. It has never made sense to me as to why they always attack the enemy therfor giving him a win.


My Ratings:

Match Making: 9/10. Your biggest strenght.

Match Writing: n/a. You said you were very busy so i wont rate on this.

Promos: 4/10. Almost non-existant.

Spelling/Grammer: 7/10. A few mistakes but nothing much.

Flow: 3/10. The advert break between every segment was bad placement.

Overall: 46%. An ok start but hopefully it will improve when you have more time.

Crocker

I actually drafted Melina to Smackdown, and theres another reason I used Jillian for the segment

Crocker

Mick Foley is pleased to announce that Taijiri and Juventud Guerrera have signed up to the Smackdown brand.

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Jayman

Super Moderator

My Ratings:

Match Making: 9/10. You are leaving a lot of options wide open. The sky's the limit

Match Writing: 5/10 Not a whole lot there, very quick results, which can be good. I doubt people read my entire matches on CWF anyway, lol.

Promos: 6/10. What I see, I enjoy. But I'm sure there will be more as angles heat up.

Spelling/Grammer: 8/10. Not enough to really annoy me. You could always do the writing in Word, do spell check, then copy it over to a post.

Flow: 7/10. The advert break is assumed, not sure if you really need to put it there each time. Good flow between promos and matches

Overall: 85%. I dare say this is more enjoying than most RAW's we watch on USA lately. Looking forward to more.

Crocker

Armando Astrada is pleased to announce that he has pesuaded Lance Storm to come out of retirement and return to the Raw brand.

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