Apw.

God

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(all from old forum first)

heres the titles, roster etc.


UNIVERSAL TITLE - TBC
WORLD TITLE - TBC
NO LIMITS TITLE - TBC
TAG TEAM TITLES - TBC


ROSTER:
AJ Styles
Christian Cage
Chris Benoit
Raven
Rhino
Jeff Jarrett
Jeff Hardy
Monty Browne
Bobby Roode
Shelton Benjamin
Matt Hardy
Steve Corino
Paul Birchill
William Regal
Alex Shelley
Samoa Joe
Petie Williams
Sonjay Dutt
Paul London
Kid Kash
Brian Kendrick
Chavo Geurrero Jr
Sean Waltman
Maven
Gragery Helms
Orlando Jordan
Viscera
Simon Dean
Steven Richards
Spike Dudley
Hardcore Holly
Chirs Daniels
Rob Van Dam
Chris Harris
James Storm
Brother Devon
Brother Ray
Garrison Cade
Mark Jindrak
Sean O Haire
Chase Stevens
Andy Douglas
Joey Mercury
Johnny Nitro
Scott Hall
Kevin Nash
Matt Cappotelli
Melina
Gail Kim
Christy Hemme
Mickie James

COMMINTATORS:
Mike Tennay
Jim Ross
Joey Styles

BACKSTAGE INTERVIEWERS:
Maria
Tazz
Shane Douglas

PROGRAMMING:
Fatal: one and a half hour weekly show
PPV: once every two months






MATCHES BOOKED FOR WEEK ONE:

Chavo Geurrero Jr & Kid Kash VS Paul London & Brian Kendrick

NO LIMITS TITLE TOURNAMENT SEMI FINAL MATCH
Alex Shelley VS Petie Williams

NO LIMTS TITLE TOURNAMENT SEMI FINAL MATCH
Chris Daniels VS Sonjay Dutt VS Samoa Joe

TAG TEAM TITLE TOURNAMENT SEMI FINAL MATCH
Chris Harris & James Storm AMW VS Garrison Cade & Mark Jindrak

TAG TEAM TITLE TOURNAMENT SEMI FINAL MATCH
Joey Mercury & Johnny Nitro W/Melina MNM VS Brother Ray & Brother Devon Team 3D

WORLD TITLE QUARTER FINAL MATCH
AJ Styles VS Shelton Benjamin




ok heres the first show from APW



Fatal
Week one

Kid Kash & Chavo Geurrero Jr. vs Paul London & Brian Kendrick.
Kash with a stiff kick to the spine of kendrick, and now he's just slapped the head of kendrick showing a complete lack of respect! Kendrick is gonna have to get to London he has been isolated in Kash and Chavos corner for at least five minutes now. Kendrick with a punch to the mid section of Kash, and another Kash is winded, Kendrick tries to run to London but Kash has a handful of hair and pulls him down, another cheap tactic by Kash and Chavos team. Kash pushes Kendrick into his corner and follows up with a quick clothsline, now going for a running bulldog but Kendrick holds onto the ropes and a right hand to Chavo on the apron and a roll through and the tag to London! London jumps over the top and a dropkick to Kash, spinning heel kick to Chavo, superkick to Kash and a dropsault to Chavo who falls through the ropes to the floor. Heres Kendrick, SUICIDE DIVE through the ropes to Chavo who goes spine first into the security rail. Kash with a club to the back of London, and now a reverse ddt, the pin, 1,2, and a kickout by London. Kash is upset London kicked out and he drags him to his feet,goin for the dead level! up goes London, London fighting it, tryin to get down and he does into a small package 1,2,3 he got it! a quick counter by London and its over Kash cant believe it!
London and Kendrick celebrating on the way up the ramp but in the ring Chavo and Kash are argueing! oh, Chavo with a low blow! what the hell what that for? Chavo oh with a brainbuster to Kash! is this because Kash got pinned? and Chavo now picks up Kash and throws him over the top rope. ok, Chavo you made your point! wait Chavo has gone out to Kash, now whats he doing? oh no a gory bomb? on the outside? up OH MY GOD, OH MY GOD,a dam gory bomb onto the ring steps, Kash is busted open! their was no need for that dam it! Chavo now has a chair enough is enough, come on! Chavo is gonna smash Kash's head into the steps, no dont! wait its London and Kendrick back and Chavo has gone running in the opposite direction! thank god someone came to help Kash cause i dont think Chavo was gonna stop! London and Kendrick may not like Kid Kash but they respect him which is something Chavo doesnt do! Kendrick and London now helping Kash up the ramp to the back! (12 minutes 51 seconds)


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Alex Shelley vs Petie Williams
Shelley has now managed to slow the pace down afetr a vicious start, a clothesline by Shelley who now goes to the second rope, a diving leg drop but Williams rolls out of the way! now Williams going for a sharpshooter, hes trying to turn Shelley but Shelley is fighting for his life, Williams not giving up, and he got it Shelley screaming in pain! and to make it even worse for him hes in the centre of the ring, Shelley trying to crawl to the ropes but Williams pulls him back to the centre and now Williams is really leaning into it! Shelley still trying to crawl to the ropes and he taps out! he gave it his best shot but just couldent hold on in the sharpshooter as Petie Williams advances to the final of the no limits title tounament! (7 minutes 02 seconds)


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Samoa Joe vs Sonjay Dutt vs Christopher Daniels
Dutt with a dropkick to Joe and now a dropkick to Daniels and now another dropkick to Joe who falls out of the ring, Dutt to the second rope, flying cross body to Daniels but Daniels duckes Dutt crashes down and Joe now back in and put the choke hold on Dutt, Dutt taps out! (4 minutes 37 seconds)
Daniels going for the angel wings but i dont think he can get Joe up, Daniels tries again but Joe hits a northern lights suplex on Daniels and now a stiff, stiff kick to the side of the head of Daniels! i think Joe might have knocked out Daniels! Joe looking down at Daniels with a smile on his face, Joe, dragging Daniels to his feet picks him up and just places him on the top rope, a slap to the face of an unconcious Daniels, Joe picks Daniels off and a running muscle buster, Daniels is done, Joe will be facing Petie Williams in two weeks time for the no limits title! Joe has picked Daniels up and again put him on the top rope,c'mon just pin him already, Joe with another muscle buster,1,2,3! its mercifully over! all i can say is Petie Williams better be ready in two weeks time because Joe wants the gold! (9 minutes 54 seconds)


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Cade and Jindrak are waiting in the ring but their is no sign of their opponents AMW! here the D.O.A. Paul Heyman what does he plan to do about this? Heyman:"you guys think your very cleaver dont you? i seen the security footage of you two taking out AMW during the last match! so tonite you two do not win by default, the match is not cancelled it has been postponed until next week! oh and one more thing, thats your pass anything else and the both of you......are fired! have a pleasent week." (4 minutes 09 seconds)


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MNM W/ Melina vs Team 3d
Ray with a full nelson bomb to Nitro, Mercury gets a reverse ddt from Devon! Team 3d are now in total control! Ray: "DEVON................GET THE TABLES!!!" get the tables? Team 3d will get disqualified if they use a table, this is not a smart move they will be out of the title hunt if they get disqualified! the table is set up on the outside by Team 3d, Mercury and Nitro jump Team 3d from behind! Ray and Devon now thrown back into the ring. Mercury has just gotten a kick in the face from Devon as he was getting in the ring, Nitro with a superkick to Ray and a ddt for Devon, Nitro rolls Devon over for the pin but wait thats, thats s
Spike, Spike is on the apron! Nitro with a running forearm to Spike who crashes through the table, Nitro turns, 3D, 3D, 3D, the pin, the count, the three! Team 3d advance in the tournament! (13 minutes 22 seconds)


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AJ Styles vs Shelton Benjamin
Styles with a running clothsline, and another, and a third, finnally Benjamin stays down, Styles off the ropes and a standing shooting star press simply phenominal! the pin,1,2, and a kickout by Benjamin! Styles to the second rope and jumps for a forearm smash but Benjamin hits a superkick, no Styles cought the foot of Benjamin, and pushes it away, Benjamin goes around and hits Styles with the dragon whip, Styles stumbles into the corner, Benjamin with the stinger splash, and now the t-bone suplex its over, the pin 1,2,and thr... no Styles somehow kicked out, Benjamin cant believe it!
what a match this has turned out to be! its a shame we cant have this match every week! Benjamin goes for the t-bone suplex again, Styles up, and over, but Styles has landed on his feet how the hell did he do that? the pe-le out of nowhere, Styles again to the second rope but Benjamin runs up the turnbuckles and goes for a hurricaranna but Styles manages to hold on Benjamin is hanging upside down Styles stands, setting Benjamin up for the styles clash off the second rope and he hits it, he hit it! Styles rolls Benjamin over the pin 1,2,3. Benjamin kicks out just after the three! Styles got the win in an amazing match! both men getting a standing ovation that they both thourally deserve! Styles offering his hand to Benjamin, who returns the gesture! (20 minutes 51 seconds)


::end of show::
total time: 1 hour 28 minutes.




APW news update
#Joey Mercury has suffered a broken nose but still plans to wrestle if needed this week on fatal.
#Kid Kash will not be at fatal this week due to Chavo Geurreo Jr attack on him after the match vs Brian Kendrick & Paul London.
#Garrison Cade & Mark Jindrak are in trouble with the D.O.A. Paul Heyman again after no-showing a house show on thursday nite.
#Their are rumors flieing around that APW are in too deep and may an investor to help them out. APW managment have thus far refused to comment on the matter.




Fatal WEEK 2
(i dont have the time to write out the matches anymore so its just a summary)



Paul London W/Brian Kendrick VS Chavo Geurrero Jr
Waltman interfers but Kendrick fights him off, The debuting Elix Skipper then costs London the match after hitting him with a steel chair.

TAG TEAM TOURNAMENT SEMI FINAL MATCH
Chase Stevens & Andy Douglas The Naturals VS ???
Turns out to be Kevin Nash & Scott Hall. The naturals win by DQ when Hall Hits Chase Stevens with a low blow then Nash hits him with a pipe.

Raven attacks Gregory Helms backstage. Reason Unknown.

Gail Kim VS Mickie James
Mickie James wins by pin fall after distraction by Christy Hemme.

Team 3D & Newest member Spike VS MNM W/Melina & ???
Mystery partner is Steve Corino. Corino pins Spike after a top-rope DDT. After the match Melina gets powerbombed through a table. Corino just ignored the after match going ons and walked away as MNM were getting beat up.

Orlando Jordan W/Simon Dean VS Viscera
Dean says Jordan has started using his Simon System and the results will speak for themselves. Jordan pins Viscera after swinging neckbreaker.

WORLD TITLE QUARTER FINAL MATCH
Chris Benoit VS Bobby Roode
Benoit wins a vicious and bloody match by submission with the crippler crossface.




Feedback please.





APW news update
Elix Skipper has been signed to the APW roster.
Paul Heyman has demanded a reason for the attack by Raven on this weeks show.
Chase Stevens has suffered a concussuion and will not be at fatal.
Steve Corino has been signed to the APW roster.
MNM will this week demand an apology from Corino for what happened to Melina.
Gail Kim has announced she will have back up for her match this week against Mickie James.
Fatal week one ratings = 0.2
Fatal week two ratings = 0.4
APW are hoping the ratings will continue to increase so they can negotiate with NBC for a better time slot.
APW have still denied any financial difficutlies.



Fatal Week 3

Paul London & Brian Kendrick VS Sean Waltman & Elix Skipper
London gets the pin on Waltman after a 450 splash. After the match, Waltman, Skipper & Chavo beat down London & Kendrick for a second week. Chavo gets a chair and is about to crack Kendricks head open when Kid Kash' music plays. He runs down the ramp with a chair as Chavo, Waltman & Skipper run for it.

NUMBER ONE CONTENDER FOR NO LIMITS TITLE
Sonjay Dutt VS Chris Daniels VS Alex Shelley
Alex Shelley wins after Daniels hits the angle wings on Dutt, and Shelley hits a reverse ddt on Daniels and quickly pins Dutt. Shelley has a title match whenever he decides.

Orlando Jordan W/Simon Dean VS Maven
Dean is gloating about Jordans success last week and has issused a challenge to any guy on the roster who feels they should be in a better position. Maven comes out and Dean says he's always liked Maven but he has achieved nothing! if on the other hand your were to use my patented Simon System you would become an instant success. Maven says he'll think about it but now just wants a match. Jordan pins Maven after a top rope delayed superplex. After the match Maven says something to Dean and Dean has got a smile on his face as Maven is walking up the ramp.

Paul Hayman is in the ring with a mic: i gave Cade and Jindrak their pass but did they stop defying me? no. they didnt bother to show up for a house show and now expect their match vs AMW. well guess what guys you arent getting that match because you two are, FIRED!!!
Before leaving Paul Hayman announces that the title match will take place tonite instead of next week because AMW no longer have a qualifying match.

FALLS COUNT ANYWHERE
Gail Kim VS Mickie James W/ Christy Hemme
Gail Kim wins after Lita hits Mickie with the twist of faith on the outside. Christy then kicks Gail Kim in the face as she is getting up after the pin knocking her out cold. Christy then storms off leaving Mickie in the ring.

Gregory Helms attacks Raven backstage as he enters the arena. Helms is about to hit him with a chair when CM Punk attacks Helms from behind. Punk gets up onto a table and hits a pepsi plunge onto the concrete. Raven then hits a raven effect on the concrete causing Helms to bleed a lot.

TAG TEAM TITLE MATCH
AMW VS Team 3D W/Spike VS The Naturals
The Naturals hit the natural disaster on Brother Devon to eliminate team 3d. while celebrating Spike gets Andy Douglas' attention and draws him out of the ring in a fight. in the ring AMW hit Chase Stevens with the death sentance for the win.

MNM are in the ring and are not leaving until Steve Corino appoligies for last week. Corino comes out but is not alone. he is with Kevin Nash and Scott Hall. Corino says he will only appoligise if MNM can beat Hall and Nash next week in a no-dq match. MNM accact the challenge.

NO LIMITS TITLE MATCH
Samoa Joe VS Petie Williams
Samoa Joe is going for the muscle buster when Bobby Roode jumps up onto the apron, Joe ignore Roode and hits the muscle buster but the ref is with Roode. Benoit then charges down to the ring and fights off Roode. In the ring Williams is going for the canadian destroyer but as he jumps he cant get joe over and Williams lands hard. Joe locks in the choke hold and Williams taps out. Joe is the Champion. As Joe is celebrating Roode comes in and hits Joe with a chair before Benoit again fights him off. Joe gets up and sees benoit with the chair at his feet and attcks Benoit hitting him with three muscle busters in succession before putting him in the choke hold and wont let go. Benoit is turning purple as we go off the air.








Feedback would be appriciated.





APW news update
Kid Kash will return to action this week on fatal in a six man elimation match teaming with London and Kendrick against Waltman, Skipper and Chavo.
Alex Shelley has a no limits title match whenever he wants.
Garrison Cade and Mark Jindrak are no longer part of APW. APW wishes them all the best in the future.
Gail Kim will team up with Lita to face Mickie James and parner of her choosing.
CM Punk has been signed to the APW roster.
AMW are the first APW tag team champions.
MNM will take on Nash and Hall in a hardcore match this week on fatal.
Samoa Joe is the first no limits champion in APW.
Samoa Joe will take on Chris Benoit in a one on one no limits title match this week in fatal.
Fatal week three ratings: 0.3 V.

Bon

very good show Daren

9/10

Bahari

Me like.

You should be named..."Ceative god"

9/10

BB

its good shows god and very good start but space it out with coulour underline and also italics it mkes it cleaer to read but it is still really good shows and keep it up.

God

Super Moderator

Fatal week 4:

Gail kim & Lita Vs Mickie James & A partner of her choosing W/Christy Hemme.

Pre-match: Gail and Lita in the ring Mickie and Christy on the ramp awaiting the partner. Trinity comes in from behind and attacks Gail and Lita, Mickie runs into the ring and the match starts.

Ending: Lita goes for the top rope moonsault but Christy pulls Trinity out of the way. Lita lands hard and Trinity takes advantage with the camel clutch. Mickie and Gail are fighting on the ramp way so Lita has no help and is forced to tap out.

Post-match: Trinity keeps the camel clutch on Lita after the match, Christy gets in the ring and runs and kicks Lita in the face knocking her out cold. Gail comes back into the ring to help but is outnumbered 3 to 1. Mickie hits Gail with the mick kick, before they start to celebrate.


Sean Waltman, Chavo Geurrero Jr. and Elix Skipper Vs Paul London, Brian Kendrick and Kid Kash.

Pre-match: Kash is welcomed back with a standing ovation, While Chavo is boo'ed the entire time he was coming ot the ring.

Ending: Chavo and Skipper are trying to get rid of London and Kendrick on the outside, Waltman goes to the second rope but is distracted by a figure on the top of the rampway, this distraction allows Kash to hit a drop kick to Waltman on the second rope and then the dead level for the 1,2,3.

Post-match: The figure turns and walks away as soon as the bell rings, We never got to see his face because of the hood he was wearing. Meanwhile in the ring Chavo is complaining at Waltman and Skipper. Chavo slaps Skipper and leaves.


CM Punk W/ Raven Vs Gregory Helms

Pre-match: Helms has to be restrained by referres as he gets into the ring. Punk and Raven are whispering in the corner.

Ending: Before the match even starts Julio DeNiro attacks Helms from behind this resulted in the match being called off.

Post-match: Raven, Punk and new allie DeNiro beat down Helms with chairs until the security can finally get them out of the ring. A stratcher has been called for Helms and Helms is heading to the hospital.


Hardcore match
MNM Vs Kevin Nash and Scott Hall W/Steve Corino

Pre-match: MNM attack Hall and Nash as they were coming to the ring.

Ending: The Naturals come out to help MNM who are gettin beatin 3 on 2, but then team 3d comes out to give the edge back to Hall and Nash. The Naturals and Tean 3d fight out into the crowd, in the ring MNM hit Hall with the snapshot but Nash hits both Mercury and Nitro with a baseball bat. Nash hits the jacknife on Nitro and gets the 3.

Post-match: Corino says Hall and Nash have now earned something AMW didnt, Corino demands a tag team title match next week on Fatal. Paul Heyman says they arent the number one contenders and will have to beat the Naturals next week to get the title match at APWs first ever ppv Disinterogation in two weeks time.


Orlando Jordan and Maven W/Simon Dean Vs Anybody

Pre-match: Dean says bhe is so confident in his team that they are issuing an open challenge to any team on the roster. AJ Styles and Shelton Benjamin accept the challenge.

Ending: Dean has been ejicted from the ring side area for interfering in the match. Benjamin hits a flying cross body to both opponents AJ then hits a standing shooting star press to Maven and goes for the pin 1,2, kickout. Benjamin picks up Jordan, AJ picks up maven. Benjamin goes for the t-bone, Joddan reverses into a small package, while at the same time AJ was doing the styles clash on Maven and didnt notice, Jordan gets 1,2,3. A major upset on Fatal this week.

Post-match: Maven and Jordan celebrate all the way to the back while Styles and Benjamin are shell shoked in the ring.


No Limits title
Samoa Joe Vs Chris Benoit

Pre-match: Joe is taunting Benoit and saying he was gonna tap out again tonite. Benoit Staring a hole through joe the whole time.

Ending: Joe goes for the muscle buster after 20 minutes of hard hitting action, Hes got Benoit up but Benoit slips down the back of Joe and locks in the Crossface, Joe is in the center of the ring, Hes about to tap, when, the bell rings. Benoit looks confused, Joe looks in pain but also pissed. the ring announcer announces that the time had expired and the match was a draw!

Post-match: Joe attacks Benoit with a running knee to the lower back, Joe hits the muscle buster and locks in the choke as we go off the air.


Feedback?

God

Super Moderator

APW news update:
#Trinity has been signed to the APW roster.
#Who was the figure seen at the end of the six man tag match? Will he appear again this week? Or will he keep it low key?
#Julio DeNiro has been signed to the APW roster.
#Gregory Helms will not be at Fatal this week but does have a match vs Raven at Disinterogation.
#Kevin Nash and Scott Hall will face the Naturals this week on Fatal to decide the number one contenders for AMWs Tag Team titles.
#Shelton Benjamin will be looking to avenge his tag team loss on Fatal last week when he faces Orlando Jordan this week.
#Samoa Joe keep the gold via draw last week on Fatal. How will his opponent Chris Benoit take this news? Find out on Fatal this week.
#An anonoumous bidder has put in an offer to purchase APW. It is unknown how much the bid is for and weather APW managment will accept it or not.
#Fatal week 4 ratings: 0.4 ^

King TE

8/10 for that week.

God

Super Moderator

Fatal week 5

AMW vs MNM

Pre-Match: MNM seen AMW taunting and making fun of the injury to Melina and this match was made as a result. MNM immediatly attack AMW before the match and have to be dragged off.

Ending: Harris goes for the catatonic then Melina runs down to the ring and gets up on the apron. Storm hits Melina with a superkick sending her into the guardrail. Nitro carries Melina to the back forgetting all about the match. Mercury goes for a running drop kick but AMW move and hit a double superkick, then the death sentance for the pin 1,2,3.

Post-Match: AMW use the handcuffs on Mercury to hold him in the corner, then hit him with the beer bottle.


Orlando Jordan W/ Simon Dean & Maven vs Shelton Benjamin W/ AJ Styles

Pre-Match: Dean is taunting Benjamin and Styles over what happened last week: "If you guys had the sense to use my patented simon system you wouldent have lost last week, but since you two idiots hav...." AJ and Benjamin attack Jordan and Maven

Ending: Maven and Styles fight to the back, Dean tries to take advantage by attacking Benjamin but gets a dragon whip for his efforts. Benjamin turns around to Jordan coming off the second rope with an axe handle smash, Benjamin blocks and hits a T-Bone suplex, 1,2,3.

Post-Match: Dean is disbelief as Benjamin is celebrating in the ring.


Christy Hemme, Mickie James and Trinity are in the ring and are gloating over the victory last week. Lita and Gail Kim come out and challange the trio to a three on two handicap no-dq match at Disinterogatin! Christy Hemme accepts and promoises to kick both their heads off.


Julio DeNiro vs Hardcore Holly

Pre-Match: Holly said Raven, CM Punk and Julio were nothing but bullies and wouldent have the guts to take on someone face to face.

Ending: Holly hits the alabamaslam and goes for the pin 1,2... and holly picks up DeNiro and says not yet. He sets up DeNiro for another alabamaslam and says this is for Helms. He picks up DeNiro but DeNiro slides down his back and rolls up Holly, grabs the tights 1,2,3.

Post-Match: Raven, DeNiro and CM Punk beat down Holly on the outside leaving him in a pool of blood.

Kevin Nash and Scott Hall W/ Steve Corino vs The Naturals

Pre-Match: Corino is complaining about his new team having to 'earn' a title match when they are cleary the most deserving on the roster.

Ending: Nash hits a Jacknife powerbomb on Stevens but gets cocky and throws him out of the ring, then over the guard rail. Hall hits a Razors Edge on Douglas as Nash looks back before stepping over the guard rail after Stevens. Hall is taunting Douglas so Corino gets up on the apron to complain at him, when Team 3D run in behind Hall, Hall turns and gets a 3D, Douglas is pulled over, Corino is pulled off the apron by Spike as Douglas and gets the pin 1,2,3.

Post-Match: Nash comes back and cleans house with a steel chair, Corino takes the chair and hits Douglas with it who is already knocked out. Corino then smashs the chair off the head of Nash Knocking him out, Hall then recieves the old school express on the out side of the ring. Nash then gets a 3D through a table before Team 3D and Corino celebrate in the ring.


Waltman, Geurrero and Skipper are in the ring and demand that whoever cost them the match last week show their face. The misterious figure comes out on stage but just stands their while Geurrero shouts at him. After a few minutes the figure turns and walks away.

Chris Benoit vs Rhino

Pre-Match: An irate Benoit is in the ring and demands a match against Joe again this week but Paul Heyman has other ideas. He says the match will take place at Disinterogation and not a day sooner. So tonite Benoit will take on Rhino as a 'warm up' match.

Ending: Benoit locks in the crossface after a failed Gore attempt by Rhino. Rhino looks about to tap when Joe appears at the top of the ramp. Benoit breaks the hold and stares a hole through Joe, and geusters that he wants the title. Joe tells Benoit to turn around, and is met by a charging Rhino, Benoit blocks and locks in the crossface again, this time in the centre of the ring. Joe has run to the ring and now hits benoit in the back of the head with the title belt. Benoit wins by dq.

Post-Match. Joe continues with stiff kicks to Benoit before picking him up slapping him, the impact sends Benoit backwards and Rhino hits him with a Gore. Joe and Rhino shake hands as we go off the air.

TheLastJoECool

Fatal Week 5 Review:

Skipping my notes.

Spelling/Grammar: Saw a couple of mistakes. – 8/10

Matches: 5/10

Length: 1 and a half pages is extremely short. Write out your promos, it will take up more space and be more interesting. – 2/10

Entertainment: 6/10

Realism: A lot of this I do not see happening. 5/10

Overall: There is a lot of room for improvement. Use colors and other effects to make your writing look and feel better. Ask someone talented in GFX to make you some banners, buttons or splashes to give your BTB a face. – 52/100

Be sure to review back. ;)

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God

Super Moderator

APW news update:
Mercury is set to defy doctors orders and compete this week in a tag ream rematch against MNM.
AJ Styles will face Maven this week on Fatal. Can he repeat what Benjamin did last week or will the Simon System prevail?
Gregory Helms is expected back at Fatal this week after his minor concussion.
The Naturals are the umber one contnders for the tag titles at Disinterogation.
Rhino and Samoa Joe will take on Chris Benoit and a pertner of his choosing this week on Fatal.
Fatal week 5 ratings: 0.4=


Disinterogation matches so far
Samoa Joe vs Chris Benoit for the No Limits Title
AMW vs The Naturals for the tag titles
Rhino vs AJ Styles in the World title tounament
Christy Hemme, Mickie James and Trinity vs Gail Kim and Lita in a no dq match