jaedon97

This is by TheBulldog(ECW) and me(smackdown)

ECW Roster:
Champion-Goldust
Christian
Courtney Taylor
DJ Gabriel
Ezekiel Jackson
Gregory Helms
Katie Lee Burchill
Paul Burchil
Rosa Mendes
Savvanah
Sheamus
Shelton Benjamin
Hurricane
Tommy Dreamer
Tyler Reks
Vladimir Kozlov
Yoshi Tatsu
Zack Ryder

Smacckdown Roster:
World Heavyweight: UnderTaker
Interconinental
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olph Ziggler
Womans: Michelle McCool
Batista
Beth Phoenix
Charlie Haas
Chris Jericho
CM Punk
Curt Hawkins
David Hart Smith
Drew McIntrye
Edge
Finlay
Jimmy Wang Yang
John Morrison
JTG
Kane
Kung Fu Naki
Layla
Maria
Matt Hardy
Mickie James
Mike Knox
Natalya
R-Truth
Rey Mysterio
Shad
Slam Masta J
The Great Khali
Tyson Kidd

PPV's

Backlash
Judgement Day
Extreme Rules
The Bash
Night of Champions
SummerSlam
Breaking Point
Hell in A Cell
Bragging Rights
Survivor Series
TLC
Royal Rumble
Elimination Chamber
WrestleMania

PPV's will all be after 4 shows from each brand.

Goldberg

just a question what period of time are you starting from? im guisisng its 2009 but how do you explain the goldust and Ziggler title wins?

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jaedon97

were starting right after the next wrestlemania.

Sir Nicky Talent

I highly doubt Goldust would be the head of a young, developing brand. This really isn't drawing me in.

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TheBulldog

The night opens up in Sioux City, South dakota and a battle royal for the number one contender spot is about to begin.

ChristianvsDJ GabrielvsEzekiel JacksonvsGregory HelmsvsPaul Burchillvs Sheamus vs Shelton Benjamin vs Hurricane vs Tommy Dreamer vs Vladimir Kozlov vs Zack Ryder.

The match opens up with everyone targetting anyone. Sheamus is quickly rolled up by Christian.

Sheamus is out! :41 seconds

The match continues a right hand from Ezekiel sends Ryder to the floor!
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thr-
Nearly a three, but Ryder is barely able to kick out. AS soon as Ryder gets up, he is immediantly assualted by Ezekiel, and thrown into Vladimir who gives him a big boot.

Ryder is out! 1:30

Dreamer and Burchill are battling it out on the top turnbuckle! Low blow by Ezekiel to Gregory!
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2
thr-
nearly a pinfall but gregory is up. As the turn buckle battle continues, Dreamer does a belly to belly suplex against Burchill!
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kick out at two. As dreamer gets off Burchill, he lands right into Sheltons finishing maneuver!

Dreamer is out! 5:15

They take a commericial break.

As it comes back in, 2:31 has passed, and DJ Gabriel is out.

The two giants are beating on eachother, the beatings last for 3 minutes before they are both rolled up! Ezuquiel by Shelton, Vladimir by Christian.
Vladimir kicks out, Ezequil doesn't.

Ezequiel Jackson is out! 11:12

A long time passes, as no one gets the advantage until Shelton and Christian team up on Kozlov.

Kozlov is out! 14:58

They take a commercial break.

As we come back, we find out DJ Gabriel has been eliminated by Christian.

The camer zooms into a fight between Burchil and the hurricane, Burchill does a low blow, dq!

Burchil is out 21:10!

The announcers go on and on about who will win the match, as they take a commercial break.

As we come back, your shown how Christian rolled up helms and Shelton

Christian and then Hurricane fight for about 15 minutes, until the Hurricane does a Hurricanrana, Hurricane wins.

After the match Goldust comes out and says " So Im fighting Hurricane in a ladder match for my title? To easy.

TheBulldog

Do you really think goldust will stay champion that long?

Goldberg

ur show seemed a bit short to be honest i know ECW Is a 1 hour show but only one match isnt really long enough and i dont think that Goldust would say that The Hurricane was two easy but you will improve

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iamthedestroyer

ECW was bad. I understand that every once and a while typos slip through, but especially if you're doing a BTB with your partner there is no excuse to not have it proof read to the point where everything is grammatically correct and even the wrestlers names are right. If it gives people a headache to just read your shows you could have the best creative direction possible, and you would still lose your viewers since nobody wants to read something that is that much of a headache.

The show seemed a bit bare with one battle royal. I was under the assumption that Goldust would be a face ala real life, but he comes out and says something very heelish. In which case I'll assume he is a heel now, but I'm still slightly confused.

I don't like the idea of doing a Ladder Match with absolutely no feud behind it. Ladder Matches are typically reserved for blow off matches, so it hurts the heat the match attracts if you just throw it out there for anything. Goldust saying beating Hurricane would be too easy also doesn't entice me to watch at all, since for the most part Hurricane is a lower carder IRL so if the guy wearing the belt (Goldust) says it'll be an easy win it makes it harder to believe Hurricane will win and thus makes me less likely to care about what now appears to be a one sided match.

Try to put more time into proof reading your final product and establishing heels and faces. The number one contenders match was nice in theory, but Goldust's confusing heelish stance where he buried The Hurricane as a challenger ruined the progress that that match would have made in putting the Hurricane over.