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Backstory:Peter Humphrey Has Brought out half on Tna and has gone into partnership with Dixie carter but Peter Humphrey will be active on Tv and will be at Every show Managing Backstage and in the Ring As A Gm.

Tv shows

Impact:90 minute Show
Explosion:30 Minute Pre Show To each Impact

Tna Staff

Owner's:Peter Humphrey And Dixie Carter
Colour commentaterson West And Mike Tenay
Ring Annoucer:Jermey Borash
Backstage Interviewers:Shane Douglas

Tna Roster

Upper Carders;
Jeff jarrett
Sting
Christian Cage
Rhino

Mid-Carders;
Monty Brown
Jeff Hardy
Raven
Ron Killings
Charlie Haas

X-Division;
Samoa Joe
Aj Styles
"Fallen Angel" Christopher Daniels
Shannon Moore
The Amazing Red
Chris Sabin
Matt Bently

Tag Teams And Stables;
The naturals
AMW
Team 3d
The James Gang
LAX

PPV's;
January:Final Resolution
Febuary:Against All Odds
Marchestination X
April:Lockdown
May:Hard Justice
June:Slamiverssy
July:No Surrender
August:Sacrifice
September:Unbreakable
October:Bound For Glory
November:Genisis
December:Turning Point

I will be starting from after Final Resolution and here are the results

Double J Beat Sting To Retain The Nwa Heaveyweight Title

Matt Bentley Beat Christopher Daniels To Become number 1 Cotender for the X divison Title.

Samoa Joe Beat Aj Styles To Win the X divison Title

Christian Cage and Jeff Hardy beat Monty Brown And Rhino

Team 3D won the Tag Titles in a Tag Team Tormoil Match

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We seee the history of tna on the Screens of the Impact zone and it Just comes up with the words. "A New Era" and we then cut to Package of what happened Last night At Final Resolution When Double J Beat Sting for the title.We then Cut to the crowd and then go to Ringside Where Don West and Mike Tenay Are standing By.

Mike Tenay:Ladies and gentleman welcome to Tna Impact here on Spike TV and what A ppv it was Last Sunday and we heard in the week That Dixie Carter has sold Part Of tna to Peter Humphrey Singalling A new era.In Tna and also at the ppv Double J Beat Sting to Retain His title.

Don West:yes that is right a lot happened and also Samoa Joe won the X Division title off Aj Styles At Final Resolution and will be here tonight at Impact and will compete against Jeff hardy

Mike Tenay:First lets go to the ring where Jeremy is standing by.

Borash:Ladies and Gentleman please welcome making his way to the ring for this following match he is the Former x Division Champion the Phenomenal Aj Styles.

Styles appears on the stage With the Crowd chanting "aj aj aj" and he starts walking down the ramp towards the ring and he walks around the ring and jumps on to the annouce Table and poses then jumps off and rolls into the ring and he gets ready to take on the amazing Red.

Borash:Now would you please welcome he weighs in at around 150 lb's he is the former X Division champion,Ladies and Gentleman he is amazing he is the Amazing Red.

Amazing red makes his way into the ring and he hops into the ring.He stares down Styles and goes to all the four turnbuckles and poses then jumps down and gives Aj another hard stare and gets ready to Start off.

Match 1:Aj Styles v The Amazing Red

Finish:Aj styles is in control and he throws Red out of the ring via the Middle Ropes.Styles then poses to the crowd and he does a corkscrew dive over the top rope Right onto Red and he goes crashing into the announce table himself.He gets up at the count of 6 and he rolls into the ring and composes as Red struggles in at the count Of 8.Both men are down and start to struggle to their feet and as they get up they trade punch for punch.Styles then gets the upper Hand and then he hits a super roundhouse Kick and then a standing Sault and goes for The Pin.
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Red gets a arm up and Styles then gets to his feet and pulls up Red by the hair and as he goes for the forearm Amazing ducks then hits a dropkick and as Styles gets to his feet Red hits him with a spinning Wheel Kick And then a couple of arm drags and as the two men then come face to face they both look at the crowd who are chanting "TNA,TNA,TNA" And they then start to look at each other and go in for the lockup.Styles gets him in a quick headlock then pushes hi against the ropes then jumps as Red comes back and as red comes back he ducks but Red just stands and hits A Right uppercut and then a knee buster.Styles falls to the mat and Red just cockingly looks at the crowd and he covers.
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Styles kicks out at the count of two and Red gets up and he picks up styles by the shirt and then whips him into the corner but And as Red runs at him Styles moves and As red goes bashing into the turnbuckle Styles waits and when Red turns Around he hits him with a snap suplex and he goes to the Top Rope.He is perched Up Top And waits then dives off and hits the 450 splash and covers.
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Winner:Aj Styles

After the match Styles celebrates as red exits up the ramp And he looks pretty Upset.Styles then gets on the Mic.

Styles:i will make it short,Joe Watch out because i am coming for MY X Division title and that is a fact so look out behind you because when you are not looking i will be there.

Styles walks up the ramp and he signals that he wants his title back and the crown start chanting "styles styles styles" as we go back to Don west and Mike Tenay at Ringside.

Mike Tenay:What a match and a Great statement from Styles right there.

Don West:It Sure was and i do not think that it is the last we have heard of aj and Samoa Joe fued and there will be more to come and I'm sure of that fact,The next few weeks will be really Interesting.

Borash:Ladies and Gentleman please welcome making their way to the ring they are the new NWA Tag Team Champion's please welcome to the ring they are Team 3D.

Team 3D make their way to the Ring and they hold both of their tag team tiles on their shoulders and look at each other and then they look out onto the crowd and they just nod their heads and make their way down the ramp.Both of them roll into the ring and they pose for the crowd and get ready for this next Match.

Borash:Ladies and gentleman please welcome making their way to the ring they are thet team of the naturals.

The Natarules make their way to the ring to a loud chorus of boos from the crowd inside the impact zone and they make their way down the ramp mouthing off to the Crowd and they then get into the ring and then go to the turnbuckles and pose and give a hard stare To Team D As they get Ready to start this tag Team match Here On Impact.

Match 2,The Naturals v Team 3D

Finish:The naturals are in control isolating Brother Ray from his partner and chase tags in Andy Douglas and they come in and as Davon trys to come in the ref goes to team 3ds corner and while he does that the naturals double team and do a double team suplex and then a double elbow and chase exits to the ring apron.Andy then delivers a punch to the face of Ray and then knees him in the face and hits a atomic drop.
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Chase comes in after the kick out and he knocks down Dvon from the apron and he goes for a double backdrop and they both land it and they celebrate as Andy goes to the outside to beat Up Dvon.Chase then snapmares Ray and then picks him up and hits a ddt and Chase goes to the top rope,Dvon tries to get in but Andy pulls him back out and the flying elbow from Chase and he covers.
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Winners:The Naturals

After the match Homicide came in and beat Down Rey before dvon came in and scared off Him but then Konnan and Matche came out and attacked team 3D and they then ran to the back.

Mike Tenay:Wow why the hell did lax come out and Attack Team 3D.

Don West:i Dont know why they did it Mike.

Backstage:Rhino is backstage in the locker room getting ready for his upcoming Match against Monty Brown When Cage Enters.

Cage:listen Rhino we need to talk.Look i really respect you and i will keep this short.I understand that you Want the World Title back but i didn't come to TNA to just be a Mid carder like i was in the wwe and i want to win the Title Too.

Rhino:Listen i know what you are saying dude i know that the wwe screwed you and they are doing that to me here in tna but let me make one thing clear.weather its you my mate or double J i Will be winning the title.

Cage:i understand that but i will let you know one thing that i will be the champion because Ive not come to Tna to be a mid carder i have come to be the worl Champion because that is how i roll.

Cage leaves the room as Rhino looks a bit angry at Cage and the screen fades to black.

Borash:Ladies and gentleman please welcome he is the Amazing Enigma please welcome he is Jeff Hardy.

Hardy comes out onto the ramp and he does his usually entrance and crawls down the ramp and he gets to ringside and he jumps into the ring and just waits for the Samoan Submission Machine to enter for this Match.

Borash:and now please welcome he beat Aj Styles to become the X division Champion he is the Samoan Submission Machine He is Samoa Joe.

Joe makes his way to the ring holding the title that he won last night at Final Resolution Against Styles and he walks down the ramp and then around the ring and he swears at a fan as he enters the ring.He then gives a hard stare To Hardy as he gets ready to start.

Match 3,Samoa Joe v Jeff Hardy

Finish:Samoa Joe whips Hardy into the ropes and when he comes back he hits a knee in the Stomach and Hardy Doubles over in extreme pain.Joe then grabs him by the hair and he then Throws him under the ropes and to the outside.Samoa then jumps over the top rope onto Hardy.After a count of 7 he rolls into the Ring and Hardy joins him at the count Of 9.Samoa gets up and hits a Elbow and then picks him up and rolls him into a Small Package.
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Only a one as Hardy gets out of it.They both get up together and they trade Blow for Blow Until hardy gets the upper hand and he goes for the spinning wheel But Joe ducks and he hits the ref and Joe gets in a low Blow and goes for the cover.But the ref is still down so he goes to the Outside and picks up a chair and throws it into the ring.He then climbs in and hits hardy in bewteen the eyes and slides to the chair out of the ring as the ref stirs.Samoa Joe then pulls hardy to the corner and place him onthe top and than sets him up and he lands the Muscle Buster and covers.
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Winner:The X Division Champion,Samoa Joe

After the match Matt bentley comes out to the ringside and he looks at Joe and then aj comes to the ramp and they all stare at each other As we go to the commentators At ringside.

Don West:Looks like Bentley is not the only one wanting a shot At the Title.

Mike Tenay:Yes and i think that Joe can be sure that it will not be a easy few weeks going into Against all odds and i think in my poinon that he is in trouble in this whole Situation.

Don West:Now lets go to the ring where we are ready for Our Main Event and lets go to Jeremy Borash.

Borash:Please welcome making his way to the ring he is the alpha male he is Monty Brown.

Brown makes his way to the ring in his usual Manner and he walks down the ramp and he rolls into the ring and he mouths off to the crowd a bit who chant "Monty sucks" he gets annoyed and shouts at them to shut up as we wait for Rhino To Enter the Impact Zone

Borash:And now he is making his way to the ring and he is from the mean Streets and he is the Mean Machine he is Rhino.

Rhino makes his way to the ring and he does not take his eyes of The Alpha Male and he gets to the ring and he walks up the steel steps and Monty Exits the ring as Rhino gets in and plays to the crowd As Monty Enters the ring once again.

Match 4,Rhino v Monty Brown

Finish:Rhino is in the corner and he is setting up Brown for the spear but as Rhino runs at him Brown moves and rhino goes crashing into the ring pole and Monty Brown looks at the crowd and points at his brain and just hits a series of elbows and he covers Rhino for the cover.
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He only gets a one and he looks at the ref and then gets up and pulls Rhino up who trys to mount a offense but Brown just gives him a uppercut and a snap Suplex and Rhino holds his back as Brown plays to the crowd.Brown then pulls up Rhino by the hair and pushes him into the ropes and then hits him with a back elbow smash.Monty then picks him up again but Rhino blocks the punch and hits a desperate fall away slam and both men are down.Rhino gets up at the count of 9 and he goes to pick up Brown but the lights go out in the Impact Zone.When the lights come on Rhino looks confused but goes to Borwn who hits him with a punch then rolls him up for the cover.
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Winner:Monty Brown

After the match the lights go off again and when they come on we see sting and he hits Rhino with the Baseball bat and then as if nothing happens he leaves the ring and he Exits through the crowd and disappears out of Sight.

Mike Tenay:what the hell just happened.Sting just attacked Rhino and he just left without a word,why did he do that to Rhino and what possessed Him to do that sort of thing.

Don West:i dint know what the hell happened but all i know is that Rhino just got cost a match and i am sure that he will have something to say about this next week but i think the main question is .why did sting do it?

Mike Tenay: i dont know but i hope that we will find out next week here on Impact when a lot of questions Will have to be answered.But once again thanks for joining us on a wild night in the Impact Zone and be sure to tune in to us Next Week.

Impact goes off the air with the scene of Rhino getting attend to by th emts and getting helped to the back with the tna Crowd chanting his name as the camera fades to Black.

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Lenght: Average match lenght was only two paragraphs, but still good enough, just make the matches a bit longer. 7/10
Realism: I like the Sting part, if he is going heel as i suspect. Thats the only major thing i dont see happening because he loves to be cheered and wouldent work well as a heel. 9/10
Spelling/Grammer: You have deffinatly improved in spelling just use more full stops and commas. As it is your sentances just run and run. 8/10
Entertainment: A lot of it was entertaining so just keep doing your own ideas and you will be fine. 8/10
Matches: Only four matches in an hour and a half show? You need more than that. But the matches you did were good matches and had good ideas. 6/10
Overall: 76/100 its pretty good and hopefully you'll stick with this one. One question though, who is Peter Humphrey?

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I liked the show you have posted... but that is one small roster for TNA

your missing Petey Williams and Sonjay, Hoyt, Diamonds in the Rough, Aries, Strong, Shelley, Lethal.... unless your going for mainstream guys.. then i understand

none the less... good show

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undertand what you are saying buti feel for a Show as short it is good and also dont rule out signings i know what i am doing.