| Lenght: Average match lenght was only two paragraphs, but still good enough, just make the matches a bit longer. 7/10
Realism: I like the Sting part, if he is going heel as i suspect. Thats the only major thing i dont see happening because he loves to be cheered and wouldent work well as a heel. 9/10
Spelling/Grammer: You have deffinatly improved in spelling just use more full stops and commas. As it is your sentances just run and run. 8/10
Entertainment: A lot of it was entertaining so just keep doing your own ideas and you will be fine. 8/10
Matches: Only four matches in an hour and a half show? You need more than that. But the matches you did were good matches and had good ideas. 6/10
Overall: 76/100 its pretty good and hopefully you'll stick with this one. One question though, who is Peter Humphrey? |