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Points: 25,309, Level: 69 | | Re: The New Legacy of ECW Quote:
Originally Posted by Jay M. Punkster ECW : The New Legacy, episode 2
The show begin showing a package of last weeks action with Jeff Hardy getting beat down by CM Punk, Paul Burchill and Jamie Noble. The package ends with the image of all 3 men standing over Hardy with Punk holding the championship and Noble holding The Money in the Bank Briefcase. Camera fades to black and when it comes back on Jeff Hardy is in his locker room looking at it on the TV screen.
Crowd Cheer Jeff begins to talk while looking at the screen. Jeff : ‘’Revenge is coming’’ Someone begins to speak off camera ‘’ Jeff with my help, you get revenge but you get that back as well Matt Hardy walks over to him Crowd Cheer Matt “ The have a cruel twist of faith coming there way. ‘’ ECW opening video begins to play | A good opener but waaaay too short for the people involved. Quote: Shelton Benjamin vs. Shannon Moore Vs.
Shannon Moore makes his way to the ring first The Reject comes running through the crowd. A new entrance for Moore. Moore climbs into the ring as he waits for his opponent. Shelton’s music hits and makes his way down the ramp he comes to the apron and jumps up showing his agility and his arrogance as he takes off he’s sun glasses and throws them at Moore. Shelton smiles as he climbs up top rope. Shelton jumps down and straight away Moore goes on the attack. Moore starts to strike at Benjamin but Shelton rises a knee to The Rejects gut winding him and causing him to fall to the ground. Shelton hits a few strike to Shannon Moore before he lifts him up and whips him into the corner. Shelton runs, Moore moves and Benjamin jumps up top before crashing into the corner.
Crowd pop.
| Quote: Moore turns around expecting to see Benjamin hurt in the corner, But he instead witness Shelton diving of top with a missile dropkick. Moore gets taking out as Benjamin nips up. Benjamin lifts Moore up in a suplex and crashes him to the mat. Benjamin refuses to cover, he moves away from the body and waits for Moore to get to he’s feet, Moore does and Shelton runs and hits a massive Yakuza kick turning The Reject inside out. Joey Styles : ‘’ Ohh my god!!! ‘’ Shelton signals for the end as he lifts Moore up he puts him in the position for the T-Bone Suplex , just then a masked wrestler runs and jumps on the apron distracting Benjamin , Benjamin tries to hit the masked wrestler but he jumps back down from the apron just in time, Then Shannon Moore runs and schoolboys Benjamin 1,,,,2,,,, kick out. The masked wrestler cant believe he kicked out. Moore starts to kick at Benjamin confused with the situation as well. He lifts Benjamin up and whips him into the ropes. Moore runs with a clothesline but Benjamin ducks , Moore turns around into Shelton and ‘Bang!! The T-Bone Suplex by Benjamin. He covers ,1,,,,2,,,3,,, The masked wrestler is angry that his plan didn’t work as he jumps over the crowd rail while Benjamin calls him into the ring. |
A really good squash match for Benjamin. The result was never in doubt but having it go on for a bit was a good idea. For the masked man, the first person i thought of was Charlie Haas. Quote: |
Camera goes to the back where Armando Estrada and CM Punk are talking.
| Quote: Armando : ‘’ Tonight Punk , Jeff Hardy and his brother Matt get a taste of extreme because Paul Burchill and Jamie Noble are going to take them on in an Extreme rules tornado tag match. CM Punk “ Good so I get the night off ? ‘’ Armando: ‘’ Not exactly because that match needs a special guest referee and im looking at him.’’ Punk smiles. CM Punk ‘’ Evan better, | Another short promo that didnt really help anyone. Punk is looking like a coward by asking if he has the night off. He's the champ who should have a big ego. He should insist he has it off. Quote: Match No.2 Triple Threat Match Chief Morley vs. Super Crazy vs. Nunzio  VS.  VS. 
Super Crazy and Nunzio are in the ring when we come back from the break.
Val Venis’s music goes off as he comes out to the stage dressed ina different attire than usual. He has a mic and begins to speak. ‘’ You people are looking at two sorry pieces of trash in that ring, we have an Italian and a Mexican in an American ring. Now before I go down there and smack them two foreign pieces of scum I just want to introduce myself , Ladies and Gents your looking at Mr. Estrada’s Chief of Staff , I am Chief Morley !!! and he sent me out here to make sure all you fans are entertained in the best way. So as my first action we have two high flyers in the ring well im going to make this match have a special stipulation if either one of you climb to the top ropes you will be disqualified instantly. Thank you !!
He throws the mic down and walks to the ring.
He walks up the steps and gets inside, The ref calls for the bell as all 3 circle each other. Morley tells Super Crazy to look at Nunzio and when he does Morley smashes Crazy in the face with a vicious elbow strike . Crazy falls down then Morley goes for Nunzio, He goes for a clothesline but the Italian ducks it and then starts to chop at Morley, Morley pokes him in the eye and then whips him into the corner. Nunzio is about to climb top rope but remembers the rule made and doesn’t. The momentary distraction allows Chief to run in and hit a double knee to the gut of Nunzio. Super Crazy starts to strike at Morley he hits a dropkick knocking Morley out of the ring. Crazy waits for Morley to get up and then runs and dives through the ropes and takes him out. Crowd pop. Nunzio gets to hes feet and looks at both men brawling. He rusn and jumps over the top rope clearing it with ease . He goes crashing into both men and all three are down. Tazz : He didn’t touch the top rope so I guess he doesn’t brake the rule. Joey Styles : What a way to break the system Tazz : Your damn right partner All three men start to punch at each other Morley whips Nunzio into the ring and when the ref is distracted he hits Super Crazy with a low blow and then a ddt on the mat.
Morley slides into the ring where Nunzio is in pain. Morley starts to kick Nunzio in the head. Morley lifts him up and puts him right back down with a scoop slam, He lifts him up again and pulls him into a short arm clothesline. Morley lifts him up for the third time but this time Nunzio hits a pair of punches to the chest and then a drop kick causing Morley to fall back. Nunzio screams as he goes to climb up top rope but he cant, He climbs on the middle rope as he thinks to go to the top. This momentary pause allows Morley to grab his legs and pull him off causing Nunzio to crash hard. Nunzio holds he neck and back as he lays in pain. Morley covers,1,,2,,,3,,, ‘’ The winner of the match Chief Morley !!!’’ Morley stands over Nunzio before he looks at the top rope. Nunzio is being checked on by the refs when Morley climbs to the top something Nunzio or Super Crazy wasn’t allowed do, He jumps and hits the Money Shot onto Nunzio crushing him and causing more damage. Morley smiles as the show goes to a break. |
How can you be DQed in a regualat three way match? If it was elimination fine, but it was one fall. Quote: The show comes back and Lance Cade is in the back with Ashley whos the new backstage announcer. Ashley : ‘’ Lance everyone is talking about your debut last week when you got disqualified against Kofi Kingston, do you have anything to say ? Cade ; “ The world saw the successful debut of The Dark Horse what do you want me to say ? Blondie you and the rest of the world will witness the start of my journey to the top if ECW tonight when I win my match. And get one step closer to the Television championship. Lance Cade walks off and Ashley is standing there, Kofi Kingston walks over to her.
He smiles Kofi : ‘’ Looks like there’s going to be trouble in paradise , he laughs as the camera fades. | I dont like Ashley as an interviewer, mainly because she has no charisma to pull it off. Quote: ‘’The Dark Horse’’ Lance Cade vs. Stevie Richards VS. | Quote: Richards is already in the ring when Lance Cades music goes off. He walks down the ramp and into the ring as him and Richards look at each other from each side of the ring. The ref calls for the bell when both men tie up , Cade turns to Stevie’s back and clubs him into the spine. Cade starts to kick at Stevie before he lifts him up and whips him into the ropes, Cade puts his head down and is hit in the face with a boot, Stevie starts to punch and chop at Cade before he hits a dropkick and covers ,1,2, kick out. Stevie lifts Cade up and hits a snap suplex, he locks in a ground headlock as Cade tries to reach a rope break, But Stevie pulls him back into the middle of the ring. Stevie gets to his feet and climbs the top waiting for Cade to get to his feet. Cade does and Stevie jumps off only to be caught in a spine buster. Cade covers 1,2,3 ding, ding…
Cade is victorious and goes through to the next round of the TV Championship. Just then Kofi’s Kingston’s music goes and Cade is standing looking up at him, Kofi gets on the mic, Kofi : ‘’ Good victory Lance ,your showing a lot , you finally got yourself a win. Because remember I beat ya last week . But your night isn’t over, you see I have brothers all around the world and one of them is here tonight , his right behind you. And as I said looks like there’s trouble in paradise , Cade turns around and the debuting Ron’’ The Truth ‘’ Killings runs over and hits a spinning forearm smash, Cade falls down and Killings runs and hits a scissors kick , Cade is down, Killings grabs the mic  Killings: ‘’ Yo, Yo, Yo !!! I’m here in ECW to tell the Truth ! cause I’m Ron’’ The Truth ‘’ Killings and the truth is I’m the next ECW champion. But first I’m going to help my brother from another mother Kofi Kingston get to the top because he deserves more than anybody. Kofi’s music goes off. Both men celebrate as the walk to the back as Cade looks on holding his head in anger. |
A nice way to debut the truth but, another squash match wasent good for the fans who have to sit there and watch it. Two squash matches already in a one hour show would have me changing the channel. Quote: Video package begins to play when we come back on. It’s the second edition of Good Times, Great Memories.
Colt Cabana is at the news desk , Cabana : “ Okay ladies and Gents and all your teens that need to get laid that are watching what your about to see is kinds strange . So if you don’t like strange things please leave the room now. Roll it !!! The video begins to show Paul Burchill getting a massage , his lying with just a towel on and the hands are going up and down the legs. We cut back to Cabana. ‘’ Okay so that’s all good his a lucky man but wait to be shocked. Video shows again the camera starts to zoom back and the face of the person giving the rub down is reveled as his sister Katie Lee. The camera cuts back to Cabana and his getting sick in the trash can. “ I really don’t know what to say, lets just move on.” “ Next week is the debut of the greatest wrestler ever , the sexy, the power the …. A picture of Cabana smiling comes on the screen.  “ You got it right folks Cabana is debuting in the land of extreme next Tuesday so tune in next week for the live edition of Good times , Great Memories same Colt time . same Colt channel .”Video ends. |
Another good promo from Cabana. I do however think you are pushing his debut too soon. He should have been doing this for a few more weeks. Quote: CM Punks music goes off as the champion makes his way to the ring where he stands and waits for the participants. First out comes Jamie Noble who is still holding Jeff Hardy’s money in the bank briefcase. Noble gets to the ring when his partner The Ripper Paul Burchill comes out with his sister Katie Lee. She holds his hand while both make there way to the ring. Burchill and Katie look angry at what the say as the get in the ring. All four stand in the ring as The Hardy Boys music goes off . Both brothers run down to the ring and slide in, Matt starts to attack Noble, Matt clotheslines him over the ropes and to the outside. Jeff and Burchill are trading blows as well and Jeff hits a clothesline followed up by a dropkick and a scoop slam. Jeff goes for a cover but CM Punk does a slow count. Outside Matt Irish whips Noble into the rail. Noble goes crashing into it as Matt runs with another clothesline knocking him over the rail into the crowd, Matt follows him as both brawl in the crowd. Back in the ring Jeff and Paul run and hit a double clothesline booth men are down. Katie Lee slides in a steel chair. Jeff gets up first and goes for the steel chair but CM punk kicks it causing it to slide across the ring, this moment of distraction allows Burchill to grab Hardy and pull him into a backsuplex. Burchill covers ,1,2, Hardy kicks out a quick count by Punk. Noble whips Matt over the rail and back to ringside. Noble climbs over and takes a trash can lid from under the ring. He smashes Matt in the face with it as Matt falls down to the mat. Noble starts to pound on Matt and then slides back into the ring where he joins Burchill in pounding on Jeff Hardy. Both men lift him up and the drive him right back down with a double suplex. Noble covers and another quick count, 1,2, kick out. Matt comes sliding into the ring with a stop sign, he levels Burchill knocking him down. Noble turns around and holds his face to try and block the shot , Matt throws the sign to Jeff and he pulls Noble around and smashes him in the face. Jeff looks at CM punk, he goes to swing at Punk but Punk jumps out of the ring. Jeff and Matt whip Burchill into the corner and the do the poetry in motion Jeff goes flying through the air smashing into Burchill. The do the same on Noble as Punk looks on. Katie Lee gets caught as well and she receives one . Jeff and Matt slide out of the ring as both go to get stuff from under the ring. Matt pulls out a table ad he slides it into the ring. Jeff pulls out a ladder and he pushes it into the ring as well. Burchill gets up and Matt Hardy goes for the Twist of Faith , Burchill counters and goes for a backsuplex. Matt counters again and smash he hits the Twist of Faith. Matt sets up the table and Noble runs and drives a pair of knees into Matt driving him to the outside. Noble turns around and Jeff hits Noble in the face with the steel chair. Noble falls onto the table as Jeff sets up the ladder. Jeff climbs to the top as he points out to Punk , Punk is shocked as Jeff goes crashing through Noble and the table. Jeff and Noble are out. Matt Hardy is just climbing back into the ring when Punk hits him in the back of the head with the championship knocking him out. Punk slides back into the ring as he quickly gets Burchill to cover Hardy 1,2,3… ‘’ The winner of the match the team of Jamie Noble and Paul Burchill, Punk runs out of the ring with he’s belt , He starts to walk up the ramp smiling when Jeff and Matt get to there feet. Jeff garbs a mic as eh holds his head. ‘’ You forget something Punk , I have my Briefcase again and its about time I cash it in , At one night stand it will be me and you for the ECW championship, and you wont have the laugh last that night because, there will be , this , ( he points at the Table, ) there will be this ( lifts the chair ) and this (he points at the ladder.) It will be TLC !!! Punk is shocked as he holds his belt close as Matt and Jeff smile . Burchill and Noble are down as Matt and Jeff stand over them a opposite look from last weeks show. , | A good match but it was hard to read. Your layout had been really good up until then. TLC should be good. My Ratings: Match Making: 4/10. Two squash matches. Also in your preview you say another random tag team. Unless i missed it, you didnt do it. Match Writing: 8/10. Better than last week's style. But the main event should have been aranged better. Promos: 6/10. Colt Cabana was your best again. The rest were too short to do what was needed. Spelling/Grammer: 5/10. Still a lot of mistakes & badly placed comma & periods. Flow: 8/10. Much better than just jumping to the commentators. Overall: 62%. A slight improvement. The squash matches hurt you.
On an unrealated note, you stole my plan of useing pictures during the show before i got to use it  |