Fatal Week 5 Review:
Skipping my notes.
Spelling/Grammar: Saw a couple of mistakes. –
8/10 Matches: 5/10 Length: 1 and a half pages is extremely short. Write out your promos, it will take up more space and be more interesting. –
2/10 Entertainment: 6/10 Realism: A lot of this I do not see happening.
5/10 Overall: There is a lot of room for improvement. Use colors and other effects to make your writing look and feel better. Ask someone talented in GFX to make you some banners, buttons or splashes to give your BTB a face. –
52/100
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