| Well I see you have posted your first show, and I would damn well say it is an awsome show for your first and a good way to get things going. Its always good to have a first solid show becuase then it shows you wont be boring them when reading and I am sure you will get much more looks at your work. But to get more down about the show itself, I was very impressed about the whole. But hey nothing is perfect so I would say you have a few things you could work on to improve for the next show you plan on doing. The Matches were pretty good and had some excitment and detail but I would say you should make them a big longer and bit more about the match. One thing I would also say is add comentary when the match is happening, just like they would do on WWE, I have learned keeps a up tempo to the match and doesnt bore us in any or form. Your Promos were good and was impressed how you wrote some of them. The organizing of this was pretty good for the most part but you could add some more colors to make it look more alive, and maybe a show banner. But man very nice work and I am impressed.
Show = B+
Promos/Backstage segmets = B+
Grammer and spelling = A
Organize = B
Match Structure = B
Keep me reading = B+
OVERALL = B+ |