| Re: CWA Rankings for July 1st 2009
As a grader, I can tell you Sam was pretty much dead on why I gave you a lower score than you thought you deserved. The promo dragged. I know you put a lot of time and effort into it, but you must consider the reader when you write. I was tired of reading it about halfway through.
Having said that, if you write a promo of that length that actually keeps me hanging on the next word, then that's a massively win promo. That's what we mean by quality over quality. The promo needs to be dense with substance, not just 3 pages of describing the same scene.
Again, I know you went to a lot of trouble on that promo. I'm just offering some advice on where you should focus your attention on your next one.
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