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Old 06-25-2009, 08:15 AM   #5 (permalink)
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Re: Edge

A good try considering you made this within your first 10 days, however, lay off the filters. The piece looks pretty cluttered, you've used way too many cuts, and haven't blended them either. The font doesn't suit the piece, but it's an overall good attempt. I can suggest some things though;

- Try using borders (stroke effect, ect)
- Textures (Try Deviant art)
- Stick to one, two, three at the most, main cuts
- Black = Boring - always try another color for your font
- Brushes; download some, they often help w/ the background
- Stock Photos; usually good for backgrounds
- Look at other peoples work, get some inspiration and imitate their styles

As i said, it's okay considering it was your first piece, just try some tutorials. Always start with the basics, and move on up, otherwise it gets too complicated.
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