| Re: smackdown - welcome to the good old days I'm not trying to bash you, but I'm going to give some constructive criticism. Unfortunately that's all I have, constructive criticism with very little praise at this point.
-I'd change your roster up a bit. It's a bit too stacked to the point where you've got guys who are Main Eventing in real life right now as midcarders.
-Spell check your shows, use things like font sizes, bold, italic, underline, and the quote box in order to help separate the dialogue between different people as well as the matches and the segments. It's almost impossible to read, and judging by the lack of replies so far I'm not the only one who feels that way. Fix the formatting and I guarantee you there will be a lot more interest in your product.
-You have a roster of about 40 people and only use like 6 guys on Smackdown all Main Eventers. I don't know if you do this already, but I'd plan out some long term storylines leading into each PPV so that you know which matches you want at each PPV, and then write Smackdown based around building that up. I don't understand the point of having three major title matches on Smackdown with zero buildup towards your next PPV. Try saving bigger matches for PPVs and building them up on Smackdown uses creative storylines.
Sorry if it is all fairly negative, but for the most part it's constructive and hopefully it will help improve your BTB. Good luck. |